Hazy Afterthoughts

Part One: Young Mystic:
Orianna never understood why the spirits talked to her but she always welcomed them. Fallen in love with a man who's father is hated by Orianna's father, their love denied.. Her life tainted by death and the love of the man she cannot marry drives her past her limits.
Chapter six: Nicolaus (revised)
Part Two: Luciérnaga:
After wandering alone for months Ori crosses paths with a strange man who will become her new best friend...or maybe more? Her new life in the new town far from home, in a world not her own.
Notes: Chapter six has been revised if you didn't notice the nice red letters next to it. Part One is finally finished and Part Two is in the works. A prologue is posted under the pic.
Copyrighted all to PN Luciérnaga 2000-01. All=story wise.
*****This is my story so please do not steal, reproduce or distribute it, besides what good would a *no where near half finished story about my past life* be?*****