Your name : Chris
The character you wish to play: Barqs Kamen


Hermione: Cape-boy!
Yumi: Eh-heh!
Hermione: I amuse myself.


Birth Name: Kieran Oranda Emory
Age: Kieran is 19 years old.


Jams: I like it...
Yumi: Good-good, this is the expected age for our Kamen-buddies...

Birthdate (no years): He was born on August 29th.

Hermione: The day of structured action!
Yumi: Herm-Chan, no one cares.
Hermione: Yes, they do.
Yumi: No they don’t.
Hermione: Yes
Yumi: No
Hermione: You ruin everything. *sighs*
Yumi: Uhh-kay...anyway, August is becoming cliche for BIO characters. Between the Princesses and this Kamen...that’d be three. Show the love for the other 11 months, people.

Astrology Sign: His sign is Virgo.
Gemstone: Kieran's gemstone is his birthstone, the peridot.
Blood Type: His blood type is A.
Likes: He likes mind games like Mastermind and Chess.
Dislikes: He doesn't like sports too much, or fighting.

Yumi: Seems good...
Jams: But...it needs more “beef” ...its plain...not much in it.

Hobbies: Kieran likes playing mind games, and also watching other people playing them.
Good points: He is very smart, and a straight-A student.

Yumi: So he’s intelligent.
Hermione: Guess so...
Jams: I wish I was intelligent
Hermione: OO;;

Flaws: He doesn't have a good sense of humor and he's not too atheletic.

Hermione: Athletic.
Yumi: I think he knows that, Herm.
Hermione: *shrugs*
Jams: Why do you HAVE to be athletic? xx;;;
Hermione: I know but I guess it’s just because guys judge themselves on their athletic ability, a lot.

Appearance Hair: Kieran's hair is short and dark brown. He keeps it short so he doesn't have to comb it in the morning or anything.
Face: His eyes are hazel colored and normal shaped, nothing strange about them.
Voice: His voice is right in the middle, pitch-wise. He likes singing along with music, but can not do it in front of other people.

Yumi: Why not?!
Hermione: Maybe he’s insecure. *shrugs*
Jams: *coughs* At least it isn't extremely deep x_X

Build: Kieran is tall and lanky, not that muscular. He's not skinny, but not fat either.
Clothing: He has a big interest in dragons, so he has a lot of dragons on his shirts and pants.

Personality
Kieran is uptight and not very open to many people. He is not unemotional, but it is difficult for him to delineate what you feel. He doesn't have too many friends; not many people he know want to be friends with him for fear of being called a geek.

Yumi: *sings the slightly cliche song*
Hermione: *hits Yumi with a sheep* ^^
Jams: Sheep? *hits Herm with a cow* all better ^^

He really longs for someone to talk to who would actually listen to him. He has a practical, logical, analytical approach to life and a great deal of patience. He enjoys working at anything of a mechanical or technical nature, and believes that what is worth doing is worth doing well. He has a deliberate and methodical way of thinking and speaking; it takes him time to learn but, once he has mastered a subject, he does not forget it. He is very systematic in all he does and does not like to see things out of order.
When he is interested in a project, he concentrates all his thoughts on it and does not appreciate being interrupted. He has a seriousness that causes him to sometime worry about his responsibilities, especially when confronted with change and uncertainty.
Kieran always thinks most logically along mechanical or scientific lines. He tends to prefer to follow normal routine rather than cope with the disruption and uncertainty that comes with trying something new.

Hermione: Because he’s afraid of change, I take it.
Yumi: I think...
Jams: ^^;; um, I like it. detailed and long @_@

He gravitates to situations where he has stability and the opportunity to make slow step-by-step progress. He sometimes undermines positivity, with the result that he can be influenced against his better judgment. He finds it difficult to say "no" and mean it.

Hermione: Okay! Buy me a house!
Yumi: Oo;;
Jams: I want a pony! x_X
Hermione: Oooooh!! YES!
Yumi: Xx;;


Kieran is often overly critical of himself; he assumes that people will judge him harshly and find him lacking. He may feel that people don't like him, since he sometimes lacks self-esteem. Thus, he tends to pretty much keep his feelings under wraps. He has a desire to serve others, but not enough understanding of the other person's feelings. Consequently, he follows his intellect rather than his intuitions in most situations. He has trouble understanding other people's motivations and intentions. His reactions are often rather cool, deliberate, detailed and analytical. He doesn't like emotional expressions, because he really doesn't understand them. Even when his feelings are engaged, his shyness makes it hard for him to be demonstrative with his affections. Instead, he expresses caring by doing things for the people he loves.

Yumi: That was somewhat long.
Hermione: Yes.
Yumi: Anything to say...?
Hermione: Err...some advice for your character: lighten up, get to know and like yourself. Go with the flow. Laugh till you cry and don’t forget to cry till you laugh. Don’t be anxious to please. Take frequent vacations with people you love. And err...
Yumi: *eye roll*
Jams: Yah right, I wish we could say that for some of us here --;

Old History
Kieran was born to Mr. and Mrs. Emory. He lived in a normal sized house with no brothers and sisters. Kieran never went to school till he was 11.
When he was 6, he had a very weird dream. He dreamt that he was talking to a huge silvery tree.

