Comments on "There Was a Mole on Your Cheek"

very gripping.

Aiko - 7/5/03

This poem itself is proof that you have a gift. A Wonderful one... and the ability to touch peoples hearts and minds

Kate - 7/6/03

Wow! Nothing grand enough to say about this...

Tom - 7/6/03

Complete overload of emotions. I'm speechless. Words can't descibe how much that poem touched me.

Floetry Spades - 7/6/03

It's strange that something so terrible ends up being so beautiful. I read a poem (not!) on another site this morning. Written from the perspective of a wife wishing she could leave an abusive relationship. The poem (not!) left me angry for a lot of reasons. They didn't have a clue about the subject, or object, of what they were writing about. God I wish I could show them your piece. Thank you for such truth.

Gillian - 7/6/03

wow....this piece saddened me yet made me thankful at the same time. not what i expected from the title at all. what i am feeling after reading this cannot even really be put into words. your life and your writing always amaze me, and i love learning more about your through your writing. this piece really touched me, and i thank you for sharing it with us.

Aschmutt - 7/7/03

Powerful. Mole removal could be a valid defense tactic... especially in this situation. Great poem.

Max - 7/8/03

...this is a wonderful piece of work. It touchs on so many emotions, and conveys them in such a way, that the reader feels them as clearly as the heat from a camp fire.

Gerry - 7/10/03

You are a true talent and that is where your beauty shines.

Aurora - 7/10/03 a beautiful expression from a beautiful person...This poem is amazing...

Lomax - 7/10/03

There's a certain truth to this poem that knocks you on your ass. I loved it.

Xcess - 8/21/03