part 4

by Kerri Philpott

graphic by Sacha Raby
This is a copyrighted work.
Inspired by Isaac, Taylor and Zac Hanson, and their music

INT. BACKSTAGE – VENUE. DAY

Table are set up. The lasagna is in the middle of a large table. Plates and cutlery have popped up. A large assortment of soda cans is also on the table. Lucas is seated at a separate table, eating. Joey sits next to him, with Michael across the table. Mike has finished serving himself and is about to join the table. Stephen is mixed in with the crew at the food table.

MICHAEL
(concerned)
What time is it?
MIKE
Time for Pepto Uncle Mike. Get a grip.

Michael pushes his plate aside and lets his head drop onto the table. Stephen arrives and takes a seat.

STEPHEN
(looking at Michael)
What’s with him?
LUCAS
(shrugs and continues eating)
MIKE
You ask Stressboy.

Michael lifts his head.

MICHAEL
How does your father do this? We are never gonna get any school in today. He’s gonna kill me.
STEPHEN
It’s one day.
MICHAEL
Well it’s not like we did a helluva lot yesterday either.
LUCAS
(swallows)
Language.

Michael groans and drops his head onto the table again. After a few minutes, he turns – but does not lift – his head toward Stephen.

MICHAEL
It’s Dallas next, right?

Cut to:

EXT. DALLAS HOTEL. DAY

Michael is standing on a balcony on the upper floors of a high-rise hotel. He is talking on his cell phone.

MICHAEL
Maggie? No, the boys are fine. Monkeys like Bry described, but fine. Is he there Mag? I gotta...it’s only the second city...I know...overwhelming? Yeah, you could say that. Of course I know it’s okay to feel that way. It’s just...Maggie, I don’t think we’re getting as much schoolwork done as we should. I have a friend here in Dallas. She’s a teacher. I was gonna call her...

INT. DALLAS VENUE. DAY

Crew members are setting up. Michael is using the apron of the stage as an “office.” He’s got the binder and assorted papers spread out. The boys periodically whiz by on their rollerblades. Toby approaches from the wings.

TOBY
There’s someone looking for you Stressboy.

Michael shoots him a dirty look.

TOBY
You’d prefer I call you Uncle Mike?
MICHAEL
If it’s a man, you’ve never heard of me. If it’s a woman, she’s here to save my live, so let her by.
TOBY
Whatever you say.

He walks away and the boys race by Michael again.

LUCAS
Hey Uncle Mike! Watch this!
MICHAEL
No, no watch this! If you break something, who is gonna play the drums tonight?!
LUCAS
(laughs)
You can!!
MICHAEL
Oh, ha ha! You are beyond funny you little monkey!

Lucas skates over to this uncle.

LUCAS
You used to be fun.
MICHAEL
That was when I used to be just your uncle. Now I’m a substitute father, caterer, shrink, teacher...
VALERIE
Whine, whine, whine Hawthorne. I swear. You never change.

Michael looks over to see that VALERIE LINCOLN – a tall, willowy brunette with shoulder-length, curly hair and dark eyes – has entered and approached the stage. Trailing along behind her is a 13-year-old carbon copy, MADELINE KELSEY LINCOLN.

MICHAEL
Hi Val, hi...
MADELINE-KELSEY
(quickly, cutting him off)
Kelsey!
MICHAEL
Oh-kay, hi...Kelsey.

He looks at Valerie curiously. She shrugs it off. Lucas watches Kelsey closely. She’s dressed in black jean cutoffs and a Dallas Cowboys t-shirt. Mike skates over to Stephen, who is watching the entire scene from a safe distance.

STEPHEN
You hear that?
MIKE
What?
STEPHEN
Cupid’s arrow when it whacked old Lucas.
MIKE
Ya think?
STEPHEN
Lookit him...
MIKE
She’s a girl and she’s not hyperventilating or screaming. I’d stare at her, too...
STEPHEN
Mike...Danielle...?
MIKE
What?
STEPHEN
She didn’t scream.
MIKE
(thinks about it)
Mmm...thunk. Think he knows what’s happening to him?
STEPHEN
Maybe.
MICHAEL
(yells)
Guys! Come over here!
MIKE
You talkin’ to us?
MICHAEL
No, I’m talking to the “E” crew behind you! Get over here!

