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"Revenge"
"Revenge"

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TEASER

Chase McDonald was next in line at the local video store. It was a quarter to seven, 
and he was on his way home from the station when he decided to stop in and catch up on 
some movies. He held in his hands the films Line of Fire and To Serve and Protect. Both 
were the typical low-budget cop-action movies cranked out on a yearly basis by a small 
independent production company based in Los Angeles. Most likely, Chase expected the 
main star to be a guy who drinks, smokes and disobeys his superior's order, gets 
suspended, and only then is able to solve his case. Throw in a couple car chases, some 
hot female co-stars, and a visit to a local strip club in order to get information on a 
case, and it'd be a good evening of mild entertainment.
	The person in front him done, Chase stepped up and set his videos on the counter. 
"Good evening," the young blond girl said. Her nametag read: Susan.
	"Evening." He reached for his wallet as she took the movies and started to scan 
them.
	That's when the front door slammed open, and a man in a hockey mask came in, 
holding a shotgun and a large cloth bag. "Alright, nobody move!" he yelled, moving around 
in front of the registers.
	Customers backed away as he approached the first cashier and tossed her the bag. 
"Fill it up! Now!"
	Susan took the bag and hurried to comply. She picked up the scanner to scan the 
barcode stuck to the receipt printer that would, while opening all the register drawers 
simultaneously, trigger the silent alarm as well.
	"And stay away from the alarm barcode!" he shouted.
	She looked at him, perplexed that he would know about it, then proceeded to open 
the register manually.
	"Do you mind?" Chase asked the man. "I'm trying to check out some movies here."
	The man turned and looked at him. "What're you, stupid? I gotta gun! Shut up!"
	"You know, you look familiar."
	"What?"
	"Yeah," Chase said, pointing at the hockey mask. "Yeah, your eyes look really 
familiar. I think I've met you before."
	"Oh, yeah? Then what's my name?"
	"Jason?" Chase asked, and slugged the guy in the stomach.
	Caught off guard, the guy doubled-over and stumbled back. Chase wrenched the shotgun 
from his hands and swung it, catching him upside the head. He spun, falling into a large 
display rack full of previously-viewed videotapes. Chase set the shotgun the counter. 
"Watch this for me for a moment," he told the girl.
	The guy had managed to get to his feet and came swinging. Chase ducked the punch 
and came up behind him, grabbing his shirt collar and pulling him back, crashing him into 
another video display. As Chase walked over, he saw the guy roll onto his back and draw a 
gun. Chase's eyes widened, and he threw himself sideways as the first three bullets fired 
directly at him. The customers and employees ran for cover.
	Chase rolled into the first aisle and came up in a crouching position, drawing his 
gun. The guy stood and cut loose with round after round. Video covers and tapes were 
busted up on the shelves, torn to shreds. Chase stood and fired back over the comedy 
section, then ducked as more rounds came at him. He turned and looked up, and had to 
smile when he saw that one of the bullets had hit Pauly Shore on the cover of Son-In-Law. 
"Ha," he laughed, then turned back to the situation at hand.
	The guy was reloading his magazine when something hit his head from behind, and he 
fell to the ground, out cold. Realizing the shooting had stopped, Chase stood slowly and 
looked over the top of the comedy aisle. Susan was standing over the unconscious robber, 
holding a two-liter bottle of Pepsi in her hands. Chase smiled as he walked around the 
shelf, holstering his gun.
	"Good work," he said.
	She leaned the bottle against her shoulder. "Thanks."
	As Chase left the store minutes later when his movies, he said to himself, "And 
people think shootouts always happen in convenience stores."


ACT 1

August Brooks guided their blue detective car down the street. Chase sat in the passenger seat, 
his head back against the headrest and one arm resting on the open window. "I can't 
believe how bad that movie was. It was terrible. I bet it was written by the producer's 
three-year-old or something." 
	August just laughed. 
	"It should be a federal crime to make movies that bad. I mean, I've seen better 
acting, better story, better direction, better everything, in a commercial." 
	"Well, look on the bright side," August said. "You did get to talk to that very 
attractive redhead sitting next to you." 
	"Yeah, but did you see her father? The guy had a major attitude problem and looked 
like he could take down Schwarzenegger. I don't need that kind of stress in my life." 
His cell phone began ringing. He took it from his inside coat pocket. "Detective 
McDonald," he said, then lowered his voice. "Hi, Vanessa." 
	August glanced over, instantly curious. 
	"Sure, that sounds fine. Great. See you then. Bye." He turned the phone off. 
	"And who was that?" August asked in a playfully-intrusive tone. 
	"Someone who saw one of my new sculptures the other night at the gallery." 
	"Vanessa. Hmmm, let me guess. Tall, but not too tall. Black hair, dresses in a 
business suit, wears her hair up in a bun like some old school teacher, and carries a 
briefcase. How am I doing?" 
	Chase looked at him with a smile. "Not even close," he said. "In fact, you 
couldn't be further off. This girl is a Goddess." 
	"That good, hu?" 
	"That great," he corrected him. "She's tall, brunette, intelligent, and she's got 
the most incredible pair of--" 
	August quickly looked over with a wry smile. 
	"--eyes," he said. "You should see her, August. She's a Goddess." 
	"So what did you talk about?" 
	"Well, she's interested in medal sculpting, too. She liked my work and asked if I 
could give her some demonstrations on how to do it." 
	"Right," August said. "I'm sure all she sees in you are art demonstrations." 
	Before Chase could respond, the dispatch voice suddenly said, "1-William-7, come 
in, please." 
	Chase picked up the radio mike. "This is 1-William-7. Go ahead." 
	"There's been a 187 at Los Angeles Memorial Hospital." 
	"Got it. We're on our way." Chase put the mike up and set the light on the dash, 
turned on the siren. "What a way to start a Monday, hu?"



