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When You Put Your Hands On Me

When You Put Your Hands On Me

By: Kim

(c)1999

Makayla came home from another long day at school. She was glad it was her last year. She wasn't the greatest in school and she really wanted to get it over with. She quickly went to her room avoiding any possible conversation with anyone. She threw bag on her bed and kicked her shoes off after slamming the door shut. She fell onto her bed and listened to music, she didn't have much of a life and didn't make any effort to have one.

*I don't know about the travel of time- And I've never seen most of the world- I don't know- Diving out of the sky- Or living like the diamonds or pearls.*

"Hello." Makayla rolled over picking up the phone.

"Makayla, I don't care what you say- You are coming out with us tonight, the usual club girl!" Krystal, her best friend demanded.

"Fine... I'll meet you there." She sighed deeply. She wanted to do something fun for once.

Later that night Makayla walked out the door, she wasn't very pleased with her appearance but the plain black flares and baby blue tank top with black platform shoes would have to do for tonight. She brushed her long dark hair over her shoulder and got into her car, not bothering to tell anyone where she'd be or that she was even leaving. She made her way to the club, finally trying to do something for herself.

*See I haven't danced to a musical tune- And I haven't noticed the flowers in bloom- I haven't smiled- When I'm alone in my room very much- Then we touched*

Makayla saw her friends and walked towards them. That's when she spotted him. He was gorgeous, standing out from any guy around her. She noticed him look up and made short eye contact before joining her friends in conversation.

"She's beautiful. I'm going over there." Justin said to his friends.

"She can't dance though, look at that... you'll show her up big time." Joey watched her barely moving.

"Maybe... but if I don't go over there I'll regret it. Just one dance" Justin walked up behind the myteriuos girl he'd been watching the whole time he'd been there.

"Would you like to dance." He said into her ear over the music. She jumped at the sound of his voice and then nodded her head.

They started swaying to the music and he slid his hands around her waist as she started grinding into him. She was moving around with the music, still in his arms. She turned around in his arms and slowly danced her way down to the ground and back up. Then she turned around grinding into him harder. He was impressed, he really didn't think she could do it.

*I just know- When you put your hands on me- I feel sexy- And my body turns to gold- I just know- When you put your hands on me- I feel ready- And I lose my self-control*

Makayla wasn't hiding anything. She felt like no one else was around her, she was alone with, him, she didn't even know his name but he was making her crazy, making her do things no one could ever do to her. No one ever thought she would be good at anything but she felt so free like the world was hers.

*I don't know if a doll can unwind- Or how to make a person go- I don't know how to be what you like- And simply open up the dephts of my soul So I keep my wings- And my eyes down- Ready for nothing- But holding my ground- I haven't used- A particular noun very much- Then we touched*

He took his hands off of her as the song ended and everything she felt went away. She wanted him to touch her again, all over. She wanted to feel his hands on her skin, forever but she couldn't. She lost her chance. He said it was fun and walked away. That was it. She stood speechless in the middle of the dance floor with people surrounding her, not knowing what she just felt.

*I won't notice- Or pay no mind- Boy I couldn't care less- What you do with your time- Your fingertips on my hips- Just move me like on of of kind*

She didn't say good-bye to anyone. She walked out of that club going striaght to her car. She was so glad she knew she could let loose and do something. She went home feeling like she had accomplished something, for once in her life. She didn't know how he did it, he was so amazing.

Makayla fell asleep dreaming of him, thinking of what he did to her. She loved that feeling and felt a little of it everytime she pictured his strong, tall body in her mind. His blonde, curly hair, his bright blue eyes, she memorized every feature and would never let the picture out of her mind.

The end

Song- Christina Aguilera 'When You Put Your Hands On Me'

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