Mike and Stephen skate over to join the group. Stephen waves his hand in front of Lucas’ face. Mike’s resulting laugh comes out in the form of a tiny snort.

MICHAEL
Aw, geez. Women on the premises. Try and remember your manners, huh? This is Valerie Lincoln and her daughter... Kelsey.
STEPHEN
(shaking Valerie’s hand)
Nice to meet you. Any friend of Uncle Mike’s...
VALERIE
...is usually a former client. In this case though, I am also an old, old friend.
MICHAEL
And a teacher.

Mike looks at his uncle suspiciously.

MICHAEL
I’ve been authorized by your parents to ask Valerie, and Kelsey, to join us on tour. Valerie would be your tutor... if she accepts.
VALERIE
Sure, what the hell?
MICHAEL
Language.
STEPHEN
Now you’re getting the hang of it Uncle Mike.
MIKE
(to Valerie)
Do you mind me asking what your qualifications are?
VALERIE
Thanks to your brilliant uncle, I just completed a master’s degree in education.
STEPHEN
(to Mike)
So that makes her hilariously overqualified to teach your junior butt.
TOBY
(yells from stage)
Ready here boys!
MIKE
Saved by sound check! Come on Lucas!
LUCAS
Huh?
STEPHEN
Sound check! Let’s go!

Lucas skates off with his brothers, but looks behind him a couple of times to check on Kelsey’s presence.

INT. CONCERT VENUE – STAGE

The boys shed their skates and take their places in their socks.

MICHAEL
(yells)
I know your mother buys you shoes!
MIKE
(yells)
Ready here Harry!
VALERIE
Michael, you’re awfully close to the speakers. I think it would probably be in your best interest to move.

Michael realizes she’s right, quickly gathers up his things and joins Valerie and Kelsey in the front row of the audience as the boys begin to play Thinking of You. Lucas is playing a little louder than usual, which distracts Stephen and Mike, who look at Lucas and then exchange looks with each other.

MIKE
(mouths silently)
It’s the girl!
STEPHEN
(mouths silently)
Probably!

They continue the song. Lucas continues to pound.

MIKE
(mouths silently)
We have to talk to him!
STEPHEN
(mouths silently)
Later! Sing!

They finish the song, and the “audience” applauds.

MIKE
(yells)
Harry, you gonna need acapella levels?
HARRY
(yells from console)
What am I, the new guy?!
STEPHEN
Bless you Harry!

Lucas scrambles down off the drum riser. Stephen and Mike corner him before he can get too far.

LUCAS
Don’t hurt me.
MIKE
We’re not gonna hurt you.
STEPHEN
We’re just gonna talk to you.
MIKE & STEPHEN
In private.

INT. VENUE – FLOOR SEATS. DAY

As the boys are leaving the stage, Kelsey gets up from her seat.

KELSEY
I’m gonna look around, okay Mom?

Valerie looks at Michael, who shrugs. Valerie frowns at him and shakes her head a little.

VALERIE
Okay honey, just stay out of everybody’s way.
KELSEY
Not a problem.

Michael watches Kelsey walk away and then turns to Valerie.

MICHAEL
When did she start going by Kelsey?
VALERIE
About two seconds after she realized I was going to take this job.
MICHAEL
But I like the name Madeline.
VALERIE
So do I. But so do your nephews.
MICHAEL
Huh?
VALERIE
Michael...honestly. Side two of the first album. Right there, big as day...
MICHAEL
(suddenly realizing)
One of their songs is called Madeline...
VALERIE
(shaking her head)
Oh lord...

Cut to:

INT. VENUE. DAY

The brothers are sitting side by side in the cheap seats. They are leaning back in the chairs and have their feet up.

MIKE
This is kinda cool. To see the stage from here. Feels...real.
STEPHEN
It is real. This is a lotta fun, but it’s also our job. I mean think about the difference between Dad and Uncle Mike doing the same job.
LUCAS
Uncle Mike is a basket case.
MIKE
And Dad is sick.
STEPHEN
Think of all the shows we’ve played with other acts. Have you ever seen a road manager that wasn’t one or the other? It’s like so much to think about and no way is it all in “the binder”.
MIKE
So...no...losing it. At least when we’re...on stage.
STEPHEN
Yeah. We gotta stay focused there. Off stage we can be nut jobs. You get my drift Luke?
LUCAS
Think so.
STEPHEN
Make sure.
MIKE
Or ask for help. This girl is going on the road with us. She looks about the same age as you. Her mom will probably wanna teach you at the same time.
LUCAS
Hadn’t thought about...that.
STEPHEN
Yeah...actually...me either.

