Comments on "The Next to Go"

I like this Jenn. I get where I feel: don't think it.. don't write it.... just be quiet and let it be.. and you capture it and more in this poem.

Kate - 12/10/03

i feel I can relate to this.. it speaks to me of fear and insecurity if I understand it correctly. You captured a melancholy mood very well, and the closing images are sweeping and well done.

Richard - 12/23/03