Revision #3

    My third is called Is He Guilty? This too turned out to be a complete mess. I have a time cleaning this poem up. First, I changed the title. It would seem that some people got confused on who the speaker was. They did not know if it was Crippen or someone else in first person point of view. The title became, Am I Guilty? instead of Is He Guilty? Then, I worked on the poem itself. I had accidently done a constraint poem. Each stanza starts with a letter in Crippen’s name. I gave away the idea with the first line of each stanza standing alone as a single letter. I took the single letters off and added punctuation to the lines to clear up some confusion in the poem. Plus, I took out some lines for the same reason. Finally, I added the last line to the last stanza and started it off with another n word just to keep the pattern flowing. Now, the poem looks much better than it did in the beginning.