Revision #5

    The next poem is called The Other Odd Couple. I really thought that I had left my mark this time. But, there was still some improvement that needed to take place. People found the poem rather confusing and the language outdated for the characters. I broke the two separate parts into two pages. I tried to make it into two columns, but that did not work too well. So, I just made it into two pages. Plus, I managed to try and clear up the confusion in the poem itself. Other than that, it still pretty much looks the same as it did when I first wrote it. I do not think I did a good job with revising it, but I managed to do the best that I could for this poem.