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Scene 2

CUT TO BLACK

A black door opens and a group of four teenagers are 
walking They are talking amongst themselves, badmouthing
the movie they just seen.  The camera backs as they 
walk out from under the doorway leading into the theatre.
The movie list above the theatre, lists "The Haunting" 
amongst all the other movies.  

The Teenagers names are; Candy, Josh, David, and Tina.

They start to walk out into the parking lot.  The full moon 
can barely be seen through the clouded sky, but the
air is cool for LA, and they are wearing thin jackets to 
keep themselves warm.  All except for David who is
suffering the cold in his T-Shirt.  

The parking lot they are walking into is that which you 
would expect to find in a moderatly to wealthy 
neighborhood of Los Angeles.  The Theatre looks as
though it could house a medium sized mall, and the 
parking lot is extremely well lit so that no one's
car would be too far out of the light.

Josh
Where was Sam, why didn't she
come.

Candy
Why, would you rather be with 
Sam than me?

Josh
No, but without her, I only have
you to pick on.

Candy
Well she hadn't came back from the
beach yet, so I just left her a note.
She didn't miss much.

Tina
You could say that again.

David
Yeah, I wasted ten dollars on that

Cindy
Oh boo-hoo, now you don't have ten
dollars.  You'd think it was important
with how much you complain.

David
Yeah yeah, I am just a blabber mouth
of greed.  Let me just take myself back
to my trailer trash home, and pull out
my wad of cash.

Tina
You don't have to be so melodramatic.

Josh
Yeah, it's not like you actually own your
trailer.  Your just renting it.

They are all chuckling, but David is forcing
himself to laugh with them.  He was used to them
putting down his not having what they had.  He 
wasn't in no big mansion like them, but his family
had a nice home, and they made decent money.  Hell,
the only reason why they lived there was because his
father was an agent to the stars, and wanted to live
close to them even though he didn't make nearly as 
much.  David was so forced to live in the rich society
while not quite fitting fully in.  Yet these three 
seemed to allow him in, if only for their badgering.

Candy got behind the wheel of her convertable mercedes.
It was red, with a black convertable top.  David 
climbed over the frame behind her, and she looked
back at him

Candy
Why do you always have to do that.

David
Because I know you would never keep 
the door open for me.

Candy
Well Stop, you'll scuff the wax

Josh is holding the seat forward so that Tina can get
in on the other side.  She climbs in, but doesn't get
close to David.  She sits there leaning back against
her side of the comfortable, well-padded seats.  

Candy starts the car and turns on the radio, but she
doesn't really notice as strange sounds Freddy's 
claws in a boiler room with the normal background 
music start to come from the radio.  Josh starts
to reach to change the station as Candy then puts 
her car in reverse, and starts to look back behind her
to start backing up, but instead the car's engine
revs up.  Josh looks up from the stereo as Freddy's
voice comes over the music and sounds.

Freddy
It's time for a driving lesson

Josh is looking confused as the car lurches forward, 
driving through as people are jumping to get out of the
way, as the car picks up speed, heading straight to the
concrete wall.  The car is sailing towards it, everyone
inside it is screaming.  

Then the car hits, and it breaks away like paper, the
only thing beyond it is a void.  

CUT

David is falling in the void scream..

A close up of his neck.  There is a rope around it.  He
looks up.

A shot of the rope whipping about above him...but 
also beginning to get more and more taught as he is 
falling.

He looks down.  Down below he can see the theater...the
insides of the theater, and the people there watching
the movie.  He is falling fast towards them.

CUT

END OF SCENE 2

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