Editing paper, lalala.....hehe...all commas are STOOPID!
(comments: I love this paragraph.
This is not stoopid-it's lovely.
Excellent and appropriate usage of commas!! (and a smily face with the exclamation points saying Yippie! hehehehehehehe)
Effective use of contrast in description
A familiar scene - good.
I don't think this is too emotional!!

Mmmkay dont ask.

Nobody wanted their pictures taken!
L-R Jen, Ashley, and Malorie

We still cant figure out what that is...

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