Deadly Obsession new log lines
Mood:  caffeinated
Dear d, I've been working on rewording the log line for Deadly Obsession. Here are 2 more. [b]Mine:[/b][P] Deadly Obsession(working title) is a suspense story about a woman novelist who’s having trouble getting rid of her boyfriend who won’t take no for an answer, asks her former fiance for help. He will help her, but with one stipulation, he wants her to marry him. Is that something she’s willing to give into since he left her at the altar once? [B]Someone esles version:[/B][P] When a horror novelist's obsessional boyfriend becomes her stalker she turns to her ex-fiance for help, but discovers he has ulterior motives.

Deadly Obsession - log line & hook
Mood:  a-ok
Dear d,

Here is the log line & hook for Deadly Obession.
Enjoy.

Jerry

DEADLY OBSESSION

Threatened by her ex-boyfriend Jessica reluctantly turns to her former fiance for his help, but he won’t let her get away from until she’s back in his life.

Deadly Obsession log line
Mood:  a-ok
Dear d,

Word Slingers, a writers village univeristy study group I belong to has started to a novel from scratch. So far we've done character bio's, story ideas, and log lines. This week we are doing hooks. I'll include the chosen log line for D.O. with the hook in my next entry.

As far as the MS goes I only have a Prologue, and 3 possible chapters drafted.

Maybe the exercises we get in WS will actually help me complete this novel.

Will enter you later.

Jerry

Dear D,

This is my 1st entry.

Most of this journal will be a comnination of ramblings of practically anything. Of course,a lot of stuff about my fiction writing will be entered.

Btw, the D in Dear D stands for diary.

Enter you later.

JerryR

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