INT. HOTEL ROOM. DAY

Lucas and Kelsey are on either side of the table. Valerie is at the head of the table examining Lucas’ books and work. Lucas looks a little squirmy.

VALERIE
Okay, I know where to start with you Lucas. You’re more or less the same level as M... Kelsey, which is one of the reasons I decided to take this job.
LUCAS
Great. Me and Kelsey are the same level. Isn’t that great guys?

Stephen, who is working on his laptop on one couch, and Mike, who is reading on the other, look up.

MIKE
S’great Lucas!
STEPHEN
Yeah. Now you have a classmate...

Stephen looks down at his keyboard and smiles. When he looks up, Mike is shaking his head.

MIKE
(mouths silently)
Cruel...

INT. BUS. THE NEXT DAY

Michael is in the back with Stephen and Mike. Lucas sneaks over to Mark, who’s just sat down in the driver’s seat.

LUCAS
Pull out.
MARK
Huh?
LUCAS
Close the door and pull away...please?
MARK
Lu...cas...
LUCAS
It’s okay, you can.
MARK
And what about Valerie? And Kelsey?
LUCAS
They’re riding on the other bus.
MARK
Oh, nice try, but your uncle said they’re coming with us.

Lucas exhales loudly and flops into the closest seat.

LUCAS
Do you see them coming yet?
MARK
As a matter of fact...
LUCAS
(groans)
I’m gonna be in my cave.

Lucas gets up and goes to his bunk. He climbs into the bed and slides the door closed. Stephen, who has witnessed Lucas’ withdrawal, looks out the buss window and sees Valerie and Kelsey carrying their luggage to the bus.

STEPHEN
Oh, that would explain it.
MIKE
What?

Stephen points to Lucas’ closed bunk and then moves his head towards the approaching figures of Valerie and Kelsey.

MIKE
Uncle Mike, Valerie and Kelsey are here.
MICHAEL
Great!
LUCAS
(groans from inside the bunk)
MIKE
(laughs)

Michael goes to the front of the bus. He and Mark get off to help Valerie and Kelsey with their things.

STEPHEN
Luke, we told you to be careful. That doesn’t mean you have to go into hiding.
MIKE
Yeah. We know you like her.
LUCAS
(from inside the bunk)
Shut up!

Mike shakes his head. Kelsey climbs onto the bus. She’s wearing shorts again and a Beach Boys t-shirt inherited from her mother. A heavy-looking knapsack is slung over her shoulder. She looks at Mike and Stephen.

KELSEY
Hi.

She looks at the nearby couch and lifts her knapsack off her shoulder a little.

KELSEY
Can I?
MIKE
Oh sure.

She puts down the knapsack. Kelsey looks at Stephen and Mike, then looks around the bus, searching for Lucas.

KELSEY
Where’s...?

Stephen and Mike raise their hands and point to the closed curtain.

KELSEY
(casually)
Hi Lucas.

INT. BUS. LATER

Stephen is working on his laptop. He is editing a document which contains the lyrics for More Than Anything. Mike suddenly appears and plops down next to him. Stephen lowers the screen so he can’t see.

MIKE
What? What are you working on?
STEPHEN
Nothing really.
MIKE
If it was really nothing, you’d let me see it.
STEPHEN
(bites his lip)
Uh...
MIKE
Is it lyrics?
STEPHEN
I...well...
MIKE
What is wrong with you? Let me see...

Stephen reluctantly restores the screen.

STEPHEN
If you laugh, I’ll toss you out the window.
MIKE
Calm yourself.

He takes the laptop and reads. He looks at Stephen analytically a couple of time while he’s reading it. When he’s finished, he pauses for a moment before handing the computer back.

MIKE
You write it for her?
STEPHEN
(pauses)
She...hasn’t seen it yet. I told her it was a poem though.
MIKE
So is there music?
STEPHEN
Yeah, but...
MIKE
But what?
STEPHEN
It’s for...I wrote it...on the piano.