The detectives exited the elevator on the sixth floor and walked down the hall toward 
the Recovery Ward. Det. Richardson approached them with a spiral notepad. "Richardson," 
Chase said. "How you doing?" 
	"Hey, Chase. August. So much for a slow Monday, hu?" 
	They walked with him down the hall. "What do we got?" August asked. 
	"Well, there was a prisoner from El Toro in this morning for surgery," Richardson 
explained, going over his notes. "He was having a kidney transplant. After the operation 
he was taken back to his room. About thirty minutes later, the guard posted outside was 
found dead in the room and a window was broken. Guy was gone." 
	"We got a name?" Chase asked. 
	"Yeah, uh . . . " Richardson flipped back a couple pages in his notes. "Guy's name 
is Thomas. Ryan Thomas." 
	Chase stopped and looked at him. "Ryan Thomas?" 
	"Yeah." 
	August asked, "You knew whom?" 
	Chase looked at his partner. "I put him in prison." 
	They stepped into the room. The guard's body was on the floor, covered. August 
knelt and pulled the sheet back, examining him. "Looks like his throat was cut." 
	Chase stepped over to the shattered remains of the window. "August. Look at this." 
	He walked over. "What?" 
	Chase pointed down. "The glass is on the floor." 
	"So?" 
	"Well, if you busted out a window, wouldn't most of the glass fall outside?" 
	August caught on. "Wait a minute. You think someone busted in and helped him 
escape?" 
	"I don't know," Chase said, "but I'm not ruling anything out this soon involving 
Ryan."



Chase was leaning back in his chair, feet up on the desk, talking to August, who sat 
over at his desk. "He killed five people before he was caught," he explained. "This guy 
was vicious. He'd tie his victims' hands behind their backs with duct tape, torture 
them a bit by making small cuts with a knife before finally killing them. They didn't 
die quickly." 
	"Random killings?" 
	Chase shook his head. "I'd say so. We never uncovered a link between the victims. 
Only thing that was the same each time was the way he'd tie them up and torture them. 
Each one he killed differently. One was stabbed in the heart, another was strangled, 
one was electrocuted in a bathtub." 
	"Ouch," August said. 
	"Four months after the first killing," Chase continued, "we finally caught up with 
him. Cornered him in a hotel room, and a shootout started. He took out five good cops 
before we nailed him." 
	"I remember that now," August said. "I remember hearing about that on the news and 
around the station." 
	As they continued talking, practically every cop and detective in the room was 
focused on the long-legged, brunette beauty walking into the station. It was Vanessa 
Ford, wearing a short skirt and red short-sleeve shirt. As Chase kept talking, August 
caught sight of the gorgeous object walking towards the main area and tuned his partner 
out. When he realized August was distracted by something, Chase turned and looked. 
"Vanessa," he said, getting up. 
	"Hi, Chase. Listen, um, I had a slight change in my plans tonight, so I wanted to 
know if it was okay if we meet an hour later?" 
	Chase smiled. "Not a problem. Why didn't you call?" 
	"I just wanted to see you in person," she said. "I'll get some champagne on the way 
over, okay?" 
	"Sounds great." 
	"See you later, then." She smiled and turned, walking away. 
	As she left, August started laughing. "I think she wants to see more than your 
sculptures, partner," he said. 
	Chase turned and looked at him wryly. "Ha ha." 
	"Brooks, McDonald." They turned to see Jensen standing in the doorway to his office, 
waving them over. 
	"Champagne, hu?" August asked as they walked. 
	"We're gonna have dinner after the demonstration," Chase said. 
	"Oh, yeah. I bet you are." 
	As they entered their captain's office, a man who had been sitting in one of the 
chairs stood. "This is Detective James Harris," Jensen said. They exchanged handshakes. 
James and Chase sat, while August walked over and sat on the edge of the small bookcase 
underneath the window. "James has just transferred in from Seattle."
	"Seattle, hu?" Chase said. "Talk about a change in scenery." 
	James laughed. "Big change. But I'm looking forward to it." 
	"We don't have anything for him right now," Jensen said. "Thought maybe you two 
would like to show him around." 
	"No problem, Captain," August said. 
	As the three of them stepped out of the office, James said, "I hope I'm not causing 
you guys any inconvenience. The captain said you guys just got a new case this morning." 
	"Oh, don't worry about," Chase said. 
	"Hey, guys." Richardson was approaching them. 
	"Richardson," August said. "Find anything out?" 
	"Yeah, get this. Back in 1998, Ryan Thomas was married." 
	"Let me guess," Chase said. "To his prison girlfriend." 
	They all laughed. "Uh, not exactly. Seems he's developed a few fans over the years, 
and in 1998, he married one of them over the Internet." 
	"Over the Internet?" James asked. 
	Richardson looked up from his notes, hearing a voice he hadn't heard before. He 
glanced at Chase, not knowing who James was. "Oh, sorry," Chase said. "Richardson, this 
is James Harris. He's just transferred in from Seattle. James, this is Sam Richardson." 
	"Nice to meet you," James said, exchanging handshakes. 
	"Likewise. Anyway, they married over the Internet in 98. They had an on-line 
preacher and everything. It was quick, over in less than ten minutes." 
	"We know the name of the fan?" August asked. 
	Richardson tore a sheet out of the pad and handed it to him. "Caroline Whitmore." 
	"Great," Chase said, turning to August. "Let's check it out." 
	"Guys mind if I tag alone?" James asked. 
	"Not at all," August said. "Let's go." 



