Comments on "At the End of the Day"

Sounds like a pleasant end to a day. Nice poem Jenn

Charlie - 8/2/03

A beautiful picture, very well described. I have a thing for the use of numbers in poetry, too. 'seventy-one crows' can be given such interesting meanings.

Don - 8/4/03

hey, ravynn, that was so descriptive, so elegant. loved it. you totally gave end-of-day's the treatment they deserve.

Pam - 8/3/03

beautiful and a wonderful way to imagine ending the day.

Beth - 8/4/03

wow, Jenn..what a vividly imagined day, leading to the hoped for peace of night!

Ken - 8/7/03

mm vivid indeed your imagery is spectacular the movement of varying aspects all fluttering to a close,

Lee - 8/7/03