Mike nods, taking in the knowledge.

MIKE
Hmm, then you should play it on the piano.
STEPHEN
What?
MIKE
Yeah. Show everybody how multi-talented you are. You play it. Alone. At the piano. And me’n’Lucas will go take a break backstage.
STEPHEN
Don’t you wanna hear it first?
MIKE
Yeah, sure, how ‘bout at sound check?
STEPHEN
Really?
MIKE
(pauses)
Steve, I know we razz each other like a lot, but have I ever messed with you about music?

Stephen thinks about it.

MIKE
(cont’d)
Come on, even when you wrote that thing for what’s-her-face...?
STEPHEN
Kathy Piper.
MIKE
Oh, yeah, Kathy Piper, that’s her. I liked that. Once you got beyond the fact it was for Kathy Piper, it was a great song. And I told you that! Remember?
STEPHEN
I guess.
MIKE
I guess? Oh, I am wounded. I was even gonna tell you we should drag that one out of the dust and see what we could do with it now.
STEPHEN
Why don’t you just wait and hear this one first?

INT. BUS. LATER

Kelsey and Lucas are sitting across from each other at the table working on something. Valerie hovers nearby.

VALERIE
Finished Lucas?
LUCAS
I think.
VALERIE
Let me check it, huh?
LUCAS
Um, sure. I gotta...

He points towards the back of the bus.

VALERIE
Yeah, sure, go ahead.

Lucas walks towards the back of the bus calmly. He passes Stephen, who is reading, and Mike, who is looking up words in a dictionary.

LUCAS
(whispers)
Help me.

He walks by them and goes into the bathroom. Stephen and Mike stop what they’re doing and look up. Mike looks at the bathroom and then looks at Stephen and smiles. They wait until Lucas comes out of the bathroom.

STEPHEN
Okay, rewind.
LUCAS
Help me. Call a rehearsal or something. Uncle Mike’ll believe you, I have never wanted to practice soooo badly.
VALERIE
(calls from the front of the bus)
Lucas! Good job buddy!
LUCAS
(smiles bravely in her direction and holds up his thumb)
Not gonna do it, are ya? Guys?!
MIKE
Nope. Gotta face it, her, Luke, or it’ll break you.
LUCAS
(sighs)
Kay...just tell me one thing?
STEPHEN
Shoot.
LUCAS
Do they always smell like...?
MIKE
Smell?
STEPHEN
She smells?
LUCAS
No, not smells smells, but...
(shakes his head in frustration)
Forget it.

Lucas goes back up to the front of the bus and sits down at the table.

MIKE
Our baby...
STEPHEN
Growing up...

INT. DRESSINGROOM. NIGHT

As Lucas and Mike go through their show prep, Stephen is checking the phone line in the room and setting up his computer. He opens it, boots it up and goes online. He brings up the Yahoo home page and goes to chat rooms, and finds a private room called HomeSweetH-ome. He enters the room and finds one user, called Dad.

STEPHEN
Okay, come on, he’s here.

Mike and Lucas crowd around Stephen. As Bryan types, Stephen reads it.

STEPHEN
Hi guys.
MIKE
Hi Dad.

Stephen types what Mike says.

STEPHEN
(reading Dad’s typing)
Are you in the dressing room?
LUCAS
Of course.

Stephen types what Lucas says.

STEPHEN
(reading Dad’s typing)
Just checking if you’re on schedule. How’s the new tutor?
STEPHEN
(types)
No homework on the first day, she could be lulling us into a false sense of security though.

Stephen sends it and Mike laughs when he reads it.

LUCAS
Is Mom there?

Stephen types Lucas’ question.

STEPHEN
(reading Dad’s typing)
Yes. She says hi and she loves you.
MIKE
Tell him something good about Uncle Mike, so he doesn’t worry.
STEPHEN
(says and types)
Uncle Mike is doing a lot better that Valerie is here. Toby still calls him Stressboy, but things are lots better than before.
(reading Bryan’s answer)
I’m sure he’s thrilled by that. What’s up with Lucas?

Stephen and Mike look at Lucas.

LUCAS
Stop that. Can I have some time here?
STEPHEN
By all means...

He gets up from the chair and lets Lucas sit down.

LUCAS
Some private time I meant. Why don’t you two go review the set list?
MIKE
A little harsh there Lucas, but we’ll chalk it up to hormones and you won’t be punished...
STEPHEN
...this time.