Within fifteen minutes, they pulled up alongside the curb of Caroline Whitmore's house. 
The climbed out of the car and walked up the marble path to the front door. Chase 
knocked on the door. It opened just a few inches, and a woman looked out over the gold 
security chain. "Yes? What is it?" 
	"Caroline Whitmore?" 
	"Yes." 
	Chase showed her his badge. "I'm Detective McDonald, these are Detectives Brooks 
and Harris," he said. "We'd like to talk to you about Ryan Thomas." 
	From the reaction on her face, they could tell she wasn't sure. "Just a minute." 
The door shut and opened up again, this time all the way. They started forward, but 
she put a hand up. "Not all of you," she said, then pointed at Chase. "Just you." 
	He glanced back at the other two, who motioned that they understood, and went 
inside. She shut the door as soon as he was in. "Ms. Whitmore--" 
	"Mrs. Thomas," she corrected him, then walked back to the kitchen. 
	He followed. "Mrs. Thomas, were you aware that Ryan was at Los Angeles Memorial 
this morning?" 
	"Yes." She went back to sorting away groceries. "He was having a kidney 
transplant. We talked about it the other night." 
	"Talked about it?" 
	"Over the computer. He's allowed an hour every night to use the Internet, so we 
use that time to chat." 
	"Are you aware he escaped this morning?" 
	She turned from the cabinet and looked at him. "What?" 
	"He escaped this morning, after the surgery. Killed a police guard in the 
process." 
	"How did he escape? I mean, he had just come out of surgery, right? He wouldn't 
have been able to move around, would he?" 
	"Well, it was about thirty minutes after the transplant, but we think he might 
have had help getting out. You didn't help him escape by any chance, did you?" 
	She looked at him sharply. "Certainly not," she claimed. "I could never work up 
the nerve to help a prison inmate escape." 
	"Has he contacted you since this morning? Phone? E-mail?" 
	She shook her head. "No. I haven't had any contact with him since the night before 
the surgery. Now if you'll excuse me, detective, I have other things I have to take care 
of today." 
	Chase took a card from his jacket pocket and handed it to her. "If he tries to 
contact you in anyway, you call me. Okay?" 
	"Of course," she said. 



After leaving Caroline's house, the detectives stopped to get some lunch, and they were 
soon sitting at an outside table at Roy Willy's Fast Food. "So I imagine there's a lot 
of differences between the Seattle PD and the LAPD," August said. 
	"Not really, to be honest," James replied, then took a drink of soda. "We've 
pretty much got the same stuff you guys do: burglary, murder, vandalism, grand theft. 
Except for the weather, we're both pretty much alike. Although, we don't have many 
detectives with the, um, driving skills of you, Chase." 
	August laughed. 
	Chase looked up from his food. "What's that supposed to mean?" 
	"Guess our captain gave you a word of warning?" August said with a smile. 
	James nodded. "Oh, yeah. He said this was a big warning." They both laughed. 
	"Hey, I'm not that bad." 
	"Oh, I'll give you half of that," August said. "You have managed to survive your 
little stunts. But the motorpool has got Chase on their Ten Most-Hated list." Chase went 
back to his food as August and James laughed. 



Chase opened the door to his garage and turned the light on. Vanessa followed him. 
"So," she said, looking around. "This is where all your magic plays." 
	"You bet." Smiling, he showed her over to where he had set up a piece of practice 
medal. An old table nearby held a variety of tools to work with. "Here's all the tools 
I use," he said. She watched him name off each tool. "They may feel odd at first, but 
once you start using them you'll get used to them. Okay, so to start, you take this 
one--" 
	He went to pick one of the tools up, but Vanessa stepped over and put her arms 
around him, planting her lips on his. She gave him a long, passionate kiss before 
pulling back. He was clearly surprised. "Um, uh, Vanessa," he said, stumbling through 
his words, "um, I'm not so sure that's such a good idea. Especially this early." 
	"Really?" She raised an eyebrow questioningly, make her already coy look even 
more hard to resist. 
	"Yeah. I mean, don't get me wrong. It's not that I don't find you, um, attractive 
or anything. I, I certainly do. But I think we should keep this professional. For, for 
awhile at least." 
	She looked at him for a moment, then smiled and said, "Okay. But only if being 
professional eventually gets us to where we just were." 
	He didn't quite know how to respond, so he simply agreed with a nod and a smile, 
then grabbed the tool and turned to the medal. 



Three hours later, Chase was standing in the driveway, waving after Vanessa as she drove 
away down the street. When she got out of view, he walked back into his house, checking 
along the way to make sure the doors of his Porsche were locked. 
	He shut the front door and locked it, then descended the stairs. He stopped at the 
bottom when something caught his eye. He walked over to the small table behind the couch 
and picked up a stained wood picture frame. He looked at the photo. It was of him and 
Nicole, taken during one of his visits to San Francisco. They were standing at the end 
of a pier, and Alcatraz Island could be seen in the background. He looked at it for a 
long moment, the look of pain, anger and frustration showing in his face.
	She had been gone now for over a year, but it felt like just the evening before 
they were lying out on the beach, discussing the idea of her moving to L.A. He lifted 
the frame and pressed the photo against his cheek, starting to cry. "God, I miss you," 
he said quietly. "I miss you so much." He looked at the picture again, wiping the tears 
from his face, then set it back on the table and walked off.


ACT 2

Chase was still asleep the next morning when the phone started ringing. After the third 
ring, he finally rolled over and lifted the receiver to his ear. "Hello?" he asked, still 
90% asleep. 
	"You still asleep, partner?" August's voice asked. 
	"Had a long night." 
	August laughed. "Yeah, I bet you did. Listen, there's been another murder. We think 
Thomas might have struck again. James and I are on our way to pick you up." 
	"Okay. I'll be ready in twenty minutes." He hung up and laid back in bed for a moment 
longer, then threw the sheets off and got up.



