Sunday, 29 June 2003 - 2:00 AM CDT

hello. it's the flag poem person that just commented on your story via fp.net and has come here to further harass you.
anyways...
i think one of the reasons why your story does not have many comments is because it's under the 'history' category. and everybody seems terribly biased about that category. nowadays- nobody's interested in writing or reading anything more then what applies to their own lives because they are merely egocentric. unless they happen to be little weird ones like me... and i have a quality of oddness that i have not found in anyone else yet.

ALSO, i've come here to rant that your story is not pg. it's not! it is at least pg-13 or so, what with the detailed descriptions of what it looks like when people have their brains blown out.

so THAT is what i forgot to include in my comment, and now i shall go to snore.

however, i still would note that your story definitely reads like a novel. i swear to read through to chapter six when i can wrangle the pile of crap brought on by this grueling geometry course. i want to get ahead, sure, but i clearly was quite ignorant to its level of summer homework when i signed up. doncha just hate that.
NOW i will go to snore. please put more of your story up- i bet i can manage reading a chapter a night- and a week isn't long!