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[ Updated Second Evaluation ]
The Metal Gear Files
The below HTML evaluation is just of the opening page unless otherwise requested by you.
[ Not As Critical HTML Evaluation ]
[ Very Critical HTML Evaluation ]
Let us start with the embedded music on the pages. The embed tag is located in the <HEAD> section and should be as high as it can be in the <BODY> section. The music does not always load and when it does it is very choppy at times with static. One reason it does not always load is because you have it in the <HEAD> section and use a regular music embed tag that can cause static.
[ Music Repair ]
The images you use from the sites that most of them link to are copyright from the company that designed them. We did notice a link to on one of your pages that link to them, but there has to be somewhere on your pages a statement that they ( the images) are used with permission from the company who designed them and have copyright on them. This you can do by emailing the company to ask permission to use them on your site.
[ Copyright© Information ]
Links are the next point we looked at on your pages. We didnot find any dead links on your pages. If there are dead links on the pages you link to it is not your concern and have no control over except if you want to advise those sites of this problem. Your links are the same color as the text on the page. They are also underlined as is much of your regular text. By just looking at the page you cannot differentiate between the links and the text. We suggest that you change the color of your links so they do not look as if they are regular text. You may also want to think about using a little script on your pages to remove the lines under your links.
[ No Line Under Hyperlink ]
Loading time
The loading time on the below page;
[ http://www.geocities.com/oosnake45/themgfiles.html ]
is slow, and the reason being that the java applet you use loads slowly. This is a normal thing with java applets. Also the third image in the applet hangs up at times and does not load properly.
Spelling And Sentence Structure
On a whole the spelling is excellent on your pages. We only found two spelling errors that you may of overlooked.
Just click on the the links below to see iformation on the missions...
the word information is spelled wrong
The below sentence repeats itself;
To help me with the site or
make a comment e-mail me at oosnake45@yahoo.com or
instant message me at the
Yahoo! Instant Messenger.
Please contact me I would like
to hear your ideas....
It should be written as below;
To advise me with this site or
make a comment either send email to
oosnake45@yahoo.com
or send an Instant Message to me
while I am on line or not.
I would really appreciate
hearing your ideas....
The above information was found on the below page;
[ http://www.geocities.com/oosnake45/themgfiles.html ]
You have to understand that spelling and sentence structure is very important when you do most everything. To have a good command of the language is a powerful tool that gives you a level of professionalism that commands respect. Bad grammer and sentence structure will stick in a person's mind more so than correct command of the language. Poor grammar and structure will give people the idea that you just threw it together and really did not care. Take pride in your work and it will be appreciated much more.
I conclusion after examining your site we feel that is well designed other than the comments we have made. Your information is well presented and is covered quite well.
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