Comments on "All My Yesterdays"

Good stuff here. I really like the ending..how it ties back to the beginning. You put the feeling into words very well.

Vashtia - 5/14/01

Powerful writing. With some valid questions. Excellent job.

Adrian - 11/11/02

Superb expression of inner turmoil. Excellent closure in those last two lines.

Chris - 11/11/02

well yesterday is supposed to be forgotten...or forgiven...great writing....

Brian - 11/11/02

there are times when even the magic moon veils her light from night's eyes, hides quarters and halves ... but then comes the time when her full roundness lights midnight skies in blue-silvers and all gaze in awe and wonder...

Maria - 5/26/03

Sometimes, when things are bad, we think that God has left us. But I think, He's there, we're just so immersed in our problems that we can't sense Him... If I am really your friend, I'll still be your friend tomorrow even with your yesterdays.

Rommel - 5/26/03

Painfully powerful! Incredible poem and heart-wrenching question! Would those who profess to be our friends be so if they knew all our secrets? I wonder....

John M. - 5/28/03

you're a true poet. great technique. :-)

John F. - 5/29/03

Only if they are true friends today......Great write..Blessings

~EE~ - 12/08/03

such a beautifully expressed poem.

Richard - 12/23/03