Can you help finish this song.....[cat101]

honestly ... I can't feel a good rhythm in the breathing pattern of the words
I would have to totally rewrite it to make it a song.

now what kind of music where you thinking of it going with
I would also reorder the verses.

The casino's packed like sardines
the dealers don painted smiles
with my cards face down before me
I hold my breath for awhile

I wish I had a Crystal ball
So in the future I could see
you and me [personally I think that makes a better chorus]

So tired of seven card no peek studs
Without answers to my questions
Never knowing when to fold or stand
With their empty handed suggestions

[chorus]

I cannot tell when your bluffing
and I'm oh so afraid to call
you know that I don't like losing
see I don"t like this game at all

[chorus] 

ŠThorbArt2006
originally Posted: 4/28/2006 12:32:59 PM