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PAL Story
You will get 5-15 food(depends on how long and good.) for the chapters that you send In. The chapters have to be good. They can't be short. The whole story is made up. Send in the next chapter. The first one to send it in gets the gold.E-mail me the chapter that you want to do.
chapter 1 ~Slagar the Cruel~DONE
chapter 2 ~Darklan the Deadly~DONE
chapter 3 ~Slagar the Cruel~DONE
chapter 4 ~Darklan the Deadly~DONE
chapter 5 ~Chief Shoangore~DONE
chapter 6 ~Darklan the Deadly ~DONE
chapter 7 ~Darkphoenix ~DONE
chapter 8 ~Nightshade
chapter 9 ~Embershard
chapter 10 ~Slagar the Cruel
The person who writes chapter 10 has to end the story.
Trip to Redwall!!!
Prologue

Two mice are walking down the street. They weren't young mice. They were singing away. One was called Doon and the other was called Booma. It started to rain lightly, so they ran for cover. The closets place was called Goole. As they got the dibbuns started to jump on them. A young mousewife made them go sit at the table for dinner. She offered the two mice some. " We would be mighty grateful marm.", Said Booma. So the youn mousewife got them some dinner. Doon said, Since you offered us dinner, I reccomend that we tell you and the young uns a story." The dibbuns yelled in great joy,"YEEEAAAAAAAAHHHHH AAAAAAA SSSSTTTTTOOORRRRYYYYY!!!!" The two mice began, "It all started long ago with two moles name Munch and Sneech."

Chapter 1

Munch and Sneech were brothers. They did everything together. There home was at Lomhedge Abbey. They were chamipon ddiggers for there age. Munch loved to eat. He munched away at everything. Sneech was a normal mole. Well, these brothers decided to go for a walk. The decied the woods would be the best place. As there were walking they started to try samples of food. They had miised lunch and Munch would have it no other way. They came to these big, juicy, strawberries. They each took one and inhaled it. They continued on there way. Soon they became aware that they heard the snappings of twigs when they were not moving! After awhile they became sleepy. They decided to rest.
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When they awoke they were surrouned by vermin. The leader was named Hisk. He told them, " Get up you pile of wind bags. Ya goning to me own Marshank now!

Chapter 2

Munch awoke rubbing his head. Looking over he sees Sneech unconscious. "Wake up," he said pushing him. Sneech sat up moaning. "Where are we," he asked? "It looks like a prison cell," replied Munch. Getting up he walked over to the door. Outside was a guard standing at attention. "Hey, let us out of here," yelled Munch! "Shut up yer big baby." "What do you want with us," yelled Sneech! "We didn't do anything to you!" "Sire Hisk thinks you two will make nice slaves, ha ha ha!" Walking back to the corner of the cell Sneech looked at Munch. "We're prisoners in here and we didn't even do anything." Discouraged he picked up a paw full of dirt and threw it at the wall. Munch looked at him surprised! "You just gave me an idea mate." "Oh yeah, what is it," replied Sneech sarcastically. "We can dig out of here!" "Yeah right." "Don't give up so easily," said Munch. "This better work," replied Sneech. "Now keep quiet so the guards don't hear." "Sire Hisk the two moles have been put in the prisoner cell," said Talick, Hisk's royal guard. "Good, good. Now make sure they don't get lazy. We need strong slaves! Also, send for Kogarth, I want an update on Loamhedge! The day is near when we will gather our horde to crush our enemies there!"
Chapter 3

A stoat garyd came walking down the hall. He goes into the cell that the two young un' are in. His name is Sharptooth. "Get you up you miserible slaves." Munch and Sneech get up quickley. "Yes sir." they both replie at the same time. "That's what I's like," Sharptooth says "Some smart beasts!" Munch and Sneech smil inward. "OK. Lets get amove om it. You are going to have to get bulit up if you are going to carry stones to help finish the new wing of Marshank."
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Kogarth the Spy was in a bad mood. In his latest adventure he had wounded his paw. The cut was now festered. Hurt so mad that there were traces of tears on the hard weasel's face. Talick the Pine Marten came in and inform him that he was going to go to Loamhedge Abbey. The weasel stuck out his toung and said, " I ain't goin' ta no Abbey! Abbeys are fer good beasts. Me bad beast." Talick took out his new gift from Sire Hisk. It was a whip. He took it and whip poor Kogarth. "You are going to do Sire Hisk wishs weasel." "Yes sir". When it was dark Kogarth sliped out and headed for the Abbey.
Chapter 4
Munch and Sneech smiled evil like! "What are you smiling like that for," asked the guard? Fast as lightning the two threw dirt in his eyes! He dropped his spear and grabbed his eyes in pain! Quickly picking up the spear Munch ran him through without a moments hesitation. They pulled him in the cell and shut the door. Uncovering the hole they had started earlier, they worked for two hours straight finishing their escape route! Poking his head up through the dirt Sneech looked around. "I dont see anything mate," he said. "Good then crawl out and lets get out of here," came the reply! Getting out of the hole the two moles ran off in the darkness only armed with a spear and the keys to their cell.
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"Sire Hisk I have sent Kogarth on his way to Loamhedge," said Talick. "Good. Maybe now we will get some helpful information on our enemies! Get those slaves up here now! I need to ask them some questions. Hey! Now that I think about it I sent for those two hours ago!! Get them up here now and kill that fool guard for not obeying me!" "Yes Sire," was Talicks reply. He bowed and left the room. A few moments later he returned out of breath! "Sire Hisk the guard is dead and the slaves are GONE!!"