James was in the backseat of the car as August drove, Chase beside him. "So how did your 
evening with the Love Goddess go?" August asked. 
	"It wasn't what you think," Chase told him. "She came over, I showed her the basics 
of medal sculpting, we had dinner afterwards, and then she left." 
	"That all?" 
	"For last night. She's coming back over today while I'm gone to do some more 
practicing." 
	August laughed. "Yeah. You'll probably come home to a love chamber full of flowers, 
pink pillows and bed sheets, a little perfume, and her wearing nothing but a rose behind 
one ear." 
	James watched them from the backseat, smiling, amused by the relationship between 
the two. And he had to laugh at August's last comment.



Richardson was waiting for them outside the house when the detectives arrived. "Morning, 
guys," he said. 
	"What we got, Sam?" August asked as they followed him into the house. 
	"Victim's name is Douglas Bochner," Richardson explained. Chase recognized the 
name instantly. "Aged 51, lawyer, married; wife and kid are out of town for the week." 
	Chase said. "Thomas's defense attorney during his trial." 
	"Think he's on some sort of revenge spree?" James suggested. 
	"That's what I make of it," August agreed. 
	"I'd say so," Chase said, glancing around. "Bochner couldn't prevent him from 
getting life in prison, despite having a pretty convincing defense. Thomas said some 
pretty harsh things to Bochner after he was convicted." 
	"How harsh?" Richardson asked. 
	Chase shook his head. "I wouldn't feel comfortable repeating them," he said, then 
gestured around the room. "Anything else, Richardson?" 
	"Nothing. No missing jewelry or money. Still had his wallet and watch on." 
	The detectives walked around the room, looking for clues. "Who found the body?" 
James asked. 
	"Guy next door," Richardson said, returning his notepad to his jacket pocket. 
	"Chase," August called. 
	"Yeah?" Chase was bent over, looking under the couch. He stood as August walked 
over to him, holding a newspaper. 
	"Check this out." He handed Chase the paper. On the front page, near the bottom, 
was the beginning of an article on a judge named Harry Johnson. The name was circled in 
red ink. 
	Chase looked at the others. "The judge who presided over Thomas's trial." 
	"Think he's next?" James asked. 
	"He may already be," Chase replied, and they were on his heels as he moved for the 
door.



Their call pulled up into the driveway of the judge's home as Richardson braked behind 
them. They climbed out and hurried to the house, guns drawn. Chase leapt up the steps 
and knocked on the front door. "Judge Johnson?" he called. "Police, are you alright? 
Judge Johnson?" No answer. He turned and came down the steps. "Spread out around the 
house." 
	As they headed around either side of the house, Richardson spotted a broken 
window. "Chase, guys, over here," he hollered. 
	They came running to see what he had found. Chase wasted no time holstering his 
gun and climbing through the window into the kitchen. Getting back on his feet, he 
drew his weapon again and took off as the others started in. 
	They spread through the house, searching room after room in the large, two-story 
Victorian-style mansion. James was moving down a hall when he spotted something through 
the space of an ajar door. He stepped back and eased the door open with his foot, gun 
held high. What he saw shocked him. "Chase, August!" he yelled back down the hall. "Up 
here!" 
	The others hurried toward him. "What? What is it?" Chase asked as he arrived. 
James gestured into the room with his head, looking away. Chase stepped into the room, 
lowering his gun. August and Richardson came in as well, and their guns dropped to 
their sides. "Damn it." 
	They were in the bathroom, and in the overflowing bathtub was the floating body 
of Judge Harry Johnson. 
	They holstered their weapons as they returned to the hall. "How many more possible 
victims could their be, Mac?" August asked. 
	Chase thought for a moment, then suddenly remembered. "The person who convinced 
the jury to convict him. The D.A." 



District Attorney Alison Hart exited the building where her office was and came out to 
the sidewalk, heading for the large parking structure across the street. She was 36, 
tall, with long brunette hair, and was dressed in the usual professional business suit: 
white buttoned shirt under gray jacket and mid-thigh skirt. She stopped at the corner 
and pressed the walk signal button. 
	Almost as soon as her finger left the button, a car pulled to a stop at the corner 
before her. Through the rolled-down window, she saw Chase was driving by himself. "Well, 
well, well," she said with a smile. "Chase McDonald." 
	He returned the smile. "Hi, Alison." 
	"Been a long time. So much for returning my call, hu?" She saw the smile fade from 
his face as he tried to think of a response. "What can I do for you, Chase." 
	"Remember Ryan Thomas?" 
	"How could I forget. Put him away for life." 
	"Well, apparently not," Chase said. "He escaped this morning." 
	"What?" He saw the look of surprise on her face as she walked to the car and bent 
over to look through the window. "How?" 
	"He was at L.A. Memorial for a kidney transplant, and he escaped after the surgery. 
We think he might've had help. You should let me bring you to the station. You'll be 
safer there." 
	"I don't think so, Chase," she said. "I can handle myself on my own." She started 
to turn. 
	"Well, he's already killed his attorney, Douglas Bochner, and Judge Johnson. You 
could be next, Alison." 
	She looked at him for a moment, then opened the passenger door and climbed in.



