Proper punctuation is oftentimes
overlooked as less important than, say, grammar
or sentence structure or even correct spelling.
Most professors and teachers, however, deduct
marks for glaring errors of punctuation or the
absence of punctuation. After all, if you are
unsure what mark of punctuation to use or where
to use it, style guides are everywhere, whether
hard copy or online versions. Lack of proper punctuation plays havoc with the way your audience reads your sentences and disrupts the rhythm of otherwise good writing. Indeed, a missing period or comma can change the entire meaning of a sentence. Just as you
should always spellcheck or keep a dictionary
beside you when writing, similarly it's a good
idea to consult your punctuation reference
rather than guessing or ignoring the matter as
insignificant. The following rules of usage are
by no means comprehensive, but they should give
you a start on the proper use of the major
punctuation marks. There are 14. Here, MOE will
take a look at the comma, period, question
mark, exclamation mark, colon, semicolon,
hyphen, dash, parentheses, brackets, ellipsis,
apostrophe, quotation marks, and the
slash.
RULES FOR COMMA USAGE
1. Use a comma to separate the elements in a
series (three or more things), including the
last two. "He hit the ball, dropped the bat,
and ran to first base." You may have learned
that the comma before the "and" is unnecessary,
which is fine if you're in control of things.
However, there are situations when, if you
don't use this comma (especially when the list
is complex or lengthy), these last two items in
the list will try to glom together (like
macaroni and cheese). Using a comma between all
the items in a series, including the last two,
avoids this problem. This last comma—the one
between the word "and" and the preceding
word—is often called the serial comma.
2. Use a comma plus a little conjunction (and,
but, for, nor, yet, or, so) to connect two
independent clauses, as in "He hit the ball
well, but he ran toward third base."
Contending that the coordinating conjunction is
adequate separation, some writers will leave
out the comma in a sentence with short,
balanced independent clauses (such as we see in
the example just given). If there is ever any
doubt, however, use the comma, as it is always
correct in this situation.
3. One of the most frequent errors in comma
usage is the placement of a comma after a
coordinating conjunction. We cannot say that
the comma will always come before the
conjunction and never after, but it would be a
rare event, indeed, that we need to follow a
coordinating conjunction with a comma. When
speaking, we do sometimes pause after the
little conjunction, but there is seldom a good
reason to put a comma there.
4. See the note below regarding the use of a
comma between two independent clauses when the
second independent clause begins with a
parenthetical element or adverbial clause.
5. Use a comma to set off introductory
elements, as in "Running toward third base, he
suddenly realized how stupid he looked."
It is permissible to omit the comma after a
brief introductory element if the omission does
not result in confusion or hesitancy in
reading. If there is ever any doubt, use the
comma, as it is always correct.
6. Use a comma to set off parenthetical
elements, as in "'Yackety Sax', which has a
snappy little beat, is not looped." By
"parenthetical element," we mean a part of a
sentence which can be removed without changing
the essential meaning of that sentence. The
parenthetical element is sometimes called
"added information." This is the most difficult
rule in punctuation because it is sometimes
unclear what is "added" or "parenthetical" and
what is essential to the meaning of a sentence.
7. When a parenthetical element — an
interjection, adverbial modifier, or even an
adverbial clause — follows a coordinating
conjunction used to connect two independent
clauses, we do not put a comma in front of the
parenthetical element.
The Red Sox were leading the league at the end
of May, but of course, they always do well in
the spring. [no comma after "but"]
The Yankees didn't do so well in the early
going, but frankly, everyone expects them to
win the season. [no comma after "but"]
The Tigers spent much of the season at the
bottom of the league, and even though they
picked up several promising rookies, they
expect to be there again next year. [no comma
after "and"]
8. When both a city's name and that city's
state or country's name are mentioned together,
the state or country's name is treated as a
parenthetical element.
We visited Hartford, Connecticut, last summer.
Paris, France, is sometimes called "The City of
Lights."
When the state becomes a possessive form, this
rule is no longer followed:
Hartford, Connecticut's investment in the
insurance industry is well known.
Also, when the state or country's name becomes
part of a compound structure, the second comma
is dropped:
Heublein, a Hartford, Connecticut-based
company, is moving to another state.
9. An absolute phrase is always treated as a
parenthetical element, as is an interjection.
