DREAMS OF CLAY

Our dreams were made of clay
shaped from the earth
by our hands
until the rain washed them away.

Copyright ©2015 Ashi Shadow - 12/6/15 - Inspired by the line "dreams of clay" by Dwight Yoakam.
I presume he meant fired clay that broke/shattered, but my poem is not on the same kind of dreams and I think it works better with unfired clay.
Was originally "with our hands"