Sitting across the table from Alison in the main area, Chase said, "He wasted no time 
in killing Douglas Bochner or Harry Johnson. The report from the coroner said both were 
killed early this morning. Bochner between four and five A.M., and Johnson between five 
and six." 
	"We've established that his motive is clearly revenge," August said, sitting 
beside Chase. 
	"Yeah, and you and I are the only ones left," Chase added. 
	"What makes you think so?" she asked, not wanting to admit she knew the answer. 
	"Well, you convinced the jury of his guilt with rock-solid evidence, and I was 
the arresting officer whose testimony helped secure his sentence," he said. "I think 
it's pretty obvious why he would come after us." 
	It was clear for them to tell she was getting scared now. "Glad I decided to come 
in with you," she said half-jokingly, trying to lighten the situation. 
	Chase's phone started ringing. "Excuse me." He got up from the chair and crossed 
to his desk, reaching over his computer to answer it. "Robbery/homicide, Det. McDonald," 
he said. "Hi, Vanessa." 
	"I just got here, and I can't find any of the tools you showed me how to use." 
	"Oh, you know what? I had to leave in a hurry this morning and didn't have time to 
set them out for you," he said. "They're in two different places: the cabinet above the 
workbench, and the cabinet beside the sink." 
	She was standing in his living room, looking out at the beach through the large 
picture window. "Okay, I can find them. You know, you have a great place right here on 
the beach." 
	He smiled. "It is great, isn't it?" 
	Suddenly, there was a noise somewhere in the house. It sounded like something 
hitting the floor, causing Vanessa to turn quickly, gasping into the phone. 
	"Vanessa? What is it?" 
	"It sounded like something fell," she said. 
	"What? Are you sure?" 
	August picked up on his partner's nervousness and looked over. 
	Vanessa looked around the house. "I don't see anything," she said. 
	Suddenly, Vanessa's scream sounded in his ear. "Vanessa?" he yelled. "Vanessa!" He 
could hear nothing but her screams. He slammed the phone down and turned to August. 
"Something's happening at my place." He pointed a finger at Alison. "You stay here. Don't 
go anywhere." 
	They hurried down the hall, passing James as he stepped out of Jensen's office. He 
ran to catch up. "What's going on?" 
	"I'll explain on the way," Chase said as they rounded the corner towards the 
elevator.



They descended the stairs into Chase's house with guns drawn. James split and went up 
the stairs. "Vanessa?" Chase shouted. "Vanessa!" No answer. August checked out the back 
of the house and the garage. Chase looked in the kitchen and spare bedroom. 
	Upstairs, James looked in the master bedroom and bathroom, but both were empty. So 
were the closets. Lowering his weapon, he headed back to the stairs. 
	Exiting the house a short time later, August found Chase in the driveway, sitting 
on the back edge of his Porsche. "Don't worry, man," he said. "We're gonna find her." 
	Chase looked at him. "I've already lost two people, August," he said, referring to 
Jodi and Nicole. "I don't plan to lose anyone else." 
	August was starting to leave when he caught a glimpse of something. It was a man, 
across the street and down a few houses, watching them from behind a large shrub. August 
pointed him out. "What do you make of that?" 
	Chase stood, spotting the man. James looked over as well, walking out of the house 
and seeing what they were talking about. The man appeared nervous, quickly ducking 
behind the shrub as he realized they had spotted him. Chase started toward him, but the 
man broke into a run for his car. Chase turned and ran back for his Porsche. James ran 
up to August. "What's going on?" he asked. 
	August thought quickly. "Um, why don't you go with Chase," he said. "I think I'll 
stick around and question the neighbors again." 
	Without a word, James climbed into the car as Chase started the engine. Watching 
them back out and take off down the road, August smiled to himself. "Mac can take you for 
a ride this time," he said, then walked back to the house. 
	The Porsche and the older car raced down the street, the distance between them 
closing rapidly. Chase weaved in and out of traffic, never losing sight of the car up 
ahead of him. His taking of a corner was a little too much for James, who reached for 
the handle bar above the window. When they had straightened out again, he said, "I think 
I see now what August meant about your driving habits." 
	Chase just looked at him with a smile. "Wait'll you see me really go at it," he 
replied. 
	The chase continued for several more minutes, weaving through afternoon traffic 
and spinning around corners, dodging on-coming cars when they spilled over into the 
wrong lanes. 
	They turned another corner, and the other car couldn't recover from its turn. 
	"He's lost it, he's lost it," James said. 
	The car spun wildly, weaving back and forth across the two-lane residential street. 
He swerved left, then right, left, then right again, and headed for the back of a moving 
truck. 
	"Watch out," James said, clutching the handle bar tightly. 
	The driver of the other car screamed out, throwing his hands up as if to shield 
his face. The people unloading the truck ran for cover as the car hit the loading ramp 
and sailed up into the back of the trailer, coming to a violent stop. 
	Chase braked behind the truck, and he and James climbed out. The owners of the 
house watched on as the two made their way up the ramp and into the trailer with guns 
in hand. Chase approached the car carefully. The doors were pinned shut by the tight 
quarters, so he climbed up onto the hood of the car. He laid down on his stomach and 
looked in through the open driver's-side window. "Hi, there," he said. The driver was 
slumped over in the seat, barely able to turn his head enough to look. "Have a nice 
ride?" 
	The residents where still watching in shock and anticipation as Chased lead the 
guy, hands cuffed behind his back, down the ramp. James hopped down from the trailer as 
one of the men, probably the husband, walked over. "We'll send a tow-truck to get that 
car out of there," he said, then walked back to the car, shouting, "Hey, you're driving 
was actually pretty good."


ACT 3

Back at the station, August was sitting at his desk when Chase returned from the 
interrogation room. "How'd it go?" 
	"Nowhere." Chase dropped into his chair. "Guy claims he didn't see anything, and 
that he ran because he thought we were bounty hunters looking for him and had the 
wrong address." 
	James came up with a Styrofoam cup of coffee and said, "Well, detectives in 
Seattle definitely don't have the same driving skills as you, Chase." He took a drink. 
	August laughed. "That might actually be a good thing," he said. James laughed, 
and got a wry glance from Chase. 
	"Any word yet from forensics?" James asked, taking a drink. 
	Chase shook his head. "Nothing came up, but Cragmeyer's on his way to the judge's 
house. Maybe he can turn up something there." 
	"Cragmeyer?" James asked. 
	"He's our head of forensics," August said, adding with a laugh, "Do yourself a 
favor and don't go anywhere near his lab. You'll regret it." 