An addressed person's name is also always
parenthetical.
Their years of training now forgotten, the
soldiers broke ranks.
Yes, it is always a matter, of course, of
preparation and attitude.
I'm telling you, Honeybuns, I couldn't be more
surprised. (I told Honeybuns I couldn't be more
surprised. [no commas])
10. Use a comma to separate coordinate
adjectives. You could think of this as "That
tall, distinguished, good looking fellow" rule
(as opposed to "the little old lady"). If you
can put an and or a but between the adjectives,
a comma will probably belong there. For
instance, you could say, "He is a tall and
distinguished fellow" or "I live in a very old
and run-down house." So you would write, "He is
a tall, distinguished man" and "I live in a
very old, run-down house." But you would
probably not say, "She is a little and old
lady," or "I live in a little and purple
house," so commas would not appear between
little and old or between little and
purple.
11. Use a comma to set off quoted elements.
Because we don't use quoted material all the
time, even when writing, this is probably the
most difficult rule to remember in comma usage.
It is a good idea to find a page from an
article that uses several quotations, photocopy
that page, and keep it in front of you as a
model when you're writing. Generally, use a
comma to separate quoted material from the rest
of the sentence that explains or introduces the
quotation:
Summing up this argument, Andy Kaufman writes,
"The purpose and strength of the romantic image of the child had been above all to establish a
relation between childhood and adult
consciousness."
If an attribution of a quoted element comes in
the middle of the quotation, two commas will be
required. But be careful not to create a comma
splice in so doing.
"The question is," said Stardust, "whether you can
make words mean so many things."
"I should like to buy an egg, please," she said
timidly. "How do you sell them?"
Be careful not to use commas to set off quoted
elements introduced by the word that or quoted
elements that are embedded in a larger
structure:
Christy Moonbeam writes that "[t]he purpose and
strength of . . ."
We often say "Sorry" when we don't really mean
it.
And, instead of a comma, use a colon to set off
explanatory or introductory language from a
quoted element that is either very formal or
long (especially if it's longer than one
sentence):
Angel39 had this to say about the
nineteenth-century's use of children
in fiction: "The purpose and strength of . . .
. "
12. Use commas to set off phrases that express
contrast.
Some say the world will end in ice, not
fire.
It was her money, not her charm or personality,
that first attracted him.
The puppies were cute, but incredibly messy.
(Some writers will leave out the comma that
sets off a contrasting phrase beginning with
but.)
13. Use a comma to avoid confusion. This is
often a matter of consistently applying rule
#3.
For most the year is already finished.
[incorrect]
For most, the year is already finished.
[correct]
Outside the lawn was cluttered with hundreds of
broken branches. [incorrect]
Outside, the lawn was cluttered with hundreds
of broken branches. [correct]
14. Never use only one comma between a subject
and its verb. "Believing completely and
positively in oneself is essential for
success." [Although readers might pause after
the word "oneself," there is no reason to put a
comma there.]
15. Typographical Reasons: Between a city and
a state [Hartford, Connecticut], a date and the
year [June 15, 1997*], a name and a title when
the title comes after the name [Bob Downey,
Professor of English], in long numbers
[123,456], etc. (Although you will often see a
comma between a name a suffix — Bob Downey,
Jr., Richard Harrison, III — this comma is no
longer regarded as necessary by most copy
editors, and some individuals never used a
comma there at all [Martin Luther King Jr.]).
Use Commas With Caution
There seem to be many reasons for using commas,
and we haven't listed them all. Yet the biggest
problem that most students have with commas is
their overuse. A pause in reading is not always
a reliable reason to use a comma. Try not to
use a comma unless you can apply a specific
rule from this page to do so.
Concentrating on the proper use of commas is
not mere form for form's sake. Indeed, it
causes writers to review their understanding of
structure and to consider carefully how their
sentences are crafted.
THE PERIOD
Use a period [ . ] at the end of a sentence
that makes a statement. There is no space
between the last letter and the period. Use one
space between the period and the first letter
of the next sentence. This goes against the
grain for people using the typography instilled
by generations of old-fashioned typewriter
users, but modern word-processors nicely
accommodate the spacing after a period and
double-spacing after a period can only serve to
discombobulate the good intentions of your
software.
1. Use a period at the end of an indirect
question.
