Dear d, I've been working on rewording the log line for Deadly Obsession. Here are 2 more. [b]Mine:[/b][P] Deadly Obsession(working title) is a suspense story about a woman novelist who’s having trouble getting rid of her boyfriend who won’t take no for an answer, asks her former fiance for help. He will help her, but with one stipulation, he wants her to marry him. Is that something she’s willing to give into since he left her at the altar once? [B]Someone esles version:[/B][P] When a horror novelist's obsessional boyfriend becomes her stalker she turns to her ex-fiancé for help, but discovers he has ulterior motives.