my name's Christopher. I am 16 years old and I come from Lancaster, England. I live at home with my family -my father ,my mother, my brother ,and sister and my gold fish .I have lots of hobbies. I like football and swimming, and I sometimes go fishing with my friends at the weekend .I'm still at school. I'm in the fifth year at a very big comprehensive school. There are about 2,000 pupils there . I'm going to do when I leave school.

Instructor: Denis Hobby                                                                                                                                

First we show the student the original and he goes to Find and Replace with word and it comes out like below:

my name's Christopher. He am 16 years old and He come from

Lancaster, England. He live at home with my family -my father ,my mother, my brother ,and sister and my gold fish .I have lots of hobbies. He like football and swimming, and He sometimes go fishing with my friends at the weekend .I'm still at school. I'm in the fifth year at a very big comprehensive school. There are about 2,000 pupils there . I'm going to do when He leave school.

Instructor: Denis Hobby                                                                                                                               Then the teacher instructs the student to fix up the verbs and change them to the third person

my name's Christopher. He am 16 years old and He come from

Lancaster, England. He lives at home with my family -my father ,my mother, my brother ,and sister and my gold fish .He has lots of hobbies. He likes football and swimming, and He sometimes goes fishing with my friends at the weekend .He is

 still at school. HE is in the fifth year at a very big comprehensive school. There are about 2,000 pupils there . He does not know what he is  going to do when He leaves school.