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Monday, 10 November 2003

music => happy jack
i'm totally jealous of the amount of comments erika has.

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stream of conscience
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i gave the word, took on my aspect, and raised my attibute. the feeling of greatness was fluent in me. life is what happens when your busy making other plans and when i told the man to take what he can, and from there and then i've been chasing him down. i think i remember the point when dream fell behind reality. i think i remember when i because second best. why did they come just to boo us? the tale of the tape, life's instant replay? or better yet rewind. the change in the air, and the world coming to it's ________ at the end of the tunnel or the head of a pin. the beast rolls on half a tank of gas, moving through time. i tell you, coherancy is over rated. the dragon of today is the gecko of tomorrow, it's been like that for ever.

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some don't consider that poetry. i'll keep me opinion to myself.

Posted by jazz/hippy0 at 9:56 PM EST
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Monday, 10 November 2003 - 10:10 PM EST

Name: Byron

If you haven't already, go track down some Al Purdy. It's poetry alright, and though different than what you're doing here, a good example of the style you're using.

- Byron

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Monday, 10 November 2003 - 10:44 PM EST

Name: starts with k ends with ate

my streams of consciousness never work. i try to hard to finish sentences and my brain gets ahead of my pen. i find an idea i like and want to completely explore it. my mind has jumped to a ton of different things. and then i go back to the thought i'd had with my first thought and explore it, but that's artificial because i'm bringing it out of storage. i tried in philosophy, but with limited success. i should try harder in that class. you will notice my effort here? or perhaps not. i like the boy patrick in that class, but i don't really know him yet. oh and the guy who sits on my left reminds me so much of colin peacock, it's a hoot. i'm turning into a nerd(see my comment on kirstie's blog). that's right, COMMENT and KIRSTIE. check it out. does this satisfy some of your comment cravings? i crave apple, but only have one left. off to work and i don't even get paid.

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Monday, 10 November 2003 - 11:30 PM EST

Name: erika

everybody loves comments. and they comment more if you write more stuff. haven't read mine today yet, but yeah, comments!

i'm confused. i've never done any stream of conscience type things. i should try it. i like rambling.

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