The Critics

Yes, I have critics. And rather good ones at that. This page is mostly here just to thank them, so here they are appearing in alphabetical order, the critics Breen (Beano), Liz(Mattress or Starkey), and Nat(Miep). Thank you guys for reading the fan-fic while I writeing it, and telling me what you thought. Also thank you for giving me ideas of what to add and telling me what you want to happen. This page is for you three, so if thers something you want me to add, just email me and tell me what it is and I'll put it on here.

Liz and Nat

Kim and Breen