Yumi: ...
Hermione: ...
Yumi: WTF?
Hermione: Silvery...tree...
Jams: x_X;; Yumi took the words right out of my mouth @_@ I didn't know trees could be...silvery.

When they were done talking, a relatively straight branch fell out of the tree to his feet. He bent down, picked it up, and then the dream ended. When he woke up the next morning, the staff was laying across his chest. It was big for his age, around 6 feet long. Over the next few months, he polished it and put two caps on it that he found laying on the ground in the streets. One was red, and the other was green. When he was 11, he was selected to go to the Senshi academy. He was so happy about it. When he packed up and left for it, he brought his staff, though he didn't know why he did it. After the academy, he was hand picked to be part of the Coca-Cola Senshi Team by the King and Queen of Planet Coca-Cola, until he was put into 'storage'.

Yumi: There’s no King, otherwise very nice and clean.
Jams: Good job! x_X;;;;

New History
Kieran was 'born' on August 29th at 2:15 PM to Chris and Mable Emory. He was an only child. He doesn't remember his dad too well, because he died when Kieran was 3 years old. When he was 10, his family was robbed, and he transformed. That's the only word for it.
He personally tracked down the thief and got back all of his family's possessions. He started going to school at Gidson Elementary when he was 5, and went there until the 5th grade. Then, he started going to Craston Middle School. He went there for grades 6-8, and then, for 9-12, he went to Heyphire High School.
When he turned 18, he moved out of his house that he was living in with his mom. He now lives in a small, 2-room apartment near Carlson University, the college he now goes to. He doesn't have any roomates. One room he uses as a bedroom, and the other one he keeps his computer in.

Senshi Form:
Henshin Item: A small little bottle cap with the Barqs symbol on the top of it. It is encased in glass.
Transformation Phrase: Barqs Cola Power! Power Up!
Transformation Sequence: His silver cloak floats out of the sky and lands on his shoulders perfectly, and then his mask appears in his hand and he puts in on his face. Then, he holds out his hands and his staff falls into them.

Introduction Phrase: You won't need a calculator to deduct your future.

Yumi: *raises eyebrows*
Hermione: Calc-a-lator! ^_^
Yumi: Hermione?
Hermione: Yes.
Yumi: You have issues.
Hermione: *pouts*
Jams: I get to use Calc-a-lators in school, TI-83's Aren't you happy for me? x_X;;;;;;
Hermione: We have to use graphing calc-a-lators...
Yumi: *sighs loudly*

FUKU
I have a picture of Kieran's armor attached. His armor looks like that, except without the spear, shield, and helm(Head-piece). It does have the mask though, just not the hair thingy. The centerpiece that you see in gold in the pic is actually red, and the shoulder-pads are green.

ATTACKS & WEAPONS
Element: Earth
Other Powers: When Kieran is in contact with his staff, he can slightly control earthen things, like rocks and chunks of earth and stuff, on a small scale.

Hermione: Keyword here, I hope, is slightly. There could be problems if he could, like, pick up buses and move them around but I see no problems with rocks and stuff...

Weapon: Kieran's weapon is something out of a dream. Literally. It's in the picture I'm sending you. He is well trained in fighting with it, though he doesn't know how. Even without the staff, he knows a bit of hand to hand combat.

Yumi: In the picture *I* have, the weapon looks a lot like a spear.
Jams: Cool! xx;;

CHARACTER SECRETS
Kieran has a lot of secrets he doesn't tell anyone, but that's mainly because no one talks to him much.

Jams: And? o_@;;;
Yumi: This part needs to be developed a little, I’m thinking.
Hermione: Yesh!

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Final Verdict


Hermione: XD.

Yumi: T_T Waaaaa...

Jams: I say you’re in, you did a good job with describing your character and such but there are just some little flaws like all of our applications, except Herm’s.
Hermione: ^^;;;
Yumi: --;;;;;
Jams: ^^; but uh...yea... I like it a lot and I say just revise a little and beef things up a little x_X;;;; anyway yea....that’s about it xx; I liked it.. ACCEPT.

Yumi: As far as I can tell, you did not break any big RPGing rules except the fact that you’re SLIGHTLY cliche, not that that‘s very much of a problem seeing as this RPG only has a few members. I like the weapon, seeing as most guys just go straight for the big sword and don’t even look into the less-overdone staffs and spears. I have a few little issues with the personality and history, nothing that can’t be solved with a little tweaking. ACCEPT, WITH CHANGES

Hermione: Very nice, Chris. I know you did some research on this character and it SEEMS to have paid off. As Yumi said, there are a few slight cliches with Kieran, the regular old human guy. This can be solved with some very slight tweakings, this doesn‘t mean you actually have to rewrite anything - character SEEMS just fine just...erase some stuff and add some stuff and junk. Barqs Kamen has freakishly weird-cool armor, a spiffy weapon, a powerful attack and is all around fresh and wonderful. You amuse me. This application wasn't just well written, it had silvery trees. ACCEPT WITH CHANGES! ^_^