C15 Use a long
dash to separate that main part of the sentence from a long interruption in
the middle or a long appositive at the end. |
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General Principle |
Incorrect
Example
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Correct Example |
a) A writer may need to use a long dash to join a long appositive to the end of a sentence. |
She had had a narrow escape, an experience she would never forget. He stepped back and observed the result, a thing of beauty. |
She had had a narrow escape – an experience she would never forget. He stepped back and observed the result – a thing of beauty. |
b) A writer may use a long dash to separate the main
parts of a sentence from an interruption to that sentence. |
If
everything material was taken away, electronics, toys, bikes, a child would
not exist happily. |
If
everything material was taken away – electronics, toys, bikes – a child would
not exist happily. |