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Here is my attempt at writing a song...tell me what you think!

Achieve

written by Tara Gazak



Verse 1


Oops again I failed another test

You know my heart wants more than this

Myself is there

but I can't be alone

together You can set me free


Chorus


I cannot undo what's been done

I cannot do yet what I will do

All I can change is what is right in front of me

Will You please help me to achieve?


Verse 2


I see some joy but sorrow

but it's a hurdle I can jump

it isn't easy

it drives me up a wall

Oh, please, can't we just move on?


repeat chorus


Bridge


Perfection never will be

someplace that I will reach

as long as I'm in human form


but You're there beside me

reaching out to guide me

and I'll be okay no matter what


repeat chorus



I hope you liked it...I think it sounds kinda cheesy, but let me know what ya think.

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