Comments on "Light Me"

very nicely painted scene and nice use of repetition. it's so ironic how mankind isolates himself because of his suspicions/perceptions of others. bravo the ravyn!

Andi - 1/1/04

tightly written, i think it would sound good read aloud. the images are strong... an interesting read..

Richard - 1/1/04

Wow... I could give a bunch of reasons to back that up, but bottom line: Wow.

Anita - 1/2/04

i get the feeling of sustained innocence in a cruel world from this poem... and some memories of the loneliness/self-preservation stress of traveling solo...

Agnes - 1/2/04

Excellent use of images to accentuate the mood of the piece. Great read.

Max - 1/2/04