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Unspoken Words
I just wanted to say that, that was a great story i usually dont read short stories, but that one was the best i've read
by far. keep up the good work :)
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hey!
I just thought I'd say that your short story "Unspoken Words" was
very good. A letter such as that was a great basis for a short story,
and the ending was tragic. You ought to write a couple more short
stories so I have something else to read when I don't have much time
left on the Net! ;-) Until then, I'm going off to start "The Night
That Changed My Life." c-ya!!
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unspoken words, i felt was very well done. it had all of the
things i feel make a good story; conviction, mystery, and a sad twist.
i would have like it if i were longer, but oh well! kudos! and hurry up
and finish penny for ur thoughts! its gettin good! ;) *MUAH!*
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The Night That Changed My Life
Penny For Your Thoughts
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unspoken words, i felt was very well done. it had all of the
things i feel make a good story; conviction, mystery, and a sad twist.
i would have like it if i were longer, but oh well! kudos! and hurry up
and finish penny for ur thoughts! its gettin good! ;) *MUAH!*
This was sent to me from Apple.
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