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Lonodokaï

Part 1

Chapter 1

Note: I don't own blablabla...the normal stuff. But I do own
all the creatures, insects, humans...ao
This is my first Creatures-fanfic. Don't laugh, because
it's not funny.

On a planet that was named Albia, a disc-shaped planet with flowers, trees, butterflies, insects, spiders, waterfalls, oceans, deserts, jungles, vulcanos...a planet just like any other.
It was a normal day, a day like there are 8 every year. Just the same day as six years ago.
But suddenly, a light-orange coloured hand appeared in the incubator-room.
The hand slowly moved around, like it was exploring the room. Suddenly, the hand dissapeared. The goldfish in the pond next to the incubator looked up, but the hand was gone, like it was never been there.
The hatchery. The hand looked at all the beatifull, colourful eggs. Yellow, blue, green... but also clouds, diamonds and even spotted.
But her eye felt on a egg with beautiful mixtures between green and blue, the moast camouflaged and still she specialst of al eggs.
The hand softly clicked on the egg and send it to Albia.
The egg was put next to the incubator. The hand rested above the egg, garding in with her life.
Ten minutes later, something inside the egg started to move. Suddenly, the eggshel broke open.
The purple thing that crawled out, slowly opened her big dark blue eyes and direct them to a tomato.
"flub dis?" the baby asked.
"Fruit." the hand sayd.
"dru" the little creature tried.
"Fruit."
"fwuit."
"Fruit."
"fruit" the newborn giggled surprised when the hand tickled her light purple nose.
"Yes," the hand sayd, "Kaïri yes."
"bebe"
"Yes."
"yeth"
"Yes."
"Yes," the purple creature cried, "Yes, bab yes."
"No," the hand sayd.
The baby looked guilty to the patient hand, that was demanding her to lurn, and she tried,
"aoao, koko, dodo, no!"
"Yes," the hand sayd, "Kaïri yes."
The creature looked up, and tried, "baba, kaiwi, kaïwi, kaïri! yes, kaïri yes!"
Kaïri laughed happy when the hand tickled her several times.
Suddenly, Kaïri looked inquiring to the hand.
"flub dis?" She asked.
The hand froze surprised. ~What do I have to say?~
"flub dis?" Kaïri repeated impatient.
Suddenly the hand dissapeared. Kaïri looked again...but the hand was really gone.
"dis no," A little tear went out her eye, and she repeated, "dis no no no!"
****
"DAD! What have you done?"
"You're way to much on that computer, Tadara. Go play outside, with your brother and sister. You used to be so playful...That game has changed you, and I can't let that happen. I'm your father, and until you change back to normal, you stay off that computer!"
"But I..."
"OUTSIDE! And stay out the way of the computer for the next week!"
"But dad!"
"Shut up! Just one word, Tadara, and I throw that stupid game in the dustbin!"
Tadara sighed, "Yes dad..."
****
It was 03:00 am. Tadara was rooting in her bed. ~Kaïri...got to see Kaïri...what would she think of me, disappearing like that? I gotta go to her...~
Tadara sneaked out her room and stealed to the stair. She stealed softly and very silent from the stairs, almoast floating. She walked to the living room-door and softly closed it. Then she couldn't control herself anymore, and she raced to the computer and pressed the power-button. The computer beginned to start up. ~This thing is slo-ow~ Tadara thought impatient, ~come on, Didiru-chan!~
****
Kaïri let herself fall onto the floor, burried her face in the wet sand while softly sobbing, scared and alone. Then she felt a strange precense...
***
Tadara hasty double-clicked on the Creatures 2-icon on her deskop. Almoast immediatly, but stil way to slow for tadara, the start-window appeared on her screen.
She clicked on the on the 'run' button. The start-window dissapeared, and another screen replaced its spae. 'World Switcher', the discription told. Tadara selected 'Lonodokaï' and entered her password.
-Wrong password. Try again.-
"WHAT?!" Tadara cried confused ~Wait...maybe I've just put it in incorrectly~
She put it in again.
-Wrong password. Try again.-
~This can't be...~ She swallowed ~...you're just nervous...try again...~
-Wrong password. Try again.-
~THIS CAN'T BE! TRY AGAIN!~
-Wrong password. Try again.-
-Wrong password. Try again.-
-Wrong password. Try again.-
-Wrong password. Try again.-
-Wrong password. Try again.-
"Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!"
***
07:00 am. Kinkindane pushed her alarm clock off. She groaned ~Sleeep, sleeep~ She turned back around.
"TAAAAAAAAAADAAAAAAAAAAAAAARAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA?!" The sharp voice of her father cried downstairs, hard enough to wake whole Poinder-town.
~I don't know what she has done this time...But I know she won't come out with one week house arrest!~
***
Tadara was still clicking and typing like crazy. She didn't even hear her fathers deafening screams.
"TADARA! STOP, TADARA! NOW! STOP CLICKING!"
Then he pushed the reset-button.
Tadaras eyes grew wide and she start screaming like possessed,
"STUPID OLD MAN! WHY DID YOU DO THAT? I'LL KILL YOU! HIIAAAAAAAAAA!"
She reckless moved her hand in the direction of her fathers belly, but one of his strong hands stopped her movement and pushed her in a coin.
"HOW LONG ARE YOU ALREADY DOING THIS?" he cried with a voice hoarse of anger.
"03:00 am this morning."
"WHA--" As father was already angry, then he was really furious now,
"YOU GO TO ROOM!"
"But..."
"NOW!" The man cried and he pulled his hand to hit his daughter.
"You're already to late for work," Tadara remarked.
He realized that his daughter was right and he released her.
"We'll talk about it this evening," he said and he gave Tadara an And-that's-when-I'm-going-to-kill-you look.
Tadara swallowed,
"Yes dad."
"And now I'm going to work." And he yelled, "AND DON'T YOU DARE TO COME HOME LATER!"
"Yes dad."
"Good."
****
"What's wrong, Tadara?" A thin girl with long, black hair and white-blue eyes asked.
"Nothing..." Tadara answered and she sighed.
"Come on, Tadara. I know something is wrong."
"No, Pachysophia. Nothing's wrong."
****
"...Miss Im Diquene!"
"Huh?"
"Were you dreaming again?"
"No..."
"Okay, then what's the answer on my question?"
"Question?"
Everybody laughed.
"Tadara, did you slept enough past night?" The teacher asked concerned.
"Yes, yes, I did," Tadara answered confused, half-sleeping, half-dreaming about Kaïri.
****
In the interval, Tadara went straight to the exit of the school. She noticed footsteps coming closer, but she didn't reacted on it.
"W-Wait, Tadara!" Pachysophia almoast jumped on Tadara to stop her,
"You don't gonna play turant, right?"
Tadara yawned something that looked like "Of course not!",pushed her friend away and continued her way to the schoolexit.
"WAIT!" Pachysophia cried, but her friend didn't stopped. ~Okay. You've asked for it!~ Pachysophia ran up to her friend and jumped on her,
"I'm not going to let you play turant!"
"You're not going to stop me!" Tadara cried hysteric, "I GOT TO SEE HER! UNDERSTAND? NOBODY IS GOING TO STOP ME, NOT EVEN YOU!" She gave Pachysophia a reckless kick on her knee, pushed her off and ran away.
~She's cracked!~ Pachysophia thought, ~I gotta go after her, she might to very wrong things...~ She screamed softly when she tried to move her legg, ~Damn~
****

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