Revision #6

    The next poem is called Triángulo. This one is my most favorite poem that I have written this semester. I thought I did my best on that one. However, it still needed to be fixed. I cleared up the confusion that sat heavily in the words. I made it clear that Richard was the speak. I managed to break up the poem into seven sections: Richard, Jade, Richard and Jade, Emily and Jade, Emily and Richard, Emily-Richard-Jade, and Emily. I broke down the lists of threes that I had in every other into and stuck certain words to the characters in the stanzas. Unfortunately, I ended up having to cut out some words in the poem because I ran out of lines to associate them with. I put the poems into the stanzas to make it look much neater. Finally, I made it clear that Emily committed suicide in the end and gave her a reason why. In the end, the poem looks much better than when I first wrote it.