Working on the title!
Ok here's a bit of what I've written. I haven't thought of a title yet! I've shown it to a few people but they didn't really tell me what they thought. I've decided to name the characters of the story with the names of my friends I've met in my life! Please don't feel offended if your not in the story yet I promise I'll try to fit everyone in. I'll post the next part on the end of this one when I've written a few more pages.
Incoming!
There’s no use we’re surrounded! We cant just give up! keep fighting don’t let them through come on we can do it!......Sir sir Hogs down he’s been hit pretty bad he needs help….Sir we cant win we’re losing to much of our team. I wont stand by and watch my team die. Everyone hurry we have one chance………..
Hog can you hear me? Wake up. Hog slowly opens his eyes at first his eyes are blinded by the lights that are on in the room he’s in. “Your going to be fine now” said a kind female voice.
“Who are you Hog asked?”
“Oh I’m sorry, I’m nurse Fender” She was a small lady who was no taller than 5ft. “Why am I here, Where’s my team? What happened?” Hog asked with a desperate look on his face. “Hog you need rest please just calm down and rest you’ve been through a lot”.
This only angered Hog! ”Where are my friends? Tell me where are they” Hog sat there waiting for the nurses answer but she just looked at him with a saddened face. Hog looked back at her and said “Tell me!”.
Nurse Fender explained to Hog that he was bought in by a mysterious Hunter only known as Lucifer. She continued to explain how the rest of Hogs team The Outlaws of Ragol have been declared missing in action (M.I.A). The only thing that went through Hogs head was that he has to find his friends and make the evil warlord Zaccubus pay.
Hog sat up with a tear in his eye “Hog sit down your not at your full strength you need to rest”. “NO! I need to find the rest of the Outlaws, I need to find my friends. Now let me out.”
Hog went to the reception of this Hospital type place and ask Novotny (The guy behind the counter) if he could get his equipment back. Novotny started telling Hog about times when he was a formidable Hunter and an excellent sharpshooter. Hog wasn’t interested he just wanted his equipment so he could find his friends and once and for all kill the evil warlord Zaccubus. After Novotny handed Hog his equipment Hog ran straight for the nearest exit. While running to what seemed to be the exit Hog started putting his equipment.
Hog found himself in what seemed to be a city only it seemed to be in space. “Where am I” Hog said to himself quietly. “Your on pioneer 2 you daft fool” said a man who had floating type creatures around him. “So this is Pioneer 2?! Who are you?” Hog said looking at what seemed to be the sky but in fact it was a glass dome that surrounded the city and made it able for deep space travel.
The old man looked at Hog with a shocked look on his face “Your that guy Lucifer bought up from the surface! Your from pioneer 1! Well I be dammed rumour had it that your were hurt really bad and wouldn’t live but here you are fighting fit. I can see by what your wearing your planning on going back down to the surface. Yeah? Well your going to need help, no not from me I’m way passed my day but these” the old man pointed at the floating machine type creatures that were around him. “ These are called Mags. They can help you and if like me you don’t speak to people much they’re always there to listen to you. Please I’d be honoured if you took one.”
Hog looked a little strange man, then scratched his head looking at the Mags,one of the Mags stood out from the rest it was kind of like a bunny rabbits head. “So I’m allowed any one I want? Ok Then I’ll have that one please” The old man smiled “Good choice Hog, Soniti will serve you well”
Hog stood back “Hhhhhow did you know my name?” The old man laughed “I know more than you think Hog. My name is Tunis. I have to be off now, Till me meet again Hog” After saying this Tunis turned away from Hog and began walking away. Hog yelled “Wait who’s this Lucifer guy and how do you know so much? I need to know more!”
Tunis kept on walking away and shouted back “You’ll see Hog it’ll all become clear in the end! Now don’t you have some friends that need rescuing?”
Hog clinched his fist saying “He’s right! Don’t worry guys I’m coming to rescue you all hold on”
After exploring what appeared to be a city sized ship he found himself in what appeared to be a shuttle bay! The ships that surrounded him look similar to the ones he trained with. Hog waited until the coast appeared to be clear then headed towards a small black and grey ship. The ship looked empty so Hog slipped in, sat in the cockpit and began to power up the ship! Something poked Hog in the back of the head “Oi what are you doing? Hands up! Slowly or I’ll shoot.” Hog raised his hands slowing into the air.
“Now stand up no funny business this is our ship now!” Hog turned around and saw a group of three people he said “What do you mean this is your ship now? Wasn’t it yours to begin with?” “No its yours isn’t it? We need it to get us to Ragol”. Hog laughed even though there’s a red gun pointed at his head “ I was about to steal this ship to get myself to the planet Ragol too” The three strangers laughed as well and one of them said “Right all four of us will use this ship to get us to Ragol.”
The stranger that had the gun pointed at Hogs head lowered the gun and shook his hand. “Sorry about that mate we thought this was your ship. I’m Da Midget, That’s Hep and that’s Akane.
“Hi well I’m Hog. So why are you guys going to Ragol?” While Hog was asking this he turned around and finished getting the ship powered up. Hog sat down and looked at the controls and said “Shit this looks more complicated than the ones I trained in. Any of you guys know how to pilot this ship?”
“Da Midget laughed No that’s why we were waiting for the pilot so we could make him take us to the planet. We need to leave now we are already late for our meeting with…. Hey Hog you said that its different to what u trained in? How different? do you think you could pilot it and get us to Ragol in one piece?”
“Um I’ll try but please forgive me if we don’t make it! Hahahaha”
Everyone just looked at Hog. “So Hog why you going to Ragol? have you been there before?” asked Akane.
“Well I was sent to Ragol on pioneer 1. The next thing I knew I was sent out of the pioneer 1 ship to hunt down a single person know as Zaccubus. We made good time and we were in what we thought was where he was hiding. Next thing we know we are surrounded by hordes of only can be described as monsters. Most of my team the Outlaws of Ragol” Hep interrupted “Wow you’re a member of OoR?” Hog smiled “Yes, anyway were did I get to oh yeah most of the Outlaws were killed or injured I was brought to pioneer 2 by a mysterious hunter known only as Lucifer.” Da Midget and the others looked at each other in shock. Da midget then whispered to Akane and Hep “He’s here? This complicates things”
Hog chose to ignore because if they have something to hide and Hog was to ask to many questions who’s going win a fight on a small shuttle 3 v 1. Hog continued to explain what happened on Ragol. “Lucifer wasn’t around when I woke up I’m guessing he’s gone back to Ragol. I was the only member of my team to be bought back from the surface the rest are M.I.A which is why I’m on my way to the surface I want to find my friends and make this Zaccubus pay for his crimes. I also want to make a trip to pioneer 1 to pick up some of my weapons I left there I’m going to need something more powerful than this sabre I’ve been given.” “Hog” Hep said in a sad voice. “Hasn’t anyone told you? Pioneer 1…Hog Pioneer 1…something happened an explosion just as we made contact an explosion tore though pioneer 1. Its feared that everyone on board died in the explosion no one is sure what happened. Maybe this Zaccubus had something to do with this who knows.
A tear ran down Hogs cheek, he turned away from the rest of the group. “No it cant be.”