The teacher asked why Maria had left out the
easy exercises.
2. Use a period with abbreviations:
Dr. Espinoza arrived from Washington, D.C., at
6 p.m.
Notice that when the period ending the
abbreviation comes at the end of a sentence, it
will also suffice to end the sentence. On the
other hand, when an abbreviation ends a
question or exclamation, it is appropriate to
add a question mark or exclamation mark after
the abbreviation-ending period:
Did you enjoy living in Washington, D.C.?
3. Acronyms (abbreviations [usually made up of
the first letter from a series of words] which
we pronounce as words, not a series of letters)
usually do not require periods: NATO, NOW,
VISTA, LASER, SCUBA, RADAR. Abbreviations we
pronounce by spelling out the letters may or
may not use periods and you will have to use a
dictionary to be sure: FBI, NAACP, NCAA,
U.S.A., U.N.I.C.E.F., etc.
The teacher asked why Maria had left out the
easy exercises.
4.Use a period with abbreviations:
Dr. Domania arrived from Washington, D.C., at
6 p.m.
Notice that when the period ending the
abbreviation comes at the end of a sentence, it
will also suffice to end the sentence. On the
other hand, when an abbreviation ends a
question or exclamation, it is appropriate to
add a question mark or exclamation mark after
the abbreviation-ending period:
Did you enjoy living in Washington,
D.C.?
5. Acronyms (abbreviations [usually made up of
the first letter from a series of words] which
we pronounce as words, not a series of letters)
usually do not require periods: NATO, NOW,
VISTA, LASER, SCUBA, RADAR. Abbreviations we
pronounce by spelling out the letters may or
may not use periods and you will have to use a
dictionary to be sure: FBI, NAACP, NCAA,
U.S.A., U.N.I.C.E.F., etc.
THE QUESTION MARK
1. Use a question mark [ ? ] at the end of a
direct question. It is considered bad form to
use a question mark in combination with other
marks, although that is often done in informal
prose in an attempt to convey complex tones: He
told you what!? That combination (or similar
combination) of punctuation marks is sometimes
called an interrobang, but the interrobang has
no role in academic prose. Personally speaking,
MOE regards this as truly amateur and rather
juvenile.
2. A tag question is a device used to turn a
statement into a question. It nearly always
consists of a pronoun, a helping verb, and
sometimes the word "not". Although it begins as
a statement, the tag question prevails when it
comes to the end-mark: use a question mark.
Notice that when the statement is positive, the
tag question is expressed in the negative; when
the statement is negative, the tag question is
positive. (There are a few exceptions to this,
frequently expressing an element of surprise or
sarcasm: "So you've made your first million,
have you?" "Oh, that's your plan, is it?")
The following are more typical tag
questions:
He should quit smoking, shouldn't he?
He
shouldn't have quit his diet, should he?
They're not doing very well, are they?
Keyplayer finished on time, didn't he?
There were too many people on the dock, weren't
there?
Be careful of this last one; it's not "weren't
they."
3. Be careful not to put a question mark at
the end of an indirect question.
Kent Kyle asked the students what they were
doing.
I asked Marisa Tomei if she had a date.
4. On the other hand, be careful to put a
question mark at the end of a sentence that is,
in fact, a direct question. (Sometimes student
writers will simply forget.) Rhetorical
questions (asked when an answer is not really
expected), by the way, are questions and
deserve to end with a question mark: How else
should we end them, after all?
5. When a question is embedded within a
statement, end the sentence with a question
mark.
We can get to Waterloo quicker, can't we, if we
take the interstate?
6. Sometimes a question will actually end with
a series of brief questions. When that happens,
especially when the brief questions are more or
less follow-up questions to the main question,
each of the little questions can begin with a
lowercase letter and end with a question mark.
Who is responsible for executing the plan?
the coach? the coaching staff? the players?
THE EXCLAMATION MARK
Use an exclamation point [ ! ] at the end of an
emphatic declaration,
interjection, or command.
"No!" he yelled. "Do it now!"
In academic prose, an exclamation point is
used rarely, if at all, and in newspaper
writing the exclamation point is virtually
nonexistent. A common habit irritates MOE to no
end and that is the use of several exclamation
marks [!!!!] Use this mark sparingly.
