Title:
Original Sin
Pairings: RelenaxHeero, 2x1
Circle/DJka: Coco & D.D. House
Date Published: 1996

  • Artwork: It really doesn't do anything for me one way or the other. The artwork itself isn't bad, but all of the characters look a little on the plain side (when Relena is the most attractive one of the bunch, you know something's off ^^;;)

  • Plot: There are 2 dj stories here, and then a third texted story at the
    end. The first involves Heero having a very... distressing dream. About Relena. O.o;; But she's a boy, so its all good. Or at least yaoi.... The second is an A/U fantasy smut story, with Heero as an angel who has either been captured or rescued (there's far too much kanji here for me to figure it out) by Duo who appears to be some sort of adventurer who has his way with the pretty angel. Features a weepy Heero with wings, but considering what Duo does with that crucifix, I'd probably be weeping too....

  • Opinion: The main selling feature here is the novelty factor: male-type Relena seme. Heero suffers from uke syndrome, which I personally don't mind, but will probably put some people off. (Note: The first story will eventually be scanned and uploaded to my Aesth. page....)



    Reviewed by Arakune


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