Mike and Stephen go over to the couch and start reviewing the set list. Lucas turns his attention to the screen.

LUCAS
(types)
Dad, I need to talk to you about something.
BRYAN
(types)
What is it?
LUCAS
(types)
I wanna talk about girls.
BRYAN
(types)
Okay, I knew this was coming.
LUCAS
(types)
Well, you’ve probably had this conversation at least twice before, so I was hoping you’d be able to tell me something.
BRYAN
(types)
Like?
LUCAS
(types)
Is it supposed to feel like this?
BRYAN
(types)
Describe, “like this”.
LUCAS
(types)
It’s, I dunno, like being sick, and happy, and confused and you wanna talk but everything that comes out of your mouth doesn’t sound as good as it did in your head...
BRYAN
(types)
That’s girls Lucas. They’ll do that to you.
LUCAS
(types)
But why?
BRYAN
(types)
That’s the way God made them.
LUCAS
Oh great. That’s the answer? That’s not an answer!!
(types)
Okay Dad, I’m gonna go warm up and let Mike type.
(to Mike)
Your turn!

Lucas gets up from the chair and Mike takes his place. As Mike begins typing, Michael comes in.

MICHAEL
What’s up?
STEPHEN
We got Dad in a chat room and we’re just talking to him now.
MICHAEL
Good idea. What’s the long face for Lucas?
LUCAS
I asked Dad a question and he didn’t answer it like I wanted.
MICHAEL
What was the question about? Can I ask?
LUCAS
Girls.
MICHAEL
Girls?
STEPHEN
(nodding)
Girls...
MICHAEL
And you asked?
LUCAS
I asked him to explain them.

Michael’s eyes grow wide and he looks at Stephen, who shrugs.

MICHAEL
That’s a really hard question you know.
LUCAS
I’m beginning to realize.
MIKE
Okay, I’m done.
STEPHEN
That was short.
MIKE
Well, we talk to him, like every day.
STEPHEN
True.

Stephen goes over and takes his place behind the computer.

STEPHEN
(types)
Hi Dad, it’s me Stephen.
BRYAN
(types)
Mike said the demo came out nice.
STEPHEN
(types)
Yep, it did.
BRYAN
(types)
Any other new material?
STEPHEN
(pauses)
Maybe...we’re working on stuff. Were you able to find out about The Radiators?
BRYAN
(types)
Not yet, I’ll let you know.

Toby enters the dressing room.

TOBY
Food’s here.
LUCAS
Food, no explanation needed. Take me to it.
MIKE
You comin’ Steve?
STEPHEN
Right behind you, I just hafta do something.
MICHAEL
Don’t take too long.
STEPHEN
Nope. Anything you want to say Uncle Mike?
MICHAEL
Tell him I’ll e-mail later. And then come eat.

Everyone leaves. Stephen is alone in the room.

STEPHEN
(types)
Uncle Mike says he’ll e-mail you later. They want me to come and eat now. So maybe I’ll e-mail later.
BRYAN
(types)
I’ll keep my eye out for it. Have a good show. Bye.
STEPHEN
(types)
Bye.

Stephen logs out of the chat room and opens up the Hotmail login page. He logs into his mailbox. A message from Cori is, of course, waiting. First though, he opens Microsoft Word and the document containing the More Than Anything lyrics. He then goes back to the Hotmail page and opens Cori’s letter.

CORI
(o.s.)
I can’t wait to read it. Send it as soon as you can.

Stephen hits reply. Once the screen has appeared, he goes back to Word, selects the lyrics and cuts them out of the document. He goes back to Hotmail and pastes them into the body of the letter. He adds something underneath.

STEPHEN
(types)
I don’t have time to write too much now, but I’ll be online later. I hope you like it. Love, Stephen.

Stephen goes up to the subject box and types The Poem in the subject line, then hits send. Once the mail has gone, he closes down the computer and runs out of the room.

INT. DINING HALL. NIGHT

Stephen enters the room and surveys the situation.

STEPHEN
Tobe, whatta we got tonight?
TOBY
(approaching)
Barbecue ribs, corn on the cob...
STEPHEN
(holds up his hand)
Nuff said.