THE
COLON
Use a colon [ : ] before a list or an
explanation that is preceded by a clause that
can stand by itself. Think of the colon as a
gate, inviting one to go on:
There is only one thing left to do now: confess
while you still have time.
You nearly always have a sense of what is going
to follow or be on the other side of the colon.
We will often use a colon to separate an
independent clause (often of a rather formal
nature) from a quotation that the clause
introduces:
The acting director often referred to her
favorite quotation from Shakespeare's Tempest:
"We are such stuff as dreams are made on;
and our little life is rounded with a sleep."
THE
SEMICOLON
Use a semicolon [ ; ] (A) to help sort out a
monster list:
There were citizens from Bangor, Maine;
Hartford, Connecticut; Boston, Massachusetts;
and Newport, Rhode Island.
OR
We had four professors on our committee: Peter
Wursthorn, Professor of Mathematics; Ronald
Pepin, Professor of English; Cynthia
Greenblatt, Professor of Education; and Nada
Light, Professor of Nursing.
(B) to separate closely related independent
clauses:
My grandmother seldom goes to bed this early;
she's afraid she'll miss out on something.
The semicolon allows the writer to imply a
relationship between nicely balanced ideas
without actually stating that relationship.
(Instead of saying because my grandmother is
afraid she'll miss out on something, we have
implied the because. Thus the reader is
involved in the development of an idea—a clever
way of engaging the reader's attention.)
(C) It is rare, but certainly possible, that
you will want a semicolon to separate two
independent clauses even when those two
independent clauses are connected by a
coordinating conjunction. This is especially
true when the independent clauses are complex
or lengthy and when there are commas within
those independent clauses. You might consider
breaking those two independent clauses into
separate sentences when this happens.
Coach Claw realized that his next recruiting
class contained two superb guards, a fine post
player, and a power forward; but as of the end
of the spring recruiting season, he was still
pushing to discover better first-year players
for the interior positions.
THE HYPHEN
Although smart word-processors seem to have
taken over the job of hyphenating broken words
at the right-hand end of our lines and
spellcheckers can review our use of hyphens in
other places, these technological marvels are
by no means infallible. Microsoft Word, for
example, flags as mispelled almost any word
with an unhyphenated prefix: antidiscrimination
and cogeneration, for example, are marked as
misspelled words and re-sign, co-bra,
ever-green, and be-loved are marked as
correctly hyphenated words by that software.
Generally, it is a good idea not to use
justified text in academic papers; that will
cut down on a lot of decisions about
hyphenating. The APA Publication Manual, in
fact, insists that you not break words at
line-endings in any case, but that can lead to
lines that are too brief and aesthetically
unbalanced.
The rules for hyphenating at line endings are
so complicated that no one can be expected to
keep track of them. If you're ever in a
situation where you have to hyphenate at
line-breaks, go to a dictionary—unless you can
explain why you would break experience between
the e and the r, that is, and then you can do
whatever you want. Remember that if you adjust
one line-break, that may well affect subsequent
line-breaks in the text. Probably the best
reference text for these decisions (next to
looking up everything in a dictionary, that is)
is The Chicago Manual of Style.
Hyphens have other uses:
creating compound words, particularly modifiers
before nouns (the well-known actor, my
six-year-old daughter, the out-of-date
curriculum,
writing numbers twenty-one to ninety-nine and
fractions (five-eighths, one-fourth),
creating compounds on-the-fly for fly-by-night
organizations;
adding certain prefixes to words: When a prefix
comes before a capitalized word or the prefix
is capitalized, use a hyphen (non-English,
A-frame, I-formation).
The prefixes self-, all-, and ex- nearly
always require a hyphen (ex-husband,
all-inclusive, self-control), and when the
prefix ends with the same letter that begins
the word, you will often use a hyphen
(anti-intellectual, de-emphasize), but not
always (unnatural, coordinate, cooperate).
There is no space between a hyphen and the
character on either side of it.
THE DASH
Use a dash [ — ] (or two hyphens [ -- ] on
old-fashioned typewriters) or dashes as a
super-comma or set of super-commas to set off
parenthetical elements, especially when those
elements contain internal forms of punctuation:
All four of them—Bob, Jeffrey, Jason, and
Brett—did well in college.
