Chapter 1
“How much longer do we have to wait?” I whined.
“Probably only like twenty minutes,” said my older sister Brooke.
I winced. There seemed to be an interminable line of people waiting to
ride the new-and-improved Haunted
Mansion in Disneyworld.
“I’m sorry, but you’ll have to wait for the next ride,” I heard a voice
say a few minutes later. I looked up to
see that all the people had gone in except for my sister, me, and a group of
guys behind us.
“Hey, Kat,” my sister said, “if we get stuck on the ride, maybe those
guys will protect us.” She snickered
because she knew how scared I got about scary rides in amusement parks, even
though I was ninteteen.
When we felt like we were about to collapse from the long wait, a worker
finally approached us and
unhooked the chain for our turn to ride through the mansion. I looked up at
my sister in fearful anticipation while she
merely stared back with a mischievous grin. We walked into the mansion, the
guys following behind us. Chills ran up
and down my spine as we entered the darkened atmosphere.
We stepped into a small enclosed room, decorated as a parlor. A
mysterious deep voice welcomed us to
the Haunted Mansion, the floor slowly moving downward.
I looked up and froze
at the sight of several portraits of
murdered victims. The voice requested that we make our way through a small
passage. We obeyed the request and
moved quietly through the narrow passageway. We soon discovered that the
passage led to a room with a long line
of cars for us in which to ride. I slid in beside Brooke, and the group of
guys split up in groups of three and two into
the cars behind us.
Suddenly, the cars began to move. As we traveled into pitch-black
territory, I gripped Brooke’s hand in
fright.
“Ow, Kat! You’re hurting me!” she yelled.
One of the guys, teasing us, shouted in a deep voice, “You girls all
right up there?”
“We’re fine!” replied my sister haughtily.
The guys snickered as the ride continued.
The cars took us through many corridors, numerous computerized monsters
incessantly jumping out at us.
As we entered another hallway, I encountered my worst fear: the ride
stopped.
“Oh my gosh. This is NOT happening,” muttered Brooke. I became even
more frightened as my
twenty-one-year-old sister now seemed to be freaked out herself. “Um, Kat,
everything will be okay,” she said as my
hand still gripped hers. “I’m sure someone will be along shortly, or the
ride will start up again.”
“Okay,” I said, a knot forming in my stomach.
“Wow, man! This is so cool!” I heard one of the guys say.
“Dude, this is awesome!”
Then one of the guys howled like a werewolf. “Brian, cut that out!” I
heard another one say.
“Oh my gosh, Kat? You don’t think that.....”
“No way, Brooke. It couldn’t be....could it?”
“Well, go check it out, dork!”
The bars suddenly rose from our laps, but still no one was in sight
except for the seven of us.
I peeked around the side of our car to see the one and only Nick Carter
standing next to the infamous Brian
Littrell.
“Hey, beautiful. Are you sure you girls are okay?” Nick said sincerely.
“Hi, I’m Brian,” he said with the cutest southern accent. “What’s your
name?”
“Uh, I’m Kathryn, and this is my older sister Brooke.”
My sis turned and around and waved to the guys in disbelief. She turned
to me and simply mouthed
“WOW” then asked, “Do you guys know what happened?”
“I have no idea,” said Nick. “I hope we get outta here soon, though.
I’m so scared of the dark.”
“Baby,” said Brian, giving him a noogie.
“Hey, guys, what are you....well hello there, ladies.” I stood there,
watching my sister’s jaw drop as AJ
McLean approached us.
“Um, hello,” said Brooke, smiling sheepishly. “I’m Brooke.” She
extended her hand to AJ, and their eyes
locked in a momentary romantic gaze.
“Hey, who are you guys talking to?” said Kevin. “Oh, well, hi there.
I’m Kevin, and you are...?”
“Hi, Kevin. I’m Kat and this is my sister Brooke,” I said to Mr. Body
Beautiful. Howie followed behind.
“Hey girls. I’m Howie. What’s up?” I shook hands with Sweet D., and my
sister followed suit eveb as she
and AJ continued to glance at each other.
“So, how are we gonna get outta here?” I asked the guys.
“Well, we could try the way we came in, but I think it’s blocked off,”
said Kevin.
“I guess we’ll just have to walk to the exit then,” said AJ. “It’s our
only way out.”
“Alllllll righty then!” said Brian, imitating Ace Ventura.
“Wait a minute. You mean we have to walk through the mansion to get to
the exit?” I said.
“Oh, it’s ok. Hey, since you and I both hate the dark, you can walk next
to me,” said Nick. “I’ll hold you
close.”
Nick put my hand in his, and we began to make our way through the
mansion. Our group of seven followed
the cars’ tracks, hoping to find a way out very soon.
“I really don’t like this,” my sister said. I turned around to look at
her, only to find AJ pull her close.
“It’s all right, baby,” I heard him say.
We finally came upon the last car....and still no exit.
“It shouldn’t be too hard to find our way out from here,” said Brian.
“This is the end of the ride.”
We continued walking.....then......the lights and all the mechanics shut
down.
“AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!” I screamed, my eyes welling up with tears. “Brooke,
I hate this!”
“Sweetie, it’s okay,” I heard Nick say. I couldn’t see him, but I knew
he was there. I felt him wrap his arm
tightly around my shoulder, and I responded by hugging his waist.
The lights then came back on, and we breathed sighs of relief. We still
hadn’t found our way out, but at
least now we could see again.
“Hey, we haven’t tried this hallway,” I heard Kevin say. I looked up and
saw a sign with bright red letters
spelling out a relieving word: EXIT.
“Whew. Thank goodness,” I heard Brooke say.
We stepped outside as dusk began to fall. I could barely see the moon,
and the sun was beginning to set in
the West.
“Hey, what are you girls doing the rest of the day?” asked AJ.
“Well, we’ve been here since 10 a.m., so I was planning on us going back
to the hotel and resting up before
dinner,” said Brooke.
“How about we treat you girls to dinner?” he said.
My sister melted at the invitation, and I grinned at Nick. He winked at
me with his shimmering blue eyes.
Part 2