Comments on "Death of an Innocent"

Gripping and pulsing. I found myself flinching from what I knew was coming. Great piece of work, this.

Kristine - 12/4/02

..tragic, yet beautiful poem...*prayers for his soul*

Maria - 12/4/02

Riveting. Heartbreaking.

Don C. - 12/4/02

A VERY powerful piece, so tragic yet so true of many sad lives. Very well done!

David - 12/5/02

To even try to explain how this poem touched my is beyond me. You captured a lot, extremely well! thank you for another great writing!

Kimberly - 12/21/02

You tell stories through verse extremely well. Nicely crafted and thank you for sharing.

Max - 6/12/03

The flows fantastic although to be honest I find the way it's just one long stanza makes it hard to concentrate on - too packed with ideas to be able to see clearly.

John A. - 6/12/03

wow, this is amazing, it really touched me deep, a very well told tale.

Morella - 8/10/03

Absolutely stunning and shocking, desperate... dunno what else to say. Your ability with emotion is incredible.

Don - 8/31/03