In most word-processors, the dash is created
by holding down the option key and hitting the
key that has the underline mark above the
hyphen. This can vary, though, from program to
program. Usually, you get an en-dash (see
below) with the option + hyphen key, and you
get the larger em-dash (used more frequently)
with option + shift + hyphen keys.
Do not use dashes to set apart material when
commas would do the work for you. Usually,
there are no spaces between the dash and the
letters on either side of a dash, although the
dash is frequently shown that way in documents
prepared for the World Wide Web and e-mail for
typographical and aesthetic reasons (because
the WWW authoring and e-mail clients have
little control over line-breaks).
In writing dialogue, the dash is used to
show breaks in thought and shifts in tone:
"How many times have I asked you not to —"
Jasion suddenly stopped talking and looked out
the window.
"Not to do what?" I prompted.
"Not to — Oh heck, I forget!"
A dash is sometimes used to set off
concluding lists and explanations in a more
informal and abrupt manner than the colon. We
seldom see the dash used this way in formal,
academic prose.
Modern word processors provide for two kinds
of dashes: the regular dash or em-dash (which
is the same width as the letter "M," — ) and
the en-dash (which is about half the width, the
same as the letter "n," – ). We use the em-dash
for most purposes and keep its smaller brother,
the en-dash, for marking the space between
dates in a chronological range:
"Kennedy's presidency (1961–1963) marked an
extraordinary era. . . ."; in time: 6:30–8:45
p.m.; and between numbers and letters in an
indexing scheme: table 13–C, CT Statute 144–A.
Some reference manuals are urging editors and
publishers to get rid of the en-dash altogether
and to use the em-dash exclusively, but en and
em are still handy words to know when you're
trying to get rid of those extra e's at the end
of a Scrabble game.
Finally, we use what is called a 3-em dash (or
six typewriter hyphens) when we're showing that
someone's name or a word has been omitted
(perhaps for legal reasons or issues of taste):
Professors ______ and ______ were suspended
without pay for their refusal to grade papers.
PARENTHESES
Use parentheses [ ( ) ] to include material
that you want to de-emphasize or that wouldn't
normally fit into the flow of your text but you
want to include nonetheless. If the material
within parentheses appears within a sentence,
do not use a capital letter or end-mark to
punctuate that material, even if the material
is itself a complete sentence. If the material
within your parentheses is written as a
separate sentence (not included within another
sentence), punctuate it as if it were a
separate sentence.
Thirty-five years after his death, Robert
Frost (we remember him at Kennedy's
inauguration) remains America's favorite poet.
Thirty-five years after his death, Robert
Frost remains America's favorite poet. (We
remember him at Kennedy's inauguration.)
If the material is important enough, use
some other means of including it within your
text—even if it means writing another sentence.
Note that parentheses tend to de-emphasize text
whereas dashes tend to make material seem even
more important.
BRACKETS
Use brackets [ [ ] ] in the following
situations:
(A) You can use them to include explanatory
words or phrases within quoted language:
Lew Perkins, the Director of Athletic Programs,
said that Pumita Espinoza, the new soccer coach
[at Notre Dame Academy] is going to be a real
winner.
(B) If you are quoting material and you've had
to change the capitalization of a word or
change a pronoun to make the material fit into
your sentence, enclose that changed letter or
word(s) within brackets:
Espinoza charged her former employer with
"falsification of [her] coaching record."
(C) Also within quotations, you could enclose
[sic] within brackets to show that misspelled
words or inappropriately used words are not
your typos or blunders but are part of an
accurately rendered quotation:
Reporters found three mispelings [sic] in the
report.
(It is bad manners, however, to use this device
to show that another writer is a lousy speller
or otherwise unlettered.)
(D) You can use brackets to include
parenthetical material inside parenthetical
material:
Chernwell was poet laureate of Bermuda (a
largely honorary position [unpaid]) for ten
years.
Be kind to your reader, however, and use this
device sparingly.
ELLIPSIS
An ellipsis [ . . . ] proves to be a handy
device when you're quoting material and you
want to omit some words. The ellipsis consists
of three evenly spaced dots (periods) with
spaces between the ellipsis and surrounding
letters or other marks. Let's take the
sentence, "The ceremony honored twelve
brilliant athletes from the Caribbean who were
visiting the U.S." and leave out "from the
Caribbean who were":
The ceremony honored twelve brilliant athletes
. . . visiting the U.S.
