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my angel my angel

this one has some spacing problems that, if i wasn't too damned lazy to change, would add a very pleasant aesthetic quality/impact to the whole thing...i hope to fix it some time before the century.

she speaks
(i listen)
her lips, so beautiful
innocent
loving
caring
speak to me of a time
when they endured a pain
-unheard of-
a time of sadness
‹tears›
and youth (lost)
-youth-
her lips, so passionate
exquisite
unique
tell me of a time
when blood was not all
that flowed through them
...they are not so innocent...
a time when, no matter how she tried
[resist]
they could not stop his steaming fluid
as it mixed with her tears
and coursed down her cheeks.....

she speaks (i listen)
i have no choice
her voice penetrates my heart
and i can't resist
(why would i?)
i hang on her every word
and keep her story *locked*
inside my memory
-i'll never forget-
her lips (the epitome) of beauty
tell me of this horrible past
[history]
i can't believe it
(i can't not)
how could someone
(anyone?)
touch
[violate]
her so?
this person
[angel]
sent by God
[destined]
to be the one i would love
-the one i love-
could not be (was) abused
why? why her??
(why not me???)
WHY HER?!?!
[anger]
[ANGER]
pity, regret, sorrow...
guilt?
i did nothing
...i did not know her at the time...
had i know her i'd have (tried) to stop it
i must protect her
[she can fight for herself]
‹GUILT?›
grief...i mourn the death
of a life that never was
-admire- she fights
(she fought)
it won't bring her (me) down
-determined-
[fight]
she finds she can live like
a "(normal") person
nosrep ("lamron)" a
she can fight through it
...she needs me...
[i ‹need› her]
she holds me
i keep her in my arms
-she's mine-
she's hers
i run my hand down her cheek
over the spot once touched
by her ‹tears›
and once soiled (destroyed)
by the semen of another
twisted demented sick
[man] [devil] [SATAN]
my lips touch her cheek
-gently- (with love)
i kiss the spot
[demons] ‹exorcised›
she hugs (squeezes) me gently
and though he will always hide
[coward]
in a corner of her mind memory childhood
i see in her eyes
[blue] [deep] [infinite]
that all
(angels have come from heaven to cleanse and remove the
[burden] from her (my) heart.)
is well........... [we have each other]

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