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Two for One

I did another constraint poem. This time, I took my characters, Addie and Brian, and set them up where they are complaining to each other about each other. Addie was the first subject and then it was Brian. I took each of the letters in their names and started a stanza with each one. Unlike the history poem, I found it much easier to work with.

I was suggested to cut up some sentences before starting a new line. I found that much easier to do it that way. That just more the rhythm flow more easier for me to write. I went into a little more detail with Addie this time. Plus, I used punctuation with the lines and that’s making things much easier as well. The results looked rather nice at the end. My favorite is with Addie’s part at the end. I made her sound just like Brian described her personality in the last poem with him.

Overall, I just love the constrain of the poem and how it turned out for me. I could do more, but that would just be overkill for my crafts.