The room was dark, partially lit by light coming from an unseen source. The room was 
occupied by only one person, Vanessa. She was sitting, her hands tied behind the back 
of the chair, and a strip of duct tape over her mouth. Tears dotted her cheeks. A 
shadow flickered over the wall behind her, and suddenly, Ryan Thomas appeared and 
kneeled before her. 
	"Don't worry, my little princess," he said, brushing a strand of her out of her 
face. "It will over be over soon. Very soon." He leaned closer to her until his face 
was just inches from her's. "You're a very pretty girl, you know that? Maybe after all 
this is done, we can spend a little intimate time together." 
	She spit in his face, and he looked at her fiercely. She held his glare, refusing 
to be intimidated. He wiped at his cheek and looked at her. For a moment, she thought 
he was going to hit her, but was surprised when he said, "Or maybe not," then stood and 
walked away.



Alison followed Chase to the coffee machine. "No," he said, pouring himself a cup. 
"You're not going home. It's too dangerous with Thomas still on the lose." He set the 
coffee pot back into its place and walked to his desk. 
	"I can't stay here forever, Chase," she said. "I have to go home eventually, and 
I'd rather go home now. Right now." 
	Chase sat in his chair, taking another drink. "I said no, Alison," he repeated. 
"It's just too dangerous." 
	She crossed her arms over her chest. "You know, I haven't done anything illegal," 
she said, "so you can't keep me from going." 
	"I could fake an indecent exposure report," he said, flipping through some 
papers. 
	She rolled her eyes, glancing around, trying to think of what to do. "Okay," she 
said. "Okay, how about this?" He leaned back, listening. "You let me go home, and I'll 
agree to let a uniformed team stay outside and watch over me. Deal?" 
	Chase hesitated, then gave in with a sigh. "Okay. But I'm driving you home." 
	She held up her hands. "Fine." 
	Chase got up and grabbed his coat. "Be right back, August."



It was evening as Chase drove Alison back to her place. A black-and-white cop car was 
behind them. As they drove, Alison glanced over and said, "Are you doing okay, Chase? 
I read about what happened in the papers." 
	Chase was silent for a moment, obviously not wanting to talk about it. Then he 
said, "I'm hanging in there. It's not easy, but I'm hanging in there." 
	"I felt terrible when I heard about it," she said, looking out her window. "I 
wanted to call, but didn't quite know what to say. I'm sorry." 
	He looked at her. "Thanks." 
	In another ten minutes, he pulled into the driveway of her house as the patrol 
unit braked alongside the curb. Chase and Alison got out and walked up to the front 
door. He waited on the steps while she unlocked the door. "Do you want to come in for 
awhile?" she asked. 
	"Thanks, but I gotta get back to the station incase any breaks come in the case. 
If you need anything, though, call me right away. Okay?" 
	She nodded. "Sure. Good night." 
	"Good night." He was turning as she shut the door when his cell phone rang. He 
took it out and answered as he walked back to the driveway. "McDonald," he said. 
	"Chase, it's Richardson." 
	"What's up?" 
	"I just talked to Cragmeyer," he said. "He found a print at the judge's house. 
It belongs to a man named Robert Driscoll, and we got his address. It's an apartment 
complex at 416 North Frances St., in Brentwood, Number D-9. August and James are 
already en route." 
	"I'm on my way." He turned the phone off and hurried to his car.



August pulled up outside of the complex just seconds before Chase did. "Hey, partner," 
August said as he and James climbed out. "How'd things go with Ms. Hart?" 
	"Fine. I'm hoping she uses her head and stays at home until this is finished." 
	They walked inside and climbed the steps to the fourth floor. They moved down the 
hall, searching the doors, trying to see the numbers hidden behind thick dust and rust. 
"Here we are," Chase said, stopping and pointing at a door. "D-9. Let's see if anyone's 
home." He knocked on the door. 
	"Yeah! Who is it!?" the response came seconds later. 
	"Mr. Driscoll? LAPD, we'd like to ask you a couple questions." 
	Glass shattered, and Chase looked at August as they all drew their guns. "Why 
didn't we just the bust the door in and take him down?" 
	August nodded. "I think we'll have to do that more often." 
	Chase had the door open in one kick, and he and James hurried in while August ran 
back for the stairs. They ran across the cramped apartment to the window and spotted 
Driscoll fleeing down the fire-escape. They climbed through and gave chase. 
	Driscoll moved quick, feet clattering on the steel steps. James followed right 
behind Chase as they hurried to keep up. He reached the last level and hit the release 
for the final ladder. He wait impatiently as it lowered down with a racket, glancing 
back up at the two detectives who were almost upon him. The ladder was fully extended 
within a few seconds, and he quickly started climbing down.
	He reached the end of the ladder and dropped the remaining few feet. When he 
regained his footing, he saw he was standing right in front of August, who was sitting 
on the hood of his car. He lifted a hand, and a pair of handcuffs dangled from his 
finger. "Do you like this new LAPD-style jewelry that's going around?" he asked.



