Loves me not?


The pile of petals grows

But I have to be sure

Wind stirs dust

Nothing will grow again


From that spot

where I found my flower

and pulled the petals

while counting. Everything

only a hope in the petals

The colour fades

while I stood still.



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Notes on this poem: I spent very little time on this one. I tried to bring across the idea of that old thingy people did where they pulled the petals off a flower and counted off "she loves me, loves me not, etc" and how you shouldn't waste time on something that really won't make a difference and probably isn't true. Something like that, I think you get what I mean though. It's good advice, I should take it myself but I'm stupid.