Stephen goes over to the food table and serves himself. With his plate in one hand and a soda can in the other, Stephen turns and searches for a place to sit. He looks at one table full of crew and then looks at the other. Valerie and Kelsey sit on one side. Mike sits opposite Kelsey, with Michael sitting next to him and Lucas sitting next to Michael. Stephen goes over to the table and sits next to Valerie, across from Michael.

STEPHEN
Enjoying the ribs Uncle Mike?
MICHAEL
Mmhmmm.
STEPHEN
(rolls his eyes)
Two syllables. People, people, people, I am trying to get some table talk going here...
KELSEY
I like the ribs Stephen.
STEPHEN
Kelsey, good, thank you for participating. They are good, aren’t they?
KELSEY
Uh-huh. DO you guys eat like this all the time?
STEPHEN
Pretty much. We’re growing boys. Right Mike?
MIKE
Growing boys.
STEPHEN
My brother the parrot. Honestly Kelsey, they do know how to carry on a conversation.
KELSEY
What else do they know how to do?
STEPHEN
Good question Kelsey. Isn’t that a good question boys?

Stephen kicks Mike under the table and throws a napkin at Lucas.

STEPHEN
Boys, tell the lady what we do when we’re not performing, studying or feeding our faces.
MIKE
Roller blading.
KELSEY
Saw that.
STEPHEN
Continue Mike, that was a lovely start.
MIKE
Then there’s soccer, swimming...
STEPHEN
And these two, they’re both outstanding artists.
MIKE
Thank you Stephen.
STEPHEN
You’re very welcome Mike, as it’s completely true. Oh, and Lucas regularly whips our butts when we play video games.
VALERIE
Kelsey can be a little commando when it comes to video games.
KELSEY
(protests)
Mom!
VALERIE
Well, it’s true! You made that one boy cry when you were playing...what’s it called?

Lucas looks up from his plate and watches Kelsey out of the corner of his eye.

VALERIE
It’s got a female name I think.
LUCAS
Zelda?
VALERIE
Zelda! That’s it, isn’t it M...Kelsey?
KELSEY
(blushing)
Yes mom...

Lucas’ eyes light up.

MIKE
Hey, the M...what does it stand for?

Valerie opens her mouth to speak and Kelsey purposely cuts her off.

KELSEY
Lucas, do you play Zelda?
LUCAS
We have it on the bus, if you...I mean, uh, maybe sometime...we, uh, could play.
KELSEY
Sure, that’d be cool.
TOBY
(comes to the head of the table)
I’ve been asked to inform you chocolate cake is now available.
LUCAS
Cake.
KELSEY
Chocolate cake.

Both Lucas and Kelsey stand up, pushing their chairs back.

KELSEY
Race ya?
LUCAS
You’re on! Go!!

Both take off in the general direction of the food.

MIKE
Well, how dissatisfying. I still want to know what M means.

He looks at Valerie, who gets a little nervous.

VALERIE
Michael, didn’t he say chocolate cake? I know that’s one of your favorites. Why don’t you come and get some with me? Michael?!
MICHAEL
Oh, yeah.

Both get up and follow the same path as Lucas and Kelsey.

MIKE
That’s not the first time she’s slipped.
STEPHEN
You mean with the M thing?
MIKE
Yeah. You’ve heard it, right?

Stephen nods.

MIKE
Oh, somebody’s hiding something...

INT. BACKSTAGE. JUST BEFORE THE SHOW

Lucas paces, drumsticks in hand. Mike is talking to the other keyboardist, and a technician beings Stephen his guitar. Mike finishes his conversation and approaches Stephen, who is running over some chords.

MIKE
That was a good thing you did at dinner, even if I do end up with a honking bruise on my shin as a result.
STEPHEN
Was that a compliment?
MIKE
Basically.

Stephen’s fingers continue to slide gently over the frets and Mike watches Lucas get himself psyched up for the show.

MIKE
So you still didn’t answer me about the song.
STEPHEN
Yes, I did. You just weren’t listening.
MIKE
It should be in the show. It’s gorgeous.
STEPHEN
(shaking his head)
Not yet.

Toby comes by trailed by all sorts of crew members.

TOBY
(in the direction of the brothers)
Five minutes to first positions guys!

Kelsey approaches Lucas.