Driscoll sat across the table from Chase and August in the interrogation room. James 
stood in the adjacent observation room, flipping through the man's file while watching 
through the two-way mirror. "Where's Vanessa Ford?" Chase demanded, but the man 
refused to answer. "Why were your fingerprints found at the judge's house?" Again, no 
answer. 
	"You know, pal," August said, leaning forward, "we pulled your file. We've got 
you on numerous wants for burglary, grand theft, arson, and attempted murder. Either 
way you play this, your butt's in trouble big time." 
	Driscoll looked between the two nervously, then sighed, giving in. "Okay," he 
said. "I helped 
	Ryan escape from the hospital." 
	"Why?" Chase asked. 
	"When he first started making headlines, I knew--I knew this guy was a brilliant 
one. You don't get brilliance much anymore with the psychos of today. But this guy 
. . . man was he brilliant. Killed all his victims in a completely different way to 
throw off the suggestion of a serial killer? Brilliant. Use a different weapon each 
time? Brilliant. Pick victims that had no connection to one another? Brilliant, 
brilliant, brilliant." 
	August leaned back in his chair. "What happened after you helped him escape?" 
	"I took him to a place he told me he often went to be alone," Driscoll said. "He 
was still weak, recovering from the surgery and all. He wasn't in any condition to 
kill the people he wanted to. So I, I did it for him." 
	"How did he contact you?" Chase asked. 
	"He didn't. He only talked to Caroline Whitmore. He asked her to help him escape, 
but she couldn't work up the nerve to do it. So she asked me to. I met her at one of 
our meetings." 
	"Meetings?" 
	"I'm part of a group that has weekly meetings for fans of prison inmates," he 
said. "I set everything up with her, and she got the time and location from him and 
passed them on to me. Of course, as a result of all that, I was also supposed to kill 
her as well. And Alison Hart." He looked at Chase. "And you." 
	"Where's Vanessa Ford?" Chase asked again. 
	"I don't know who that is," he said. 
	"She was the young lady you kidnapped from my house." 
	"Well, it wasn't me. It was Ryan, then. Yeah, I was supposed to go there to get 
you for him, but he changed his mind last minute. Said he was feeling strong again and 
wanted you personally, so he went instead. Guess you weren't there so he grabbed whoever 
was." 
	"Do you know where he might have taken her?" 
	Driscoll shook his head. "I've said all I know, and I won't say anymore." 
	Moments later, Chase lead Driscoll out of the interrogation room and turned him 
over to a uniformed officer, who took him away down the hall. Chase looked at August as 
James met them in the hall. "Talk about a psycho," he said. "Weekly meetings for fans 
of prison inmates?" 
	"Sure have come a long way since Monday night football, hu?" James said, and walked 
with them down the hall.



It was around ten when Captain Jensen stepped out of his office, turning the light off 
and shutting the door behind him. Pulling is coat on, he walked into the main squad area. 
Chase was at his desk, lost in a mess of papers and manila folders. "Chase," he said, 
"it's late. You should go home and get some rest." 
	Chase leaned back in his chair, sighing. "I know, Captain," he said. "I will. I 
just need to finish filling out these papers." 
	Jensen glanced around the room. "Where's James?" 
	"August is showing him around the rest of the station." 
	Jensen laughed. "I had to rescue him from Cragmeyer earlier," he said. "He got on 
a roll trying to explain all kinds of these new experimental forensics techniques he's 
been working on." They both laughed. "Well, good night, Chase. See in the morning. And 
get some sleep." He walked away. 
	"Good night, Captain." Chase went back to his papers and looked to see where he 
had left off. 
	Moments later, August and James returned in a hurry. "Caroline Whitmore's on the 
move," August said. 
	Chase looked up. "What?" 
	"Her phone tap picked up a call between her and Thomas. She's on her way to meet 
him." 
	"Do we know where?" 
	"Yeah, come on. I'll tell you on the way." 
	Jumping to his feet, Chase grabbed his coat and ran with them down the hall.


