From Alexanjerar:

I think this was probably the first Starfox based story I’ve ever read that wasn’t based on direct hostility, which was comforting in a way that I can’t quite put my finger on. That comforting feeling grew when Sophie came in, however, and if I’m not mistaking, you never mentioned what type of animal she is.

I definitely appreciated how everything involving the disease Fox had made sense in the end.

However, the only thing that bugs me is that in the end, the scene just sort of morphs from talking to the Doctor in his room to being within the Starfox crowd.