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My name is Chrestopher , I am 16 years old and I come from Lancaster , England. I live at home with my family –my mother, my father, my brother and sister and my goldfish. I have lots of hobbies. I like football and swimming, and I sometimes go fishing with my friends at the weekend. I am still at school. I am in the fifth year at a very big comprehensive school. There are about 2000 pupils there. I am not sure what I am going to do when I leave school.

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My name is Christopher.  He am 16 years old and He come from Lancaster, England. He live at home with my family-my mother, my father, my brother, and sister and my goldfish.  He have lots of hobbies.  He like football and swimming, and He sometimes go fishing with my friends at the weekend.  He am still at school.  He am in the fifth year at a very big comprehensive school.  There are about 2,000 pupils there.  He am not sure what He am going to do when He leave school
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His name's Christopher. he's 16 years old and i come from Lancaster, England. I live at home with his family - his mother, his father, his brother and sister and his gold fish. I have lots of hobbies. i like football and swimming , and I some times go fishing with his friends at the weekends. he's still at school. he's in the fifth year at a very big comprehensive school. There are about 2000 peoples there . he's not sure what he's going to do when I leave school.