LUCAS
Hey, you goin’ out front?
KESLEY
Well, I was wondering if I could stay back here...maybe...
LUCAS
Think so, you just have to stay out of everyone’s way. Hey Toby?!

Cut to:

INT. VENUE. NIGHT

SFX: screaming fans

The guys are set up for their acoustic set. Kelsey is behind the curtain, directly in Lucas’ eyeline.

STEPHEN
Okay, now it’s time for Lucas’ song. You guys wanna hear Lucas sing?

SFX: crowd screams even louder

Lucas counts down and begins to sing Man From Milwaukee.

INT. HOTEL SUITE. NIGHT

The door flies open and Stephen bursts into the suite carrying his computer.

STEPHEN
That was the ... longest ... encore ... of my life! NOBODY touch the phone!

He goes into one of the bedrooms and shuts the door behind him. The others - Mike, Lucas, Michael, Valerie and Kelsey – pause in the suite’s foyer.

MICHAEL
He’s, um...
LUCAS
...got to...has a...
MIKE
It’s a, uh, Internet thing.

Valerie and Kelsey exchange looks.

INT. BEDROOM. NIGHT

Stephen’s modem is dialing into the server. He is growing impatient as the seconds pass.

STEPHEN
Come on, come on, come on...

The default screen comes on when the system connects. Stephen immediately switches over to Hotmail. He logs in and waits for his in-box to come up. When it appears, a single red arrow beckons, and the one piece of new mail is, of course, from CoriP. The subject line reads – O...U... Stephen stares at it for the longest time before opening it. He grips the computer with both hands as the message appears If wishes...

CORI
(o.s.)
...could come true...I would be there right with you. Sorry, but I’m not the beautiful poet you are. I love the poem and I love you. It’s hard to believe I could say that. I mean I’ve never seen you, but I mean that in a physical sense. I’ve seen you. You’ve seen me. We’ve made sure of that in the words that we’ve used. The words in your poem were so beautiful and intimate...I cried some of the most joyful tears...I love you Stephen.
STEPHEN
I love you, too.

He hits reply and waits for the screen to come up. Once the screen is up, he moves his cursor into the body of the message.

STEPHEN
(as he types)
Cori, all I wanted to do was send you that poem. When I finished it, I knew I had to. But once I sent it, I had trouble doing anything and everything else. I just wanted to know what you thought. I don’t know where anyone else in my family is or what they’re doing, and I think I’m hungry, but I don’t care. I can’t believe we went only six months ago, and because of Empire Records. Isn’t that the movie we were talking about? I love you, too...more than anything. Stephen.

In the subject line, he types – Always. Then he sends the letter. When he returns to his in-box, there is another letter from CoriP waiting. The subject line says P.S. Stephen opens it without hesitation.

CORI
(o.s.)
Remember when we were talking about the pains of being the oldest? I just found out I have to take my little sister to the Hawthorne concert. They’re coming to town next week. Not that I don’t like them, but my sister’s one of those screaming 13-year-olds you see in all the videos, and to be sandwiched in the midst of all that...maybe if they played a sit down show for like older people I guess. I dunno. My mom just told me I gotta take Libby. Peace, Cori.

Stephen stares at the screen, stunned.

STEPHEN
(softly)
Oh my God...
(louder)
This can’t be happening...no, no, no....
(louder still)
Oh my God!

He leaps oup and goes out into the main room.

INT. SITTING/LIVING ROOM – HOTEL SUITE. NIGHT

Stephen bursts out of the room to find Lucas and Kelsey watching extreme sports on TV.

LUCAS
Would you do that?
KELSEY
Of course.
LUCAS
Of course? You want to rock climb?
KELSEY
And sky dive.
LUCAS
Ooh, we did that! Well, kinda. They strapped us into these harness things and then dropped us off like a crane I guess it was...it was kinda like flying.
KELSEY
Did you like it?
LUCAS
Are you kidding?
STEPHEN
Lucas!
LUCAS
(a little annoyed)
What?
STEPHEN
Where’s Uncle Mike?
LUCAS
In a meeting with Toby and Valerie.
STEPHEN
(sighs loudly)
And Mike?
LUCAS
Prowling for food.
STEPHEN
Did he take someone with him?
LUCAS
Mark I think.
STEPHEN
So, in other words, no adults.
LUCAS
What are we? Chopped liver?
STEPHEN
No. 13. You are 13. I need an adult!

