24-10-2005

He is the King of Hardcore, a title many claim to be.. But does Chris Van X have what it takes to separate himself from the pretenders to the Hardcore throne?

Beginning with the review, Chris Van X starts his rps with narration of what he is thinking about before the Main Promo starts.
His Rps have way too much talking in my opinion, allot of what he says in his speech has already been covered by the beginning narration of his thoughts.
He try's to make up for all the talking with descriptive text of actions he takes after every paragraph. The description of Van X's actions and emotions are decent in size and quality.
There are a few parts I found to be quite poetic and very exciting to read.
But allot of it still needs improvement. Something time will solve, he's almost reached full potential for that field.
But the talking after a while tends to make me wont to speed read through it, I've noticed.
Odd spelling mistake here and there, nothing that a Spell Checker can't deal with. Now and then he tends to say the odd swear word in his rps a bit so-so in that field as long as he isn't doing too much depending on what kind of wrestling is is, if it's Indy with no Television Coverage then it's fine. Family show however would be too much in realism, he uses 'Street wise' talking as well to show this man is down to Earth which I like.

There is allot of stuff he needs to improve on, but with time I think he's up to the task.
For now.. Mid-Carder is the rank I will give until he improves on lowering his talking scenes, spelling and language content.
We will see where he goes from there. All the Best to ya.