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          A New Rival: An Alvin and the Chipmunks Story
BY: Jeena

I am such a fan on Alvin and the Chipmunks. This is my first fan fiction that I make so bare with me. I hope you like it and it has some romance to. This takes place right before they changed the name to Chipmunks go to the Movies. If you watch the show you’ll already know what I’m talking about. This is fan fiction though so this really isn’t true. Enjoy the story. ^^

          It all started one day when the chipmunks went to school. It was also Valentine’s Day. As always Alvin had the most cards and candy and was really showing it off. Theodore and Simon got their own share of  cards and got specials ones from their counterparts Jeanette and Eleanor and they also had their share of cards. Now Brittany got the most cards and candy since she was really pretty and all the boys wanted to go out with her same as Alvin. What she didn’t know is that all that was about to change.

            They had free time today since it was grammar school and their teacher loves Valentine’s Day. After Brittany went over all her cards she was thinking Where’s Alvin’s……… but, then finally noticed that he didn’t give her one. That really put her in a bad mood partly because Alvin didn’t gave her one and the other cause she already gave him one and was opening it now as she noticed.

            Alvin was reading Brittany’s card and after that he started eating the chocolate. He smiled at Brittany but, she gave him a glare that really made him worried. What did he do now. What does she…. Then it hit him that he didn’t gave her a Valentine Card or anything at that. Alvin was just going over there when the teacher said to be seated and had great news to tell them.

“ Class today we have a new student. I want you all to welcome Cindy Jones,” said Ms. Grudgy happily.

            When she came in every boy in class gazed at her like there was no one alive but her. Even the chipmunks were traumatized especially Alvin. The Chipettes all looked in disgust. Brittany let out a gasp and thought this girl had to be competition and she also noticed that she was really staring at Alvin. That made her mad jealous and forgot  why she was angry at him.

            It isn’t a surprise that everyone was staring at her because she was beautiful and good looking. She took the extra seat next to Alvin and he immediately introduced himself. While Brittany watch in pure and expiring jealousy. The other chipmunks and Chipettes were staring at Alvin and then at Brittany and knew that there was going to be an argument. Alvin was happily talking to Cindy as if he already knew her.

            “I’m glad I get to live were The Chipmunks live. My father is very rich and is a business man and we travel a lot. This is where we are really going to settle down,” said Cindy and talking like she was every man’s dream.

            “Really well maybe you would like to have lunch with us and get to know the chipmunks better even get to know the Chipettes,” said Alvin really fast and excited.

            “I will love too,” like she really was waiting for this moment.

 

            It was lunchtime and it was awhile when Cindy reached the chipmunks table since all the boys were flirting with her. Alvin was the one who introduced her.

           “ Guys I want you to meet Cindy my new girlfriend,” said Alvin coolly.

            I bet you all are wondering how this happened. It was after Alvin invited her to eat lunch with them. They decided that they know a lot about each other already and would really get to know each other if they dated. Brittany didn’t approve of this at all with her jealousy.

           “ What in the world made you ask her out when you don’t even know her,” said Brittany starting to argue.

“ We do already know a lot about each other and that is really none of your business,” retaliated Alvin.

            Simon, Theodore, Eleanor, and Jeanette didn’t look surprised because they knew this was going to happen. It was Simon who broke up the argument by changing the subject.

            “ So please would you tell us more about you,” said Simon really fast.

            Then they all started talking. The Chipettes and the chipmunks didn’t like her at all. She was very conceited, and bossy and they noticed she can throw a bit of a fit when Brittany was arguing with her about that there is nothing wrong by the way she dressed. Alvin and Cindy suddenly got up reporting that they wanted privacy and that they were going to Love Point today since it’s a Friday. At Brittany’s disappointment she saw that at the table Alvin was just sitting down and Cindy got on top of him and kissed him on the lips! Now Brittany didn’t feel jealousy she felt that her heart and her dreams were shattered and that she finally realized that all this time she actually really, enormously love Alvin. Shocking.

 

             A month passed and Alvin wasn’t even paying attention to his brothers or Brittany. He was always with Cindy now. Brittany even missed they way they compete and fight with each other.

            At the Miller residence she was in her room talking partly upset about Alvin. How can he even stand her. She is nothing but, a snotty, conceited, bossy, and horrible girl. She wasn’t making a big deal about the conceited thing since she was like that too. Also Cindy was always showing off to her about Alvin. Then Brittany wondered if Alvin loved her the same way she loves him and hope that Alvin has real feelings for her too. Eleanor and Jeanette came in the room to support her sister because they knew what was happening.