Chapter 5
Hisk Glared at the beast. He pointed to a nearby stoat. "Ascord, take 2-score of warriors with you. Find those slaves and the one who made 'em do et!" Soon, Ascord was outside, with the best fighters. Combing his way throught the small forest, he made his way to 10 otters. Ascord was suprised. He thought they would be running, but they stayed. He ordered his archers tho kill the otters. 5 fell, and they retreated. Ascord knew it was impossible to go after the slaves, they were long gone. Besides, he only had 32 fighters left. "Bremmun, take a score with you, and set up traps in the forest." Ascord prayed that Hisk wouldn't be mad. It was not the day for Ascord. He lay wounded, All his paws cut off. Hisk flounced around. "Only ten otters, and you lost 8 good fighters, I'm displeased. When I want something done, you will do it!" With that, he scliced Ascord's head off. "Bremmun, take 6 score with you, and do not come back, until you have the slaves." Bremmun silently nodded, and scurried away from angery Hisk. The guards quickly took the pieces of Ascord away.

Chapter 6
Munch and Sneech were a full day ahead of Bremmun and his troops. They were headed toward Loamheadge so they could rest and eat. "I bet they are coming after us right now," said Munch, weary from the long days walk. "Of course they are coming after us. We are escaped slaves," replied Sneech sarcastically. "Well lets keep going. Maybe we can reach Loamhedge in the next two days." The two moles got up and started walking again. As they walked through the forest Sneech noticed some tree branches shaking wildly! "What do you think that is," he asked Munch who was also looking at the trees? "I don't know, but whatever it is I think it wants us out of here!" As he finished talking some creatures covered in tunics with hoods jumped out of the trees and ran at them from behind bushes! They were surrounded in a second by the hooded creatures! "I think we are in serious trouble," whined Munch as he looked at his frightened companion!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bremmun and his troops were searching the woods when they heard a scream! They all dashed to where the noise came from to see two rats down in a pit with sharpened poles sticking through them! "Where did this trap come from," asked Bremmun angrily!!?" No beast answered. "Well keep up the search and try not to kill yourselves." The search continued for awhile until they heard yet another scream! This time a weasel was hanging by his foot from a tree. "Cut that foolish beast down," said Bremmun madder than ever! "That fool Ascord set traps for the slaves and is killing us!! Everybeast back to the castle and be careful." Once back at Marshank Bremun kneeled before HIsk. "Sire, Ascord left traps for the slaves and ended up killing three and wounding two of our beasts. The hunt was unsuccessful." Without another word spken Hisk beheaded Bremmun and yelled, "Some beast get me back my slaves, NOW!!" All the beasts in the room left in a hurry as the raging leader threw everything in sight!

Chapter 7
as Hisk threw the worst tempers ever possible, the beasts who dare stay in the room look at him with very nervous eyes, they gulped as Hisk pick up a spear, and threw it, a black wolf ducked, and the spear landed right in a rat's throat! the wolf is muttering curses under her breath, then Hisk manage to calm down, just a bit, then he yelled out to a stoat Guard, "Get me Rajahs IMMEDIATELY!" the stoat ran out of the room, the black wolf try to settle Hisk with his favorite drink, and whip to torture a slave with, but he's still in rage, then a chubby grey rat came in, he has scars over his scars, and Hisk said with the cruelest of cruelest voice, "I want you, and 3 scores of others to find those blasted mole slaves, and loamhedge, and watch out for traps that the-Beep! Ascord left, I want you to take some of the best scouts to help you avoid those traps, but if you fell, I'll be casting your skull in sliver, and hang it up on my main hall!" Rajahs saluted, and took the remaining beasts in the room, which is half a score, then he gets 2 and a half score of others, then they set off in the woods. * * * * * meanwhile Munch and Sneech look at the cloak figures with wide eyes full of fear, then suddenly a voice said, "Hold it chaps, I don't think we should be attacking jolly ol' moles when we want bally, and stinking vermin,wot." the moles sigh in relief when they heard hare speech, the figures uncloak themselves, and it's a score of hares! the largest hare walk up to the moles, and he said, "Sorry to frighten you, but we thought you were bally vermin, not jolly ol' moles, and I'm Fleetblade, the leader of this patrol, wot." then they introduce themselves, and munch said, "I'm hungery." sneech added, "Your always hungery, munch!" then Fleetblade smiled with his brown eyes, "we can agree with that mole athingy, we're bamish!" then they rolled out dinner, unkowning that a pair of twrinkling sapphires is spying on them.
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then the owner of the eyes return to the temporay camp, and she reported to Rajahs, "I saw the 2 moles, and a score of hares, they're eating a mountain of food, and one of the hare's name is Fleetblade." Rajahs replied with a tinted smiled, "good, Darkphoenix, guess not only we get the moles back, but we get a score of extra slaves, very well, have a candied chestnut, just one." Darkphoenix takes the wrinkliest one, and rushes off, knowing that Rajahs is worse for tempers then Hisk, for one minute, he's a smiling clown, then the next, the unlucky beast will want to be in the hotest and dankest reaches of the burning abyess of hellstooth, she mutters about having to take orders from him, then she went and talked about this to her friends, then the next morning, they attacked the woodlanders, who woked up, and was ready to leave the area

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10