My Insanity

Friday, 13 June 2003

What is in your eyes
In the eyes of the beholder
there is beauty unseen by the beheld
of physical mental and spiritual worth
there is much to see as i look into you
for in the eyes of each beholder
there is something different
to you ruin shame and guild
to me a work of art
a world of understanding
I have left behind
and i am risking it all
to tell you
In the eyes of the beholder
there is beauty unseen by the beheld
so stop trusting that mirror
it has no stories to tell
for those stories are your to yell
for in the mine eyes of the beholder
i see beauty within you
the beheld

Angelus
Dark

Posted by punk4/the_losers at 10:28 AM EDT
Updated: Friday, 13 June 2003 10:20 AM EDT
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Friday, 13 June 2003 - 7:25 PM EDT

Name: Katie
Home Page: http://www.wedgehead.net

I saw your blog on the 'most recently updated' page on angelfire, your name caught my eye, and I read your entry. I thought it was very insightful and original and no one commented so here ya go. A comment commending your poem . . . which, for the last time, rocked. :)

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Saturday, 14 June 2003 - 1:02 PM EDT

Name: sara
Home Page: https://www.angelfire.com/alt/johnnydeppfan/sara

that was wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing. I myself write poetry...but I'm not sure it's a good as this is

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Saturday, 14 June 2003 - 6:45 PM EDT

Name: Sarah

That is amazing. I'm a writer too and I love to talk to other writers so IM me one time.

AIM: oOrainbowsRfunOo

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Sunday, 15 June 2003 - 1:29 PM EDT

Name: Unkown rebel
Home Page: https://www.angelfire.com/rebellion2/mountsbayschool

That was amazing, I'm not a writer and I don't attempt at it but seeing as all I can come up with is a site about my school, this shows me the point of free internet service. peace out and thankyou

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Monday, 16 June 2003 - 1:15 AM EDT

Name: The Angel of Darkness

i would like to thank you for looking
I would advise you to look at my profile if you want another shock
i am fifteen and seriously need mental attension but until my parents realise this then i am stuck writing i will post some of my songs for you as well Give me and Email i am at Loser_Punk182@hotmail.com THX again for checking me out

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