            “Brittany don’t worry. I talk to Simon about Alvin’s date and he said that it was horrible according to Alvin. All she ever kept saying is bad stuff about you and Alvin got mad and actually defended you. I think their  relationship is nothing but a fake act,” said Jeanette comfortingly.

            “Besides it’s not like you and Alvin are dating. Your relationship is very complicated. Even though you are only friends. It’s like you go out but, you date other people and fight a lot and its like an in-out going relationship I  think. Besides were only kids, are you sure about your feelings? I mean I like Theodore but, don‘t you think that you may be to young to feel anything,” said Eleanor quite confused.

            “Age is in the eye of the beholder, Ellie. Our feelings comes from our soul and our soul is as old as anything. I’m sure that I love Alvin no question. Youngness doesn’t have anything. Love can happen when you least expect it. At least that is what I feel that I know ,” said Brittany trying to hold her sadness, “You don’t know how I feel especially when the Grammar School homecoming dance is coming and you already know that Alvin’s running for king. I bet Cindy is running for queen so she could be with him.”

 

            Jeanette was really surprised that her sister Brittany of all people said something right. Jeanette knew she was right. Our bodies are only bodies. Real feelings comes from the soul. She was going to support her sister because somehow she knew how she felt.

 

            “You can’t feel down on yourself like this you got to run for queen like you were hoping don’t let Cindy stop you. Don’t also let her take Alvin from you. I’m sure Alvin misses you. Although you haven’t talk in a while and according to Theodore he wasn’t really angry after you fought about the Valentine’s Day card but, he was partly mad because of how you treated Cindy. He soon got over that. Anyway you got to run for queen. We’ll help you. And you also have to get a total makeover you know make yourself attractive and go out with a boy that would really make Alvin jealous. There is so many things you can do than moping around crying for him,” said Eleanor. And it sounded like she had that whole speech ready.

            Brittany knew Eleanor and Jeanette were right. She knows Alvin has feelings for her (since he’s being kind of well, maybe not that much) showing it since the day they met, she knew she had to be voted queen, and beat Cindy at her own game. She is also going to look attractive and get Alvin back to her. Also that  she BETS that Alvin was purposely trying to make her jealous since he knows that Brittany has been flirting with Brian Stokes, a new student. She remembers the day when Alvin saw it. She was talking to Brian then all of a sudden he kissed her. She just manages to break away and look back and saw that Alvin looked heartbroken and when he noticed that Brittany saw him he ran away. That was one of her mistakes she did. But, it also proved that Alvin had feelings for her and she was bound to get him back!!

 

From here we will be reading Brittany’s diary and how she went threw with her new rival. It will be better because it has all the details and will be more simple. ^^

 

Putting plans into action                          

I had been doing everything I can to win the vote for homecoming queen. Cindy was ahead and I hope that I catch up. I did eventually with my new look that made boys crazy. I was also doing good with Alvin. I was playing  ( damsel in distress)  when I pretended that my locker was jammed and ask for Alvin’s help exactly as he passed. He happily helped even though we weren’t on speaking terms and opened the locker ( which wasn’t really jammed). That is when my plan was going into action. I thanked  him and kissed him on the cheek with  a whole crowd looking. As I saw Alvin looked like he really liked it. Later as told by Simon that Cindy threw the worst fit telling Alvin nasty names and saying that she saw him how he clammed up about my  kiss on the cheek! My god she is really protective. To my disappointment they didn’t broke up but, at least I was ahead in the polls as queen.

 

Basketball Game

It was a while when Alvin wasn’t going to play in the game because he cheated on a book report. He still does it but, tries not to get caught again. Anyway there was a basketball game due this Friday. It was an exciting day. The team was really good and Alvin was really pushing his skills since with this basketball game they can go to the final game meaning the championship game. Terry a boy in that team that was really Alvin’s new rival was trying to cheat. He made a foul on Alvin on purpose so he had to sit down. Apparently the team lost their inspiration and were starting to suck. Alvin was sitting in the bench in frantic until he told the coach to call a time out. He was talking to the team finally saying 1 2 3 BREAK. All of a sudden the team had their confidence back. Later Alvin was allowed to play and they creamed the bulls. Terry was not happy and looked at Alvin with and evil glare. As I was going down with the others to congratulate the team I heard Alvin say to Terry and I quote “ Ah don’t be such a sore loser Terry. Besides you have got to know greatness when it hits your already deformed face”. He said that and started laughing. Everybody else who heard that started laughing too even me. Terry was angered and was just going to start a fight with Alvin. Alvin was getting ready but, Terry’s coach stopped them in time. That was a good game. I was going to give Alvin a hug but, there came Cindy and gave it to him with a big kiss. I felt down and decided to congratulate him another day.