If the omission comes at the end of a sentence,
the ellipsis will be placed
after the period, making a total of four dots.
. . . See how that works?
Notice that there is no space between the
period and the last character of the sentence.
The ellipsis can also be used to indicate a
pause in the flow of a sentence and is
especially useful in quoted speech.
Juan thought and thought . . . and then thought
some more.
"I'm wondering . . ." Juan said, bemused.
The plural of ellipsis is ellipses (in case
someone asks).
THE
APOSTROPHE
We use an apostrophe [ ' ] to create possessive
forms, contractions, and some plurals. The
apostrophe shows where a letter or letters have
been left out of a contracted verb:
I am = I'm/you are = you're/she is = she's/ it
is = it's/ do not = don't/she would = she'd/he
would have = he would've/ let us = let's/who is
= who's/she will = she'll/they had = they'd
Whether or not contractions are appropriate in
academic prose is a matter of personal taste
and debate. These forms are rather informal so
ask your instructor before using contractions
in a paper that will be graded.
In possessives, the placement of the apostrophe
depends on whether the noun that shows
possession is singular or plural. Generally, if
the noun is singular, the apostrophe goes
before the s. The witch's broom. If the noun is
plural, the apostrophe goes after the s: The
witches' brooms. However, if the word is
pluralized without an s, the apostrophe comes
before the s: He entered the men's room with an
armload of children's clothing. If you create a
possessive with a phrase like of the witches,
you will use no apostrophe: the brooms of the
witches.
Remember that it's means it is or it has.
Confusing it's with its, the possessive of it,
is perhaps the most common error in writing.
Remember, too, that there is no appropriate
contraction for "there are." Don't confuse
"they're," which means "they are" with "there
are" (which can sound like "ther're," [or some
such set of rumbling r's] in casual speech).
An apostrophe is also used to form some
plurals, especially the plural of letters and
digits. Raoul got four A's last term and his
sister got four 6's in the Olympic ice-skating
competition. It is no longer considered
necessary or even correct to create the plural
of years or decades or abbreviations with an
apostrophe. He wrote several novels during the
1930s. There are fifteen PhDs on our faculty.
My sister and I have identical IQs. (If you
wrote Ph.D. with periods, you would add an
apostrophe before the pluralizing "s": Ph.D.'s)
If the abbreviation ends in "S," it's a good
idea to separate this final "S" from the
pluralizing "s" with an apostrophe: SOS's
QUOTATION MARKS
Use quotation marks [ " " ] to set off material
that represents quoted or spoken language.
Quotation marks also set off the titles of
things that do not normally stand by
themselves: short stories, poems, and articles.
Usually, a quotation is set off from the rest
of the sentence by a comma; however, the
typography of quoted material can become quite
complicated. Here is one simple rule to
remember:
In the United States, periods and commas go
inside quotation marks regardless of logic. In
the United Kingdom, Canada, and islands under
the influence of British education, punctuation
around quotation marks is more apt to follow
logic. In American style, then, you would
write:
My favorite poem is Robert Frost's "Design."
But in England you would write: My favorite
poem is Robert Frost's "Design".
The placement of marks other than periods and
commas follows the logic that quotation marks
should accompany (be right next to) the text
being quoted or set apart as a title. Thus, you
would write (on either side of the Atlantic):
What do you think of Robert Frost's "Design"?
and
I love "Design"; however, my favorite poem was
written by Emily Dickinson.
Further, punctuation around quoted speech or
phrases depends on how it fits into the rest of
your text. If a quoted word or phrase fits into
the flow of your sentence without a break or
pause, then a comma may not be necessary:
The phrase "lovely, dark and deep" begins to
suggest ominous overtones.
Following a form of to say, however, you'll
almost always need a comma:
My father always said, "Be careful what you
wish for."
If the quoted speech follows an independent
clause yet could be part of the same sentence,
use a colon to set off the quoted language:
My mother's favorite quote was from
Shakespeare: "This above all, to thine own self
be true."
When an attribution of speech comes in the
middle of quoted language, set it apart as you
would any parenthetical element:
"I don't care," she said, "what you think about
it."
Be careful, though, to begin a new sentence
after the attribution if sense calls for it:
"I don't care," she said. "What do you think?"
Convention normally insists that a new
paragraph begins with each change of speaker:
"I don't care what you think anymore," she
said, jauntily tossing back her hair and
looking askance at DC.