He turns and goes back into the bedroom, slamming the door behind him.

KELSEY
What’s that about?
LUCAS
A girl.
KELSEY
Of course. Do you know her?
LUCAS
No, but neither does he.
KELSEY
Get outta here!
LUCAS
No, he met her on the net.
KELSEY
Well, there’s lotsa ways to meet people. You think he likes her?
LUCAS
Mmhmmm.
(nods his head and smiles)
You can tell.
KELSEY
How?
LUCAS
The way he acts. He’s different.
KELSEY
Better different? Shiny, in the words of REM?
LUCAS
Like he’s got those twinkly Christmas lights on the inside. And I’ve noticed, after he’s been talking to her, he does a lot of songwriting. It’s like she’s his inspiration.
KELSEY
Like a...
STEPHEN
(o.s.)
...muse.

Lucas and Kelsey are surprised to see Stephen standing in the doorway watching them and obviously listening to them.

LUCAS
How long have you been there?
STEPHEN
Long enough to know that maybe I don’t need the others. You were spouting some deep stuff.
LUCAS
At last, my true power is recognized. What’s got you spazzed out big bro?
STEPHEN
She’s coming to a concert.
LUCAS
Which concert?
STEPHEN
She’s going to be at the concert in New Orleans.
MIKE
Who’s going to be at the concert in New Orleans?

The groups turns to find that Mike has now entered the suite and the conversation.

MIKE
It’s that girl, isn’t it?
LUCAS
Sit, sit, Stephen could use us all in his time of need.

Mike joins the group.

MIKE
It’s that girl you wrote the song for, right? Cori?
LUCAS
What song?
MIKE
The ballad at sound check.
LUCAS
You wrote that song for her? That was great!!
STEPHEN
Her name is Corinne, but people call her Cori. And she’s coming to the New Orleans concert.
MICHAEL
Cori’s coming to the New Orleans concert?

Michael and Valerie are revealed as the next people to have entered the room.

STEPHEN
Okay, everyone’s here now, so why don’t I just spill my guts? Come on in Uncle Mike, Valerie...

Stephen waves them over to one of the free couches, where they take a seat.

STEPHEN
Gah, I don’t know where to start.
VALERIE
How about her name?
STEPHEN
Right. Veronica Corinne Patterson. But she goes by Corinne and most people call her Cori.
VALERIE
Good. Good start. How’d you meet her? I mean besides the computer.
STEPHEN
Chatroom. Movies. She started talking about Empire Records and I like that movie.
LUCAS
You like Liv Tyler.
MIKE
I thought it was the other one – Renee Zellweger. She kicked ass on that song at the end.
STEPHEN
Shut up! Whose story is this?
MIKE and LUCAS
You story...
STEPHEN
Thank you. So we started talking. That night it was for like 2 hours, and we’ve been e-mailing and chatting ever since.
MIKE
And he wrote her a song.
MICHAEL
Was that the one I heard you doing after soundcheck?

Stephen nods.

VALERIE
I was listening to that. The lyrics are simply beautiful Stephen.

Stephen’s cheeks flush red and he hangs his head a little in embarassment.

MICHAEL
Has she heard it?
STEPHEN
Heard it? Um, well, she thinks it’s a poem.
MICHAEL
Why?
STEPHEN
Because I told her it was.
MICHAEL
(frowning)
Why did you tell her it was a poem?
STEPHEN
(softly)
She doesn’t know who I really am.
MICHAEL
Did I suddenly develop a hearing problem? Could you repeat that?

Stephen hesitates.

KELSEY
He said she doesn’t know who he is.

The entire room is silent.

MIKE
Then, who does she think you are?
STEPHEN
Me...Stephen...
MIKE
Stephen what?
STEPHEN
Stephen Gregory...
MIKE
Two out of three names...no Hawthorne?
STEPHEN
No Hawthorne.
MIKE
(he waves his arms around in a general manner)
None of this?

Stephen shakes his head.

VALERIE
Oh my...
STEPHEN
That’s bad, isn’t it?
VALERIE
No...no, no. Just, uh, gimme...give us a little time to think. And don’t reply to the message about the concert. Not yet.


Between Brothers, part 1
Between Brothers, part 2
Between Brothers, part 3
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