ACT 4

They had the sirens turned off. They needed all the advantage they could in taking Thomas 
by surprise. The direction August gave took them to a large warehouse along the waterfront. 
Chase slowed his speed and pulled up alongside a dumpster, concealing themselves from view 
of Warehouse 8, where Thomas had told Caroline to go over the phone. 
	"Okay. What do we do know, partner?" August asked. 
	"We go in nice and quiet. Chances are Vanessa's in there. If we're spotted or he 
senses us, he might kill her. So we do this smooth and by the numbers." 
	August looked shocked. "Smooth and by the numbers?" he asked. "Chase McDonald? 
Wow. That's like asking the media to be unbiased for a day." 
	James laughed. 
	They exited the car and made their way toward the warehouse with guns drawn, 
stopping for cover every few yards to make sure the coast was clear before proceeding. 
When they finally got to within twenty feet of the building, Chase said, "We go through 
that door there." He pointed. A door in the side of the building was ajar, held open by 
a wooden crate. "Remember: smooth and by the numbers. Go." 
	They ran for the warehouse and hurried in one by one. Once inside, they split up 
and started the search. Chase thought he heard voices as he moved down the hall. He 
lightened his steps as he near a door. He eased it open and looked it, but saw nothing. 
The room was dark. He went in and saw another door, outlined with light coming from the 
next room. Slowly opening that door, Chase saw he was in the actual open area of the 
warehouse, crowded with large wooden shipping crates and other junk. The voices sounded 
like they were coming from the same room. 
	He entered and pushed the door up behind him, then took off moving through the 
maze of boxes. The voices grew louder and louder, until he finally spotted them. 
Peering around the corner of a stack of crates, he spotted Thomas and Caroline. They 
were talking quietly among themselves. She looked like she was crying, and he was 
comforting her, his hands on her shoulders. 
	Chase also spotted Vanessa. She was strapped to a wooden carving table, duct tape 
over her mouth. He wanted to charge Thomas and take him down, but he knew doing so 
would put Vanessa at great risk, so he had to fight back the urge. He turned away and 
sat down on the floor, his back against a crate, trying to think of what to do. And 
calling for August and James was out of the question. 
	He was still thinking when he suddenly heard Caroline yell out, "No!" He peered 
back around the crate. Vanessa, too, had her head turned to see what she was yelling 
about. "No," she repeated. "You can't." 
	"But honey, there's no other way," Thomas told her. "It's the only way for us 
to be together." 
	"No. I won't let you kill her." Caroline moved for the table and tried to take 
off the first of the three straps holding Vanessa down, but Thomas grabbed her arm 
and violently pulled her away. 
	"And I won't let you do that," Thomas said. The anger was showing in his voice 
and face. 
	"This is the only way. They have to pay for what they did. They all have to pay." 
	"What's happened to you?" she asked. "You were always so calm and polite over 
the computer." 
	"That was just a cover," he said. "Couldn't you tell? You really think a serial 
killer would act the way I did when we chatted? I was warming you up so you could help 
me escape when I got to the hospital. But of course, you had to chicken out and get 
someone else to do if for you. You're no wife of mine." 
	"Ryan, don't say that. We can still work this out. You don't have to kill them 
for us to be together." 
	Thomas exploded with anger. "Yes! I do!" Chase felt the need to charge approaching, 
but held it back as best he could. Thomas was stalking in circles, the anger building, 
his voice growing louder and louder as he screamed about needing justice. 
	Caroline continued to plead with him. "Please, Thomas. Don't do this," she begged. 
"If you do, then you can forget about us. Because if you kill this young girl and those 
other two, we're finished." 
	"I've already decided we're finished," he set, then raised his gun and shot her. 
Caroline screamed out, falling back to the floor. "Consider us divorced." 
	Chase jumped out from behind the crates, gun aimed. "Drop it, Thomas!" 
	He looked over and laughed. "Well," he said. "If it isn't the esteemed Detective 
Chase McDonald. The man whose arrest and testimony helped put me away for life. For 
life!" 
	"Drop the gun, Ryan." 
	"You know, if it's any consolation, I was gonna kill you last because you were 
the best. Hell, I even thought I might convince you join me on my new spree." 
	"Why didn't you offer it sooner?" Chase asked, stepping forward. "Afraid I'd say 
no?" 
	Thomas shook his head. "If you had said no, I would have just killed you," he 
said. "I was afraid you'd say yes." 
	Before Chase could react, Thomas raised his gun and fired. Chase ducked behind a 
stack of crates as the bullets splintered the edge of one. He fired around the corner. 
Thomas ran for cover, but took a bullet in the left shoulder. He stumbled forward, 
firing random shots back behind him to give him time. 
	Chase looked around just in time to see him leaving through another door. As he 
ran for Vanessa, August and James came running into the room. "You hit?" James asked. 
	"No, I'm fine." Chase laid his gun down on the table, and he and August went 
about untying the straps that held Vanessa down. 
	James knelt and checked Caroline for a pulse. "She's dead," he said, standing. 
	Chase helped Vanessa off the table, then pulled the tape from her mouth. She put 
her arms around him. "Chase," she said, crying. "I was so scared." 
	"It's okay, it's okay," he said, then pulled her off of him. "I have to go after 
him. August, take her back outside and call an ambulance." Without waiting for a 
response, he grabbed his gun and ran for the door Thomas had left through. 
	"Mac!" August shouted. "Mac!" 
	Ignoring his partner, Chase threw the door open and disappeared into the hall. 
	Chase stopped as he exited out the back of the warehouse. A blood trail was at his 
feet, running out toward the water. He moved forward, the gravel crunching under his 
shoes. He came over the final rise and looked around. Down on the other side were a 
series of piers with boats anchored to them. He saw movement at one and slowly made his 
way toward it. 
	Thomas untied the ropes holding the boat to the pier and jumped in, trying to 
find some way to start the boat. Chase came down the dock, gun raised. "Hold it right 
there, Thomas," he shouted. "Don't try anything. Get off the boat." 
	He whipped his gun up, but he wasn't quick enough this time. Chase fired a single 
shot. Thomas staggered back, the gun dropping for his hand. When Chase saw what was 
about to happen, he ran forward, but was too late. Thomas, clutching the wound in his 
stomach, toppled over the side of the boat and splashed into the water. 
	August came running down the dock, gun in hand. He stopped behind Chase. "What 
happened?" he asked. 
	Chase turned. "It's over," he said. 
	August lowered his gun, and he and Chase headed back.



The next morning, Chase, August, and James were sitting in Jensen's office. "Driscoll," 
Jensen was saying, "is going to be tried for murder, accessory to murder, and 
harboring and abetting. Along with the other unrelated charges." 
	Chase laughed. "Talk about tough luck, hu?" 
	"And don't worry about waiting for Thomas to magically reappear in a few months 
for more revenge. His body was found just a few hours ago. It's definitely over." 
	August sighed. "That's a relief. Just when you thought you'd seen enough movies to 
know the killer always returns after falling into the water." 
	"Well, congratulations on a job well done," the captain told them. "And James. I 
look forward to having you on our team." 
	"Thank you, Captain," he said. "Though after experiencing Chase's driving first 
hand, I might go back to Seattle." 
	Everyone but Chase laughed. "Ha ha," he said flatly.
	August shut the door as they stepped out of the office. "Thanks for showing me a 
great first few days in L.A., guys," James said with a smile.
	Chase laughed. "No problem."
	"I'll catch you two later," he said, then moved down the hall. 
	As they walked back to their desk, they found a surprise sitting in Chase's chair. 
It was Vanessa. August walked on to his desk, pretending to whistle as if he didn't see 
anything. "Vanessa," Chase said. 
	She got up and walked around the desk. "I came by to tell you I've been excepted 
into an art college back East," she said. 
	He smiled. "Really. Well, that's great. You've certainly earned it." 
	"I just wanted to say thank you for giving me all the pointers," she said, adding 
with a smile, "and for saving my life and all last night." 
	Before Chase could respond, she put her arms around and gave him a long kiss. 
August's eyes widened at the surprising act, and he quickly turned back to his computer, 
whistling. As she pulled back, she smiled and said, "Well, guess I'll see you around." 
	Chase was still recovering from the kiss. "Yeah. Yeah, I guess so. Take care. Good 
luck." 
	Giving him one last coy smile, she turned and left. All the cops and detectives 
stoped to watch her leave. There was definitely something magical about the way she 
moved in her clothes. August stepped up behind him. "You know, Mac," he said. "I think 
you missed the perfect opportunity to have nothing but pure excitement in your life."
	Chase shook his head, smiling, watching as she disappeared around the far corner. 
"For some reason," he said, "I've got a feeling I'll be seeing her again."


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