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 first draft

My name's Christopher. I'm 16 years old and I com from Lancaster,

England.  I live at home with my family- my mother, my father, my brother

and my sister and my goldfish. I have lots of hobbies. I like football and

swimming, and I sometimes go fishing with my friends at the weekend. I'm

still at school. I'm in the fifth year at a very big comprehensive school.

There are about 2,000 pupils there. I'm not sure what I'm going to do when

I leave school.

 Second draft

His name's Christopher. He is 16 years old and He comes from Lancaster,

England.  He lives at his home with his family- his mother, his father, his brother

and his sister and his goldfish. He has lots of hobbies. He likes football and

swimming, and he sometimes goes fishing with His friends at the weekend. He

still at school. He is in the fifth year at a very big comprehensive school.

There are about 2,000 pupils there. He is not sure what he is going to do when

he leaves school.

Final draft

 His name's Naif. He is 23 years old and He comes from Albaha,

Saudi Arabia.  He lives at his home with his family- his mother, his father, his brother

and his sister and his goldfish. He has lots of hobbies. He likes football and

Writing poems, and he sometimes goes shopping with His friends at the weekend. He

still at college. He is in the fourth year at a very big comprehensive college.

There are about 2,500 students there. He is not sure what he is going to do when

he leaves college.