html>
Evaluation
Evaluation
Title:The Shaft
Genre:Suspense
When You edited, what were the biggest changes you made?
I just edited the Grammer mainly
What do you like best about this piece?
I don't have anything particular that I love about this piece. I think the thing I like best is the Characters.
What do you like the least? What do you think could still be improved?
That I didn't know how to have my criminal mastermind talk.
What Literary techniques (specific to this genre) or poetic devices did you use in this piece>
I used a ton of characterization. It was really cool how it switched between them all.
Overall, how would you rate this piece compared to the other stories or poems you have written?
I think that it is good because like i said it stands on it's own. It just seems complete.
Home Page
The Shaft
The Story Menu
