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Green, Green, Green. The grass in the spring sunlight gleams. A feather floats idly by on the wind. The light breeze carries the birds' singing. Chitter chatter. Chitter chatter. So idle, and yet so restless is nature in the spring. |
Copyright ©2009 Ashi Shadow -4/1/09
Originally the last 2 lines were 1 line.
Thought the first two lines were good, and that it went somewhat downhill from there in the end.
Originally there was no empty line break, was just one stanza.