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This is a story I wrote during last summer. It's pretty good, but, it just depends how you read it.
Hope you enjoy it :)(:
It was a dark and rainy night. Thursdays always suck. Nothing on television, loads of
homework while the weekend approaches.
Sparky is doing his English, watching TV, and talking to his girlfriend Helen. “ I hate English. It’s so boring” says Sparky. He hangs up the phone with Helen because it’s getting late.
It’s about 10:00. ER is coming on, and Sparky’s English is almost complete. He tells his mom he needs a portable CD player for Friday. She is very upset. “ Why do you wait till the last minute” says Sparky’s mom. “ I’m so sick of you screaming at me all the time when I don’t even do anything wrong” says Sparky ferociously.
The argument lasted about 15 minutes. Sparky is all finished with his work. He gets ready for bed. Then he realizes his favorite show is on at 12:00. Sparky’s mom would never let him stay up that late. So he grabs his pillow and makes his way for the
living room.
Then his mom is yelling at him because it’s sooo late. She nags way too much. He really wants to watch that show. Sparky is really cold because his mom has the air conditioner on.
His mom starts to fall asleep. He tells her it’s midnight ( which it’s only 11:00 ). She goes to bed and the stalker show is coming on. Sparky loves this show even though it’s on really late. He has nightmares when he watches it.
It approaches midnight and the show starts. As soon as it starts getting scary, a big bang of thunder startles him. He gets up and looks out the window. He is very scared.
No one is out there. Sparky sits back down. This guy has stabbed this little boy in the back of his head. “ That’s disgusting”. then when the stalker pulls his arms up again to attack, Sparky’s brother comes down the stairs yelling and scares the crap out of Sparky.
“ I finally got you. Ha, ha, ha.” Wilbur laughs hysterically. “ You know Wilbur, that wasn’t funny. I’ll get you back” says Sparky.
“ Sure you will” says Wilbur.
Sparky settles down once again for the second time. The show is almost over and Sparky gets the blanket out. Puts it on the couch, turns off the lights, and gets ready to sleep.
Sparky is really tired. He can’t wait till tomorrow. It’s the Prom and Sparky is going with Helen. They both are excited.
Sparky closes his eyes for a few minutes and when he opened them back up, he hears a big bang from Wilbur’s room. He thinks of it as nothing. Closes his eyes again and realizes he is thirsty. So he gets up and walks to the kitchen. Opens the cupboard,
takes a green cup, and fills it with caffeine free diet Coke, finishes it and puts it in the dishwasher.
Sparky tries to look out the window but can’t because the light is on. He turns it off and sees a man dressed in black staring at him. Sparky yells really loud. He runs upstairs to his bedroom, opens the door, and finds his brother on the floor covered with blood. Wilbur’s arm is on the other side of the room.
“ Ohh my gosh. Wilbur, what happened to you??” says Sparky crying. Wilbur’s head plops to the floor and his heart stops beating. He runs down the hall into his moms room and finds the man dressed in black trying to kill his mother. “Mom!! No!!” She
tries to get up but he keeps pushing her down.
Sparky builds up the nerve and runs down to the kitchen, and grabs a knife. While running up the stairs, he falls and stabs himself in the chest. “Oh Crap. That one really hurt.” Sparky hurries up the steps and the man turns around. His mother jumps out of bed, climbs to the window, and jumps out and plummets to her death. Sparky then stabs the man in his stomach. He falls down and Sparky climbs out onto the roof. He looks down into his neighbors yard and the man is staring at him.
Sparky is very scared. He hops around the roof and slips his foot and scratches his upper arms. He notices that the man is trying to climb up the ladder against the house. So knowing that he is on the ladder he crawls into the third story bathroom.
Sparky then scratches his leg on the window seal. He runs through the house, closing all the windows and doors.
Sparky then runs out the bathroom and to the Master Bedroom. No one slept in that room because their cat Girdie died. He locks himself in closet.
Sparky makes sure he is totally quiet so he can hear any noise that may make in his house. He notices that the window is not closed. He feels the breeze under the door. Then, Sparky hears a loud creak down the hall and then heard something run into the other bedroom which lay on the other side of the wall.
Sparky was shaking like crazy. He was terribly afraid. He sits his butt down because his legs hurt. The man punches through the wall and grabs Sparky.
Sparky looks at him and runs out the closet, through the arc shaped door, sees him walking slowly at Sparky. “Why are you doing this to me?”
Sparky speeds up and so does the man. Down the stairs and through the kitchen. Grabs a knife off the counter; realizes he is much safer in there. He opens up one of the empty cupboards in the island in the center of the kitchen. It faces the entrance into the kitchen, so Sparky can see when the man comes in.
So, Sparky sees the shadow coming toward the kitchen. He backs up more in the island. He hits a metal spoon on the door. The man hears it. He turns his head to the island. he walks toward it and does not even open the door.
Sparky, scared as it is, panics by chattering his teeth. Once again, the man hears it but this time, Sparky hears him going up the other steps on the left wing of the house. He opens the kitchen door which leads into the back deck.
