BROKEN DREAMS
by Ann
Bachman
Starlight Writer Publications Twenty five year old Jonilee
Hughes found herself alone, penniless and desperate when she
approached Rodeo celebrity Bobby Joe Kemp for a job as his housekeeper
and nanny. She soon found herself embroiled in a frightening
situation complete with the return of a man Jonilee was sure
had left her life for good. The life of privation sapphire eyed
Jonilee has endured from childhood has left her with an iron
will and temper to match. Jonilee and Bobby Joe face danger together
before Jonilee discovers everything she had known about her family
is not as it seems.
The hidden secret found in Anne
Perry's 'Breach of Promise' and JD Robb's hard boiled Eve Dallas
give us an idea of the mystery and grit to be found in author
Bachman's BROKEN DREAMS. This gripping yarn will keep you interested
from the first page opener when Jonilee blasts rattlesnakes in
the yard at Bobby Joe's ranch right down to the last page when
she meets elderly, wealthy Mr. Fairchild.
The fright felt by Jonilee when
she must face an angry reckless figure she has thought long gone
is manifest and the anxiety driven behavior of Bobby Joe as he
seeks to discover who it is causing them such anguish is something
we can all understand. Bachman's interweaving of her love story
into the mystery is skilled and interesting. Her characters,
with the exception of Bobby Joe's son P J I found to be very
believable and well thought out. Based on my own experience with
kids; taught school, raised sons and was an adult scout leader
for more than a decade, I did find PJ's demeanor and language
to be more in line with that of a younger child. PJ is a most
likeable kid, is an integral part of the whole and I certainly
enjoyed reading about him, just wish writer Bachman had made
this youngster age eleven or twelve rather than fourteen.
BROKEN DREAMS is another in the
sizeable group, eight to date, of well written novels produced
by this South Dakota rancher. We who enjoy thrillers with a bit
of romantic twist will find BROKEN DREAMS most satisfying. BROKEN
DREAMS is a narrative that will grip you from the opening line
and will clutch you tight right on down to the last page. Very
perceptive and well recommended. |