Dawdling


Time burns in my fireplace

Eaten by a thrashing flame

That can never finish it's meal.


No warmth comes from such a fire.

Time just floats up

With the smoke,

Out the chimney and flies away

Ahead of the wind.


©2001 MC



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Notes on this poem: Well, basically the title says it all. I still want to workshop this piece though it seems finished. Parts don't seem right. Originally the poem was supposed to be about procrastination and I want to redo it so that it still does.