"What do you mean?" he replied.
"What do you mean, 'What do I mean?'" Angel
sniffed. She was becoming impatient and wished
that she were elsewhere.
"You know darn well what I mean!" DC
huffed.
"Have it your way," Angel added, "if that's how
you feel."
In proofreading and editing your writing,
remember that quotation marks always travel in
pairs! Well, almost always. When quoted
dialogue carries from one paragraph to another
(and to another and another), the closing
quotation mark does not appear until the quoted
language finally ends (although there is a
beginning quotation mark at the start of each
new quoted paragraph to remind the reader that
this is quoted language).
Also, in parenthetical documentation, the
period comes after the parenthetical citation
which comes after the quotation mark".
In reporting "silent speech"—noting that
language is "said," but internally and not
spoken out loud—writers are on their own.
Writers can put quotation marks around it or
not:
Oh, what a beautiful morning, MOE said to
himself.
"Oh, what a beautiful morning!" MOE said to
himself.
Some writers will set such unspoken language in
italics or indent it in order to set it off
from other "regular" language. That's probably
not a good idea if there is a lot of it because
the indents can be confusing and italics can
become tiresome to read after a while. The
decision will probably depend on the amount of
silent speech within the text. Probably the
best way to handle silent speech is to find an
author whom you like who does a lot of
this—Graham Swift in his novel Last
Orders, for instance—and copy that author's
style. Consistency, of course, is very
important.
Be careful not to use quotation marks in an
attempt to emphasize a word (the kind of thing
you see in grocery store windows—Big "Sale"
Today!). Underline or italicize that word
instead. (The quotation marks will suggest to
some people that you are using that word in a
special or peculiar way and that you really
mean something else—or that your sale is
entirely bogus.)
We do not enclose indirect quotations in
quotation marks. An indirect quotation reports
what someone says but not in the exact,
original language. Indirect quotations are not
heard in the same way that quoted language is
heard.
The President said that NAFTA would eventually
be a boon to small businesses in both
countries.
Professor Villa told her students the textbooks
were not yet in the bookstore.
Single Quotation Marks
In the United States, we use single quotation
marks [ ' ' ] to enclose quoted material (or
the titles of poems, stories, articles) within
other quoted material.
"'Design' is my favorite poem," he said.
Ralph Ellison recalls the Golden Age of Jazz
this way: "It was itself a texture of
fragments, repetitive, nervous, not fully
formed; its melodic lines underground, secret
and taunting; its riffs jeering—'Salt peanuts!
Salt peanuts!'"
British practice, again, is quite different. In
fact, single-quote marks and double-quote marks
are apt to be reversed in usage. Instructors in
the U.S. should probably take this into account
when reading papers submitted by students who
have gone to school in other parts of the
globe.
In newspapers, single quotation marks are used
in headlines where double quotation marks would
otherwise appear.
Congress Cries 'Shame!'
One further use, according to the Chicago
Manual of Style: in philosophical discourse,
key concepts may be set apart with single-quote
marks. When such concepts are set off in this
way, periods and commas go outside the
single-quote marks:
Sartre's treatment of 'being', as opposed to
his treatment of 'non-being', has been
thoroughly described in Kaufmann's book.
SLASH OR VIRGULE
A slash or virgule [ / ] is used to indicate a
choice between the words it separates.
Using the pass/fail option backfired on her;
she could've gotten an A.
The slash can be translated as or and should
not be used where the word or could not be used
in its place. To avoid gender problems with
pronouns, some writers use he/she, his/her, and
him/her. Many authorities despise that
construction and urge writers either to
pluralize when possible and appropriate (to
they, their, them) or to use he or she, etc.
instead.
Notice there is no space between the slash and
the letters on either side of it.
There is, however, a space when the slash is
used to indicate a line-break in quoted poetry:
"The woods are lovely, dark, and deep / but I
have promises to keep." (This way of quoting
poetry is limited to four or five lines of
verse, within the normal flow of text.)
When using slashes in a Uniform Resource
Locator (URL) for a World Wide Web address
(http://webster.commnet.edu/HP/pages/darling/gr
ammar.htm), be especially sure not to include
spaces and not to confuse the slash with its
backward cousin, \ , used to show file
locations on drives.