Sparky glances down and notices that the deck is not very high. He then grabs the pool cleaning rod which has a hook at the end. He attaches the hook to the trampoline and pulls it toward him. He stands on the railing, jumps on the trampoline which flies him very high in the air. He lands in the swimming pool unintentionally, but just made it. The water is very frigid. Sparky pulls his head above the surface and saw the man staring at him through the kitchen window. Then, he walks away nonchalantly.
Sparky jumps out of the pool, and heads for the gate at the beginning of the mansion. The button to open the gate was locked by the man inside.
So he turns around and heads back for the trampoline. He remembers that the whole trampoline is on top of dirt, so he then realizes since it is dark outside, then man will not be able to see him.
He flung himself under it and was breathing very hard. Sparky was not sure where the man was in the house. All the running through the night mad him tired, but contemplating whether to fall asleep or not. But, he decides to.
The next morning, he realized that he missed school. So, he walks to the gate and remembers that it is locked. Sparky walks all the way back to the trampoline and pulls it to the wall and bounces on top of it, jumps down, and out to the neighbors home.
Approaches the door, and rings the doorbell.
“Hi Sparky!! How can I help you?” said Mrs. Pinchot. “I was nearly killed last night. I was in the kitchen, and all I know when I look out the window, this guy is staring at me. He already killed Wilbur and my mother, and almost fileted me.” said Sparky out of breath.
“ Come on in. Make yourself at home.” Mrs. Pinchot’s daughter, Breanna, comes walking down the stairs. “ Hey Sparky. What’s up” says Breanna. Sparky tells her the whole story. She was crying very hard. Breanna was Wilbur’s girlfriend. “ Who did this?” “ Well, I’m not to sure. He was dresses in a very dark black outfit that blended really good with the sky” says Sparky.
“We’ve got to find out who did this” says Breanna. Mrs. Pinchot calls the police to search the mansion. They wait outside on the driveway. They police come within three minutes of the call.
“Okay. Let’s go take a look around the house” says Officer Dank. They open the gate and proceed to the house. Officer Dank pulls out his gun and opens the door. He saw things all knocked over and furniture ripped.
They inspect all the downstairs including the closets and underneath the Queen Ann Chairs. They start to walk up the stairs. They all get worried. Sparky grabs onto Breanna.
“Wow Sparky!! Nice Grip” says Breanna shocked. Everyone walks to the top of the steps only to see blood on the walls. Sparky guides them into his room, where his brother was killed. Wilbur, lying there with bugs on him eating his inside (Yuck), disgust everyone.
“ Yuck. I can’t stay in this room any longer. It is grossing me out” says Mrs.Pinchot. Dank opens the closet and nothing is there. “Phew” sighed everyone.
Mrs.Pinchot walked down the stairs, not only to find she was not alone. A noise creaked behind the bookshelf. She wanted to have nothing to do with this. Everyone upstairs was waiting for her to open the door. They hear it. Sparky walks out into the
hall, then into the gallery that overlooks the gate. He watches her go out the gate and as he was walking away, out of the corner of his eye, low and behold, the man in black grabs Mrs.Pinchot, and due’s away with her.
Sparky screams loudly, but no on e replied. As he runs back into Wilbur’s room, they are all bloody, except Breanna. She was not there. Sparky cried because he was all alone. His family is dead, mommy and her traumatized life full of disappointment from her children only wanting them to put their dishes in the dishwasher, jumped out of the 3rd story window. Mrs.Pinchot was obducted by “The Man”, Officer Dank was gored, and who knows what happened to Breanna. Sparky was now preturbated. The man has
gone way too far.
Sparky runs downstairs with his trusty chemistry set to make a concoction to throw at The Man’s eyes. As he was setting up, nonetheless, a loud noise brewed upstairs. Sparky had to act fast. He threw a bunch of chemicals together, and hid under
the Grand Foyer staircase. He heard him coming and as the second to the last stair creaked, he got up and threw it to eye level. Bad news. It was Breanna.
Luckily; it missed her. “Phew”!! Thank gawd you are here” says Sparky. “Where were you”? “I was upstairs and I saw the door crack open. Someone’s fingers were in the door but I was not sure if they were yours or not. So I grabbed your keyboard and threw it al the door to smash his fingers. I ran into the closet. I heard him butcher Dank and when he came into the closet, I thought I was a goner, but when you screamed, he went out the room. Then I guess you came in, and I thought you were him” says Breanna exhaustedly.
Sparky hugs her and they run out of the house. “There you are precious” says Mr. Man. They try and slam the door, but they were not to successful. He was. Sparky and Breanna got split up. She went into the basement and Sparky went into the kitchen. Mr. Man grabs Sparky, Breanna alert, runs back upstairs only to see Mr.Man kill Sparky.
Breanna caterwauled and punches him in the face. Opens the Cedar door and runs to her mother. She thought she was dead.
The End
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