My name^,s christopher. I^,m 16 years old and I come from Lancaster,

England. I live at home with my family_ my mother, my father, my brother

And sister and my goldfish. I have lots of hobbies. I like football and

Swimming, and I sometimes go fishing with my friends at the weekend. I^,m

Still at school. I^,m in the fifth year at a very big comprehensive school.

There are about 2,000 pupils there. I^,m not sure what I^,m going to do when

I leave school.

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 his name^,s christopher. He^,s 16 years old and he come from Lancaster,

England. he lives at home with his family_ his mother, his father, his brother

And sister and his goldfish. he has lots of hobbies. he likes football and

Swimming, and he sometimes goes fishing with his friends at the weekend. He^,s

Still at school. He^,s in the fifth year at a very big comprehensive school.

There are about 2,000 pupils there. He^,s not sure what he^,s going to do when