Revision #2

    This poem is called Little Thief. I just wrote it down on a whim. I did not have to change up any of the lines the first time that I wrote this. I only had to make minor changes to make the poem fit just right to the concept. Still, it needed some work to be down to it. Nobody knew about the characters that I was talking about in the poem. I also found that I was giving people the wrong idea of perversion in the lines. I did not intend for that to happen. I got to work with cleaning this poem up. I went into a little detail with Addie’s uncle and about Addie herself. I also made the blackmail part of the poem rather clearer to the reader. Other than that, I did not really have to do too much work to it.