 

The worst thing

The worst thing happen to me. Cindy managed to get really ahead at the polls and was a shooing for queen. Not even with my sisters help I could make it ahead. Worst is that Alvin was way ahead even for the polls and the winning basketball game. He was really good and his skills were amazing. What surprisingly surprised me is that he didn’t hog the ball all to himself, he let his teammates play too. (Why am I speaking good things about Alvin anyway?) This basketball game made it sure that Alvin already was going to become homecoming king.  With his brothers help which they were also popular I knew he already won.

 

The Good Thing

There is one good thing that happen on Friday a week away from the homecoming dance. Alvin and his brothers came over our house. Alvin surprisingly talked to me and apologized for not talking to me. He also apologized for the Valentine’s Day thing. I gladly accepted it since its been a while since he talked to me and I can easily take him back from that good for nothing Cindy. I  stop dressing and putting makeup a lot because all the boys were going to far and I had it. Besides I’m sure Alvin got the idea  since he couldn’t stop looking at me the whole time. I missed Alvin so much that I made up an argument on purpose. I started talking about the hot- air balloon adventure not long ago and said that we were the winners because me and my sisters came and saved them. Alvin of course argue that I was wrong and said that nobody won because it was all a act and that anyway they would have won the 100,000 bucks . I said that we were the ones that saved their butts and we had our balloon. Alvin said that saving them was just because they found out about the dolls and we were coming to get them anyway. And that they would have been saved without our help and that they didn’t have time to get their balloon since the villagers were throwing spears at them. I was going to retaliate but, Jeanette put a stop to it. Later we got over that and talk about the homecoming dance and my sisters and the chipmunks wished me good luck and that you had to win. Alvin didn’t say anything about that since Cindy is running for it too. Me and Simon talked privately when everyone was outside playing and I asked how is Alvin doing with Cindy. Simon said that Alvin hasn’t talk about it and that he didn’t know nothing. Gee and I thought I could keep track of their relationship. That didn’t bother me a lot since we had fun outside and Alvin and I argue again about who won the baseball game. We won by a lucky shot made by Eleanor. He said that we cheated, how could you cheat at baseball! He is really such a sore loser but, I have to admit that is what I like about him.

 

Singing

Alvin manage to get a job singing at the homecoming dance even thought it was only one song. He also manage to let the dance committee put chipmunks cds and in there was one of Alvin’s favorite songs that he and his brothers sang.( I’ll tell you later) For the one song that we were singing the chipmunks decided that we can sing together with them. It took a while when Alvin said to sing the song we sang in our hot- air balloon adventure at Rome. We said to Alvin that we didn’t remember since we just sang it and didn’t write anything down. Alvin suddenly said (showing off) that he always remembers every song he sang and can help us out. At first I didn’t believe him then he actually did it and he knew every bit of it, like he just sang it right now. We recorded the sound on tape since we didn’t want to use instruments and were planning the dancing. I can’t wait till we sing. We tried it out and thanks to Alvin and a little help from his brothers we sounded fantastic really just like we did in Rome once!

 

Shopping and Jealousy

Ms. Miller and us were in the mall shopping for our dresses. I found one that is most beautiful and can really take one away. The only colors were white and pink and of course I chose pink. Jeanette and Eleanor pick great dresses on their own with their favorite color turquoise and purple. The next day at lunch we were at school talking excitedly about how gorgeous were going to look. The chipmunks didn’t find this interesting and just sat there and listened. Then Cindy came and sat down next to Alvin giving him a tap in the lips and that really ticked me off. Unfortunately, she heard what me and my sisters were talking  about and said that she bought the most expensive and beautiful dress she ever worn. She also said and that was to me, that she didn’t know why I was competing against her and that she already beat me. And the worst is that she said to Alvin why they invited me and my sisters to sing with them if we are horrible. I thought Alvin wasn’t going to say anything. How very wrong I WAS. He started yelling at her saying that I was perfect enough to run for queen and that she’s never heard us sing and can’t really judge. Cindy was going on about that if Alvin ever talk to her like that again they were through and he can take somebody else to the dance if he keeps protecting me. She slunked off. Everybody was looking at the commotion and just stared. Later the students  got over it and got back to their business. I told Alvin thanks and so did my sisters and he just said what ticks him off more is when people are talking bad about his friends. He said all this very calm and sounded normal. I knew Cindy was very jealous of me now and I didn’t know why because Alvin and me were just friends unless you count our in- out going relationship.

 

Getting a date from Brian Stokes and making Alvin jealous

On Friday just before the dance Brian Stokes came up to me and ask me if I can come to the dance with him. Since Alvin is already with Cindy I gladly said yes. This was my chance of making Alvin jealous. I give him a kiss in the cheek and gave a big hug. The thing is that I didn’t expect that he’d hugged me back and ask if I COULD GO OUT WITH HIM. He is cute. The only problem is that all that happen right in front of Alvin and he even listened to what we were saying. That and his brothers were there too witnessing  it. Alvin walk pass me and gave me evil eye glare which worried me and he also (as I notice) had his eyes very focus into what I was trying to do he even appeared very jealous mixed with anger. I was worried because Alvin had never given me that look. THAT STUPID CHIPMUNK JUST WHO DOES HE THINK HE IS. I MEAN I’VE PUT UP WITH A LOT OF THINGS HE EVER DID WHEN I FIRST MET HIM BUT, THAT IS ENOUGH. UGH IF HE WANTED TO ASK ME OUT WHY DIDN’T HE SAID SO AND HE SHOULD JUST BREAK UP WITH CINDY AND GO WITH ME.  That is what I wanted but, I guess I got to far being angry. I know I’m just going out with Brian just to make Alvin jealous. The other thing that worries me is that I think he knows what I’m up to and I just hope he doesn’t but, I got this feeling that he does and I ’m sure I’m right. Ever since then Alvin and I talked so we were still on speaking terms but, he seemed to keep a distance from me and doesn’t feel himself when his around me now.

 

The Big Day: The Grammar School Homecoming Dance

It was a Saturday and I woke up at 10am. My sisters were already awake and were waiting for me so I can eat breakfast. Ms. Miller was really nice today. We sure like that we live with such a great person. And as I though of that I remember when we were trying to live in the chipmunks house. It was a disaster until Alvin came up with the idea of us living with Ms. Miller. At first she didn’t really sound so excited then she grew loving us and became the perfect mom. Man what will we do without Alvin’s plans, probably be a lot better off but, since it was him that got me and my sisters a real home I guess I shouldn’t complain. We had all the time of our lives and we hanged out. At 4:00pm we started getting ready even though we had till 6:00. Partly we did this because I last an hour on the bathroom and the other part was doing my hair. My sisters were first to get ready because of my lasting to long in the bathroom routine. We had fun. We were all doing each others hair and laughed aloud for the stupid things or accidents that we did. At last we were ready by 6:00 and we were looking so awesome and pretty. We all had sexy but, mature kind of dresses and ones that we can really dance with. We then went to the dance. It was so much fun for me and  the dance was really great. The dance committee decided to go with a Summer’s Night theme and put even those glow in the dark stars to make it look real. It was time to announce the winner for homecoming king and of course Alvin won. I hoped that I will win but, I didn’t. The one who won was Cindy and that really put me down. I even wanted to cry. My sisters supported me. I so glad that I have such wonderful sisters. I painfully watch how they were both crowned and sprinkled with confetti and the applause they were getting. Simon, and Theodore were trying to cheer me up and it really worked just a little. Then they danced the chipmunk love song “ Waiting for a Girl Like You”. I really hated that part. I didn’t mind though because I danced with Brian. I remember when he asked me to go out with him. I talked to him and said that the answer was no. He looked upset but, he got over it and told that he understands and was pointing to Alvin. I noticed that Alvin was looking at me while I was dancing with Brian. Alvin after the dance surprised us all by breaking up with Cindy. You know how much that cheered me up. They got in a big nasty fight. We asked Alvin why he broke up with her and he said that all she ever did was always talk about herself and that she talked bad stuff about me and my sisters. Guess Alvin just had it ! I thanked him later and he said your welcome. Really that is all he said and just walked away preparing to perform. I forgot to put that Alvin also said that he didn’t want to break up with Cindy before the dance because that will really be a low thing to do to somebody even a girl like her. He didn’t speak to me much after all that happen it was probably because I was with Brian. His attitude got a little better though. Now it was time for us to perform.

 

Eleanor took a picture of the chipmunks right before we performed. I told her if she can give me the other copy and she gladly gave it to me. I put it in my journal which is the picture above. I also wrote the lyrics about the song down so I could look at it and remember how it was. Everybody loved it and were dancing having so much fun. We always go with the chipmunks on tour but, we only sing a few songs with them since were not that famous. This could be another song that we can sing together.

 

We were getting ready. I myself trying to remember the lyrics and dance. I told Brian that I’m going to perform. This is the first time we sing this song in public and I HOPE it becomes a hit because we were singing it with the chipmunks. We put in the tape were we recorded the beat. The chipmunks wanted their instruments now even Alvin wanted his guitar so it could match with a part of the song that they were singing but, we decided its better that way and Alvin will just have to pretend to play the guitar really cool when that piece comes. Finally Alvin presented the school with the song “Girls/Boys of Rock N’ Roll” and we began to sing:

 

( Alvin n Brittany)

Sun goes down, I’m just getting up

I’m heading  for the city lights

Radio blasting on the way to the club

Gonna rock this town tonight

 

(Chipettes)

“ You’re living  in a man’s world”

They tell us

 But we ain’t gonna buy it

The things they trying  to sell us now….

 

 Cause we’re the Girls of Rock N’ Roll

(wooooo)

Yeah we’re the  Girls of Rock N’ Roll

(Rock N’ Roll  ol ol ol ah)

 

(Chipmunks)

 Ooh Yeah!

Curtain’s up and I’m ready to go

My guitar is in my hand

There’s nothing  more that I’d rather  do

Than play in a rock n’ roll band

 

What we have is what we will be given

Headed for the top

(Don’t ya know!)

We’ll never stop believing now….

 

Cause we’re the  Boys of Rock N’ Roll

(You better believe it, Yeah, Yeah, Yeah!)

Yeah we’re the Boys of Rock N’ Roll

(Rock N’ Roll oh)

 

(Chipmunks n Chipettes)

We are the Girls

We are the Girls

We are the Girls of Rock N’ Roll….

We are the Boys

We are the Boys

We are the Boys of Rock N’ Roll….

 

Cause we’re the Boys of Rock N’ Roll

(ooooh)

Yeah we’re the Girls of Rock N’ Roll

(Better be believing that we are)

Yeah we’re the Boys of Rock N’ Roll

(Rock and Roll)

Yeah we’re the Girls of Rock N’ Roll

(Rock N’ Rock N’ Roll)

Yeah we’re the Boys of Rock N’ Roll

(Rock N’ Roll)

Yeah we’re the Girls of Rock N’ Roll

(Rock N’ Rock N’ Roll)

Yeah we’re the Boys of Rock N’ Roll

(Gonna Rock N’ Roll and Rock N’ Roll and Rock N’ Roll)

Yeah we’re the Girls of Rock N’ Roll

(And gonna Rock N’ Roll)

 

It was a hit! People were clapping so hard my ears were ringing when we got of the stage. The chipmunks decided to put that song in the new album they were recording. Brian came over and congratulated me for doing a great job. He also said that to my sisters. Alvin went away with his brothers to the dance floor. What is it with him? I now  knew that he had feelings for me I don’t know yet if he loves me though. But, really what is it with him? He’s been like that every time he sees me with Brian. I knew it! he does know that I’m trying to make him jealous! This ruins everything. Jeanette and Eleanor went over to the chipmunks on the dance floor I followed them with Brian. Alvin didn’t look as he was going to talk. Ooooh and it was so nice that we started talking again well it was cool while it lasted. Remember what I told you about one of Alvin’s favorite songs that he and his brothers sang well they put that on ( since it was chipmunks songs that they were mostly putting on) and you should have seen the look on Alvin’s face! Everyone started making a circle and started  break dancing ( the boys I mean). The song was of course the best dancing song the chipmunks ever sang. It was “ Footloose”. Me with Brian, my sisters, and the chipmunks found a way to get in front. After the a boy finish with his dancing he pointed to the chipmunks! Everyone started to clap!! Simon and Theodore were to shy to break dance even though Alvin and them have been taken break dancing lessons all their life and knew everything!! A lot of boos were put into it because of that. Alvin was nervous but, since he liked that song and always finding a way to show off he did it. I have to admit Alvin looked cool!!!! He did all the break dancing tricks and techniques and with the song, IT WAS GREAT! The song finish and Alvin put a fantastic ending. Just when does that chipmunk will ever miss a chance to show off! Everybody was back to dancing . It was a great night. Cindy without a date, me dancing  with Brian. I didn’t like it much though because I knew this wasn’t the man I was meant to be with. Alvin found another girl fast but, they just danced and didn’t do anything, good! The dance was over at 11:30 and everyone was going home. The chipmunks were going to take us home when Brian came and gave me a good night kiss.( on the cheek) That really made Alvin mad and made his brothers leave. They say good bye to Eleanor, Jeanette, and me. Alvin just said goodbye to my sisters and not me. All he gave me was a I know what you are doing look and left. I said goodbye to Brian. Me and Brian became only companions so we didn’t talk just say hi and bye to each other. Me and my sisters got home. I felt so tired and after brushing my teeth and putting on my pajamas I slammed my body into the bed and was going to sleep when my sisters talk to me about the look that Alvin gave me. I said I didn’t care but, in reality I really did.

 

 

From here we go back to how we first started. Since the ones who are fans of the chipmunks they know that they make their own versions of the 80’s songs. You should really listen to “ Footloose” sang by Kenny Loggins and see the movie if you can or already had. Also listen to the other song “ Waiting for a Girl like You” is sang by Foreigner. You could here this song and another I’m about to mention in this radio stations if you want to: 101.1, 102.7, and 106.7fm if you are in New Jersey or new York or find a place were they put love songs. The song that I was about to mention was “ You’re the Inspiration” by Chicago. Alvin in the conclusion of the chapter sings this song ( you’ll know why later on). I want  the story to be like the show so when he sings this song take up in your mind that at first he sings it without beat then the beat starts in the first paragraph on the 5th verse. Alvin will start the song first then Simon and Theodore will sing.

 

            Its been a week since the special program of the homecoming dance for grammar school passed. Alvin was single again. Alvin still wasn’t talking to Brittany. Cindy is going out with Brian. It was a Friday and the Chipettes were going to the chipmunk’s house. It was 8:00 so it was dark. They had a lot fun even Alvin included. That didn’t last long though. Brittany and her sisters started talking about Brian. Brittany trying to boost Alvin’s jealousy a little said that he was talking to her and still making looks at her. Alvin finally had it with her and grabbed her and started arguing.

            “I know what your playing at and you can stop!” screamed Alvin.

            “I don’t know what your talking about,” said Brittany pretending.

            “Please! You don’t really think I’m that slow. I know you were using Brian to make me jealous goodness knows why,” said Alvin.

            “I wasn’t trying to make you jealous I just like him, what, can’t I go out with anybody I like without you thinking that I’m trying to make you jealous,” said Brittany.

            “Stop talking lies Brittany. I know because I saw that worried look on your face. Your acting immature. Why don’t you just admit it?” said Alvin his anger raising rapidly.

            “I don’t want to tell you and I don’t have to. Besides I’m acting immature. You are the one that always gets in trouble. I mean really how can Dave stand you?” said Brittany not thinking.

            That really made Alvin loose his wits. The chipmunks and Chipettes were watching silently not able to say nothing. Thank goodness Dave wasn’t home. Now Alvin was starting to say things that he really didn’t mean to say (remember lost his wits).

            “HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT! BETTER TAKE THAT BACK YOU CONCEITED BRAT! YOU ARE ALWAYS THINKING OF YOURSELF! HOW CAN PEOPLE STAND THAT? I BET THEY HATE YOU AND DON’T EVEN ADMIT IT! I MYSELF AM GROWING TIRE OF YOUR IDIOCY AND I’M REALLY STARTING TO HATE YOU NOW!,” shouted Alvin at the top of his lungs.

            “DON’T YOU SHOUT AT ME LIKE THAT AND I DON’T CARE IF YOU HATE ME!” shouted Brittany back hoping that Alvin isn’t meaning the things he’s saying and her feelings really started to get hurt.

            “I HATE YOU! WHY DID YOU EVER COME INTO MY LIFE? I NEVER NEEDED YOU! I WISH YOU WILL NEVER HAVE MET ME AND MY BROTHERS BECAUSE YOUR NOTHING BUT TRASH! I WISHED YOU DIED!” shouted Alvin trying to stop himself from saying all this.

            Brittany didn’t say nothing. She had tears in her eyes. She ran to the door and went away. Alvin started to feel guilty and didn’t know what to say know. The others were looking at him. BAM! They heard a boom outside. They went outside to see was going on. What everyone saw put them in shocked. Jeanette fainted. Brittany was hit by a car and was lying face down on the street like she was dead. 

 

            “Ms. Miller you don’t have to worry. The tests are done. The answers are that Brittany might have a chance of dying if she doesn’t awake from that coma. You can see her know,” said Doctor Banes sadly.

            Everyone was at the hospital even Dave. Ms. Miller, Jeanette, and Eleanor were crying their eyes out. The chipmunks try to support them but, it didn’t help. Ms. Miller didn’t want to see Brittany she was to scared to see her daughter on a hospital bed. Alvin knew it was all his fault, all his fault. If he only didn’t start that argument and didn‘t say those things he really didn‘t mean. He was going to say sorry to Ms. Miller.

            “Ms. Miller,” said Alvin nervously.

            “Y yes Alvin,” said Ms. Miller sadly.

            “It’s all my fault! I started the argument and made her run away. Simon and Theodore can even tell you,” said Alvin fast.

            “Oh Alvin dear please don’t blame …..,” Ms. Miller was about to say.

            “I do blame myself. I do. I’m so sorry,” said Alvin.

            “Alvin stop that,” said Dave.

            “I’m not. I will be the cause of her death!,” screamed Alvin.

            With that he went away. Everybody stood quiet. Simon, Theodore, Eleanor, and Jeanette started telling the story about what happen. After they were done neither Dave or Ms. Miller said nothing. They didn’t know what to say. Simon and Theodore followed Alvin knowing where he was going to go.

            Alvin was in Brittany’s hospital room. He sat down next to her. It was sad for him to see Brittany in a hospital not knowing if she will ever open her eyes again. Alvin tried to explain how he feels and try to apologize but, couldn’t. That made him remembered the song that he wrote for her. Simon, Theodore were working on their new album. One time there was nothing on TV so he put a stupid love movie. That almost made him asleep then all of a sudden he though of Brittany. He tried to stop thinking about her by trying to think of a song. All he could think of is Brittany. He then decided to write a song about her, trying to use his thinking about her to use. Alvin, showed this to Simon and Theodore. They said it was great and started finding the beat. A week passed and the song was ready. It  sounded great. The chipmunks asked Alvin how did he though of that song and he just said I just though about it. No big deal. As he though and sang the song he finally realized that the song is what he wrote about  what he felt for Brittany and that he loved her. He was sure that he was right because this feeling deep in his soul told him. He even knows that that feeling is right. Why did he waste all did this time to say that to Brittany? Alvin though he couldn’t have real feelings because of him being a kid but, something inside told him that didn’t matter. This was a shocked to him. Really. He didn’t tell his brothers about that though.

 

            Now he sits here thinking of it. Maybe I could sing it and she would probably open her eyes. He was about to sing.

 

You know our love…..

 

Then he felt something moving behind and found his brothers. They finally realized that the song was made for Brittany. They wanted to help Alvin sing it beside he does need them. He didn’t really want to and said no. His brothers argue that he isn’t the only one who cares about Brittany. Everybody outside that she loves are waiting for her to come back. Alvin though about it. He finally decided to say yes. He knew that people more than him cared about her. Simon and Theodore know the song by heart since Alvin made them sing it a million times and knew in what part they started to sing. They also decided to keep their singing a little tiny low since they knew Alvin wanted to sing it alone. Alvin didn’t really care about them. He knows that the song was made by him and him only. Its what he felt about Brittany. Alvin also though this is the perfect time to express what he feels about her and to apologize even though she might not hear him. He hope she listened even though it was impossible. He somehow felt alone like nobody was here with him. He decided to change the words a little bit but, not for his brothers to get confused. He wished she waked up. He hated seeing her like this. He hold her hand and started to sing.

 

 

You know our love was meant to be

The kind of love to last forever

And I want you here with me

From tonight until the end  of time

You should know

Everywhere I go

Always on my mind

In my heart

In my soul

Baby

 

You’re the meaning in my life

You’re the inspiration

You bring feeling to my life

You’re the inspiration

Wanna have you near me

I wanna have you hear me saying

“ No one needs you more than I need you”

 

And I know (And I know)

Yes I know that it’s plain to see

So in love when we’re together

Now I know (Now I know)

That I need you here with me

From tonight  until the end of time

You should know (Yes, you need to know)

Everywhere I go

You’re always on my mind

You’re in my heart

In my soul

 

You’re the meaning in my life

You’re the inspiration

You bring feeling to my life

You’re the inspiration

Wanna have you near me

I wanna have you hear me saying

“ No one needs you more than I need you”

(No one needs you more than I)

Wanna have you near me

I wanna have you hear me saying

“No one needs you more than I need you”

(No one needs you more)

You’re the meaning in my life

You’re the inspiration

You bring feeling to my life

You’re the inspiration

 

When you love somebody

Till the end of time

When you love somebody

Always on my mind/ No one needs you more than I

When you love somebody

Till the end of time

When you love somebody

Always on my mind/ No one needs more than I

                        sing till fades

 

            He stopped singing. It didn’t work. Simon and Theodore went outside to the others to leave Alvin alone. Then Alvin saw the line on the machine it started beeping. Nobody came. Alvin knew this because he can’t barely hear the sound himself. The sound system was broken. Brittany was dying.

            “So you see Brittany I need you, your sisters need you, and Ms. Miller needs you! Please wake up! YOU CAN‘T DIE!” screamed Alvin fast finally bringing down a tear.

 

            The beeping stopped. It got back to normal. Alvin looked at Brittany and saw her eyes.

 

            While Brittany was in her coma she felt like she was dreaming. Everything was so dark around her. She felt scared and trapped. She was like that for awhile now. She felt lost. She though of her family and friends. She remembered the car crash. She remembered the fight. Alvin. She was trying to find a way out but, couldn’t. Then she heard Alvin’s voice? She though she was hearing things. The she heard singing. She listened even though its my mind I feel better so I might as well listen she though. When the song finish she was in shocked. Alvin did love her and knew that she wasn‘t hearing things somehow. She felt like saying something but, couldn’t. Then she saw his face. She was running trying to reach it but, something stopped her. A bright light shined in her eyes. It was a tunnel. It felt like the tunnel was pulling her . She went. Walking to the tunnel she was almost at the end. She all of a sudden saw all her memories flashing before her. Her life, her family, her friends, her past, her present. Then she heard Alvin screamed So you see Brittany I need you, your sisters need you, and Ms. Miller needs you! Please wake up! YOU CAN’T DIE! Brittany saw his face again. It was big this time. She ran out of the tunnel hearing somebody a voice of a saint saying this is what you decided. The tunnel and the light were gone and she was so close to Alvin. She was almost reaching him almost.

 

            She opened her eyes. She saw Alvin with tears in his eyes looking happy. She saw that she was in the hospital room. She was back, back home.

            “Welcome back I missed you,” said Alvin.

            “Alvin?” said Brittany.

            “Yeah, I’m so sorry Brittany. Its all my fault this happened to you. Is there anything I can do to make it up to you?” said Alvin sadly.

            “Apology accepted Alvin. And you already made it up to me,” said Brittany.

            “What do you mean?” said Alvin.

            “You got me out of the coma. I saw your face and heard you singing to me. I also heard your brothers but, I don’t see them. Any way, I was in the dark and I saw you. I followed your face and I waked up. So it was you that got me out of the coma,” said Brittany explaining.

            “WOW guess I’m good at another perfect thing,” said Alvin coolly.

            “Shut up,” said Brittany.

            “So you heard the music. I made that for you.. I mean its..my..feeling towards you,” said Alvin nervous.

            “Thank you. I…,” Brittany was about to say.

            “I love you a lot. I’m going to get the others,” said Alvin fast and embarrassed.

 

            Then with that he jumped and went outside. He brought everyone with him. Everybody was celebrating, you should have seen them. Everybody was thanking Alvin for bringing Brittany back even though he told them he didn’t know how he did it. It was a moment to remember.

 

            A week has passed and Brittany got out of the hospital. The chipmunks threw a little party for her. They were all dancing. Theodore kissed Eleanor in the lips who knows for what reason. Simon was also kissing Jeanette which was very unusual . They got back to dancing. Dave and Ms. Miller were putting the food and snacks on the table. A slow dance came on and the chipmunks got very close to there girls and danced.( Like every time people dance a slow song) Alvin and Brittany were all hugged up. Brittany kept saying her thanks for helping get back to reality while Alvin was started to get annoyed by it.

            “Okay Brittany for the last time your welcome,” said Alvin.

            “All right. You know I though you didn’t like me but, now I know that you love me. I forgot to tell you that I love you too. I knew this feeling and hope you felt it too. I was kind of afraid being just a kid and all but, I just can‘t hide my feeling,” said Brittany kind of embarrassed.

 

             Alvin didn’t say anything. He just smiled and finally kissed her lovingly telling her